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Just read it... GREAT JOB! It must have taken a while to rewrite the game's script, but you really did well.
I would like to make a few suggestions:
Thus far, the events of the games have unfolded as they actually do in the series. But I think you should take Aqua's involvement further. I think she should alter things severely.
Aqua's an incredibly brilliant Keyblade Master. You've shown this in your story... which makes sense for her taking things further. I think that if she WAS in the series at this point, she'd come up with a different plan for fighting the organization.
Also, it isn't necessary to have ALL the KH2 worlds in your story. Just pick the ones YOU want. Sora wasn't even locking the keyholes to world hearts in KH2 anyway... he was just opening pathways to new worlds.
Anyway, love your writing and creativity, and I'm happily anticipating the continuation of this saga.