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Noice, dude.
But I saw a major problem- jumping at an angle will never work! If you leave the ground at 60 mph, and the psi of gravity is twenty tons, and you have a jet pack, then you should be able to reach the airship with no problem.
Problem solved.
Now update.
Not bad at all, even for a beginner. I don't think I saw any spelling or grammar mistakes, but make sure to check and re-check every chapter before posting them. And that's pretty much it. Post more soon. :D
Um. Huh. I agree with you on most of the post, BUT.
I do not love Amme, other than platonically, and like a sister. I love Krazy. She's so cool and hawt and... :]
-infatuated-
But Noe sure does need to updart this. If she really was "the Clam Whisperer", she would updart. ^-^
xDDD
"You can't kill a liar." ?
Rly now?
'Cause it seems to me that Pickle has pwned you to death on numerous occasions. But y'know, other than that litte fallacy, this is some pretty hardcore stuff. 'Specially like how you've got such terrible aim. Wonderful. ;D
Run.
Run like you've never ran before- like your life depended on it. Like this is your last chance, redemption is only a few feet away, if only you can make it...
Anthony's eyes flickered open, with blurred and distorted images greeting his consciousness for the first time in a year. How did...
xO
It's so crazy and pwnalicious. xOO Jeez. I smell an A+ from this one. Wish I could write oneshots that pwned this much. :/
Good job dude. xO
You should've finished this one.