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Poetry ► A Series of Poems (2: Tragedy)



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SoulXaldin

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Tragedy, a ubiquitous thing
It happens to us lot of people
Be it minute or tragic
But one should fear tragedy
It may come and go
But the effects are everlasting
And the trigger: a glare

I want to get a little artsy, a little more vague and cryptic. It might be a little easy though, since I'm not the best at, well, doing cryptic things.
 

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This I can relate to because, sometimes tragic things do happen and it can turn your world completely upside down. Except you have to thrive and survive. That's why you got to treat life like it's precious, cause you never know when something bad will happen next. And this definitely felt a bit cryptic, cause it could mean a number of different things when you interpert it too. :) I'd say you've done quite well with this poem, and I'm greatly excited to see what's next! And I like how artsy and creative it is!
 
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