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Saviors of Destiny
Chad’s Story
Chapter 1: Source of Power
Chad opened his eyes. He got up and looked around. Chad was a simple, sixteen year old teenager. He had green eyes and long, black hair that spiked a bit throughout. He was a Caucasian and had a small tan to his skin color. He was...
For those who have actually been reading my fanfic (first of all, I'd like to thank you), and wondering why this hasn't been updated, is because I'm taking a break for it. Hopefully I'll come back to it and finish it (I was probably only going to write 10-15 chapters anyway).
But the good news...
Nice job! :) I'm excited that they'll finally be going to the first Disney world. Some criticism; I noticed that some of the dialogue (especially at the end) was a little hard to follow since several characters were involved and talking at the same time and I didn't know exactly who was talking...
I actually wrote tonight. I haven't the past week (because of MvC3 :P) but I finished three pages of Chapter 5. So, still a long way to go but I'm liking the way this chapter is going so far :)
I love it so far! Suspense and tension builds up well and you are doing a nice job incorporating the characters into this situation. Also, the KH/Bioshock connection is working well so far. I can't really say anything bad about it aside from common grammar and puncuation mistakes. Nice job...
Here's Chapter Four!! Took me a while to get my connection back on. Enjoy :D
I started the first three pages of Chapter Five but unfortunately, I disliked where I was going with the chapter so I decided to start it over. So now I'm starting Chapter Five from scratch
I like it :) Nice job Eventua! Just to let you know, a lot of times throughout your writing, I noticed that "to" should be "too". Besides that, I don't have much criticism XD Keep up the good work :D
I'm not sure what you should do next but I think you should decide. You'd probably be a better...
I finished Chapter 4 but its on my main computer and I have no internet connection on it for the moment, so I'm going to wait until my dad fixes it tomorrow to post Chapter 4. In the meantime, I can get a head start on Chapter 5 though :D
Exciting twists in Chapter 4...thats all I can say for...
Like someone posted above, Nomura stated it in an interview that since time flows differently in the RoD, Aqua didn't experience the ten years that she has been in the RoD.
As for your second question, no, I would expect that nothing would change...
I don't think they will make a version for the PSP. Mostly because the 3D effects for the 3DS could make the PSP version look inferior although most fans probably won't care for the 3D effects and won't want to pay for the 3DS. Nintendo probably won't allow it though. So I only see this game...
I doubt he showed his true powers in BBS so as MX, he's probably still extremely strong. I think he may have the strength of Xemnas and Ansem SoD, but I don't think he will have their powers. While it is a possibility, I think MX will have his own moves. I'm sure he will match up to be worthy of...
Finally, without further ado, Chapter 3 :D
Took me a while to write this. Longest chapter so far...Hope you all enjoy!!
(Finally at the lesser stages of my sickness :cool:)