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Krazy

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{*~[___]Prologue ~ Part Three[___]~*}

"I'm sorry! I'm so, so sorry...."

"I must be a real oddity, then ... because I
can love."

"Who is ... Akxze?"

"Your face it haunts ... my once-pleasant dreams."


//Dawning Darkness\\

Feeling the darkness that had been consuming my very being subside, I dared to open my eyes, and realized I was on yet another platform, but, as before, it held the same image. My eye twitched in utter annoyance of this place as I climbed to me feet, idly brushing my black capris off---

Hold the phone....

I wasn't wearing this before.... Wasn't I wearing camo? For camo owns you lamers.

Instead, I bore a tanktop with a small ebony heart near the top right corner, the backround crimson red. Over the tank was a zippered, short-sleeved, black hoodie with red outlining and stitches. A black plastic chocker, made of intertwining designs of all sorts, rested on my neck, a small red heart in its center. My dark, red-highlighted, semi-curly hair was in a mid-height ponytail, and my bangs fell over my face, neatly framing it and not bothering my line of vision. Black denim capris with blood red stitches, and a crimson sash wrapped around my waist, hanging sideways off my hips. All-black, high-top Converse with blood red laces covered my feet and ankles, and I suddenly half-wondered why I was all...

Heartless-esque.

Pulling the single black batting glove farther onto my right hand, my eyes abruptly came across an elegant, pure white door. Turning so I was fully facing it, I tilted my to the side in confusion before slowly approaching it, ever-cautious. Reaching out my gloved hand to caress the door, I nearly tripped over my own feet when my hand went straight through. Without my call, the cobalt staff was suddenly back in my grasp. Lifting it up to eye level, I ran both my hands over it, for what reason, I still don't know.

Whatever I had done had apparently activated some... thing. The staff morphed into something different, something more... Dark. The handle was in the shape of an upside-down, crimson heart, and from that dangled a miniscule Heartless insignia: the Keychain. The shaft was pitch black, and metallic, blood red swirls circled it, all the way to the reversed, heart-shaped blade itself. Sharp, crimson edges were about the ends of the blade, clashing with the ebony heart. I reached a hand out to test the sharp, jagged teeth, immediately reeling my hand back with an unheard yelp when I felt its sharpness.

...I love this dream. So much.

On instict, I lifted my newly-forged weapon up towards the sky, facing the pearl white opening. An ebony beam of ... flame ... shot out from ... the darkness, and the door became solid, promptly creaking open. I cautiously stepped through until blinding light enveloped my form. When I opened my eyes again, bright sunlight shined in my eyes, and I brought up my arm to shield them. Daring to open my chocolate orbs once more, I saw the blade from before was gone. Blinking in confusion, I turned slowly, spying three of my close friends lingering near my---

School's courtyard...?

But ... wasn't I just ... on the....

Aw, screw it, best not to hurt myself.

Hold on. You can't close the door just yet. First, tell me more about yourself.

...But... I just OPENED a door....

What do you WANT from me?!

Right ... of COURSE you opened it. Keep on believin' that if it makes you feel better.

DIE!

Sighing in aggravation, I suddenly plastered on a grin to hide my obvious exasperation before approaching a girl with dark skin, onyx-colored hair, and ebony eyes. Well, they were dark brown, too, but they had always looked rather obsidian to me.

"Hi, Sabrina!" I greeted happily, effectively hiding my annoyance at the games that voice was playing with me.

"Hey, Megan. What's the most important thing to you?" She quired suddenly, and rather randomly if you ask me.

My eyes glazed over somewhat, and I lowered my eyes to the concrete ground, "Love...."

"Oh," She answered quietly in understanding.

I nodded slightly, then feigned happiness with another smile, trotting over to another of my friends, Kyle. Her dark, dark brown hair was in a low, messy ponytail. She also had dark skin, - but not as dark as Sabrina's - and chestnut eyes regarded me joyfully.

"Hi, Megan. So, uh, what do you want outta life?" She asked me, again seeming very random.

I cast my eyes down once more as they glazed over, gaining that familar 'love sick' sheen, "To be loved...."

"Huh," Kyle responded simply, not bothering to investigate further.

Again smiling and not really meaning it, I rushed away from Kyle and over to the last of my three friends, Rachael. I felt somewhat relieved at being forced to look UP at her. Even if she was only about a head taller than me, it was still a nice change. Short caramel hair put up in a minuscule ponytail, and narrow, hazel eyes from behind black-rimmed glasses greeted me.

I waved half-heartedly, and she abruptly asked,"What are you most afraid of?"

My eye twitched,"Being alone," I managed through tightly clenched teeth.

"You sounded emo just then."

Thanks so much.

"And spiders...." I added quietly, trying to redeem myself, but I doubt Rachael heard me.

Love is the most valuable possession to you.
You WANT to be loved.
And you're afraid of being lonely. And spiders. But I know that one.

... You have some issues, don't you?


I wrinkled my nose in some form of angered confusion. Intuition told me that voice wasn't meant to say things that held emotion. Especially sarcasm. The voice seemed to cough awkwardly as my vision was swamped by the familar, lusterless black.

Your journey begins at twilight. As long as you stay immersed in the coming darkness, your journey will be a pleasant one.

...Being in the dark will help me?

The day you will close the door is both far off and very near.

Make up yer damn mind.

The voice seemed to laugh at my angry expression.

If you look hard enough, you'll find me.

Huh? But ... I don't even know you....

'Who are you?'

\\ ~ //

Muffin Soldiers can guess who the Disembodied Voice is. Not that I'll tell you if you're right. >:3 I think I made him too mean to tell, though. xDD I MADE MY OWN OC OUT OF CHARACTER. I find that funny. xDD

I just gave it away, didn't I? o:​
 

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*falls off the chair laughing* O.O MY NAME IS KYLE!!! I'm a GUY, don't put in feme-friends who share my name, I get enought stick already! >_<

Great job, I LOVE the sarcastic voice! I just wonder why you are all dark in this one though when you were much more... twilight-ish in the original.
 

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I didn't mean it in a bad way, I was just a bit shocked is all.

And I know what will happen soon when you wake up soon to see Sora so I might as well pe-empt it... *glomps Krazy* o_O I probably shouldn't have done that... *runs away*
 

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....I really have to learn to actually go to the fanfiction sections and not just my user CP -_- Awesome updarts Krazy, this brings back the old AiL days...good times...good times.

Seems like somebody is fancying the dark quite to some extent.

*glances at Dark*...Down boy >_>

Dark:...i_i
 

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{*~[___]Prologue ~ Part Four[___]~*}

"I never meant to be a murderer...."

"And do you know who I love?"

"I'll be here for you in the Darkness."

"I'd give my soul for you, I know."


//Dawning Darkness\\

I knew it.... I was back on a platform, and, as before, IT WAS EXACTLY THE SAME. That was starting to piss me off. I stomped towards the center of the cylindrical surface until half a dozen of the Nobodies from before abruptly rose up from the illustrious stained glass's edges, crawling around like ants or some other pest, and they surrounded me once more. The familar ebony and crimson weapon appeared in my hand, and I bent into an attack position. Slashing at the nearest white creature, it swirled about in the air to dodge, and I tightly gritted my teeth, jabbing at the air with my blade and successfully stabbing the Nobody.

It desperately writhed and wiggled, and I somehow managed to keep my weapon lodged in its skull. Pinning the white creature to the ground with my foot, I viciously removing the blade, followed by a string of violent attacks to its torso. When the Nobody dispersed into pure white droplets and minuscule goldenrod orbs of unknown origin, I dashed away, slicing my weapon through another of the white creatures, and the teeth of my blade were conveniently interlocked with the creature's maw. Tearing off the Nobody's jaw profitably destroyed it, and I had half a mind to sympathize it.

That thought was immediately abandoned as another of the Nobodies slithered towards me, resembling a snake more than anything else. I held my weapon in a defensive position, again wishing for that shield I had neglected to choose. As the white creature edged closer, I narrowed my eyes in concentraction, wondering if the darkness liked me enough to assist me.

Apparently it did.

A barrier of darkness rose up between myself and the incoming white creature, and it unceremoniously slammed into the obsidian safeguard, sending pitiful ripples through the liquid-like security; the Nobody was annihilated on contact with the shield I had somehow managed to hopelessly create. The remaining three white creatures were slowly advancing and closing in on my barrier, flipping, twirling, twisting, waiting patiently for it to subside. I watched the Nobodies warily, not knowing when the barrier would---

I screamed in surprise - again, noiselessly - as the shield abruptly exploded, sending shimmering shards of darkness at the Nobodies, obliterating them. Blinking in uncomprehension, I cautiously stepped forward, causing a circle of neon green light to appear beneath my feet. It shimmered brilliantly, and my minor wounds closed up painlessly, also ceasing the stinging they had caused. I sighed deeply, collapsing on the stained glass in exhaustion and willed my weapon to disappear, relieved that the white creatures were gone.

For now.

I watched the glistening, emerald circlet of light make its way to the platform's edge, ascending through the ebony abyss and leaving an iridescent staircase of stained glass in its wake.

Damn, I hafta get up and do physical activity again.

Scowling, I made my way to the steps, testing out the first one to be sure it wouldn't crack under my weight before doggedly climbing up the opalescent staircase, two at a time, and nearly tripping at the final step. Finally reaching the platform,---

IT WAS STILL THE SAME AS THE FIRST ONE.

---I took a few seconds to catch my breath.

Stairs. Probably one of the most tiring things in the universe.

Now able to breathe again, I stepped towards the center of the stained glass, casting my eyes about cautiously. The world around me abruptly shook violently, like an earthquake, and I hit the stained glass, biting back a pained yelp. I jumped nimbly to my feet, whirling around to find the force behind the deep rumble. My chocolate eyes grew considerably wider, and I let out an unheard whimper as I gazed upon my adversary.

Twilight Thorn. Or, in your oh-so-eloquent words, the ginormous Nobody.

Gee, thanks.

My breath caught in my throat, and, while attempting to breathe again, I began slowly backing away from the Nobody, absolutely terrified. When my lungs finally allowed oxygen to enter, my breath came in ragged, difficult gasps. Wheeling around, I was about to run, but came face to face with that opaque abyss, and I actually gulped. Craning my neck, I saw the Nobody approaching me, and I rested my gaze back on the darkness before me.

It was only ... darkness.... It can't all be bad....

-But don't be afraid.

I didn't say I was. And I'm not. At least not of the Darkness. But ... that Nobody is a completely different matter. Putting on a determined face, I turned back to the huge white creature, trying to glare at it and utterly failing.

You hold the mightiest weapon of all, even if there's more than one. But I'm sure the ________ ___ will fix that right up.

'Quit babbling!'

Regulating my breathing, I suddenly changed my menacing scowl into a bright smile, and waved at the oversized Nobody before me in adieu. It cocked its scarfed head to the side at me in obvious confusion.

So don't forget:

I stepped off the platform, and its lucious stained glass whizzed past me, all the colors mixing until they were nothing but an opalescent blur. Soon, I was past the platform's end, sprawling into the pitch blackness, and my eyes slowly shut. I was just.... Falling through the dark. And it didn't bother me....

You are the one who will close the Door to Darkness.

My eyes snapped back open at that, but still darkness clouded vision,'Uh!?'

...Huh. Is that where I got my brain? Gee, thanks.

...You're ... welcome?

\\ ~ //

J00 SHOULD KNOW OF ZEH VOICE. D:<​
 

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XDDDD It's Aozo-kun! Don't blame your momma Aozora, blame Daisuke! Or even better, blame your great grandpa! Awesome updart, it was just what I needed while waiting for my DNAngel episodes to load on to my iPod ^_^! The violence and adjectives were superb, and it was still as hilarious as ever!

Even Dark enjoyed it o_o...I think Krad enjoyed it a little too much considering he keeps whacking his shadow with a bat...
 

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-stares blankly at active user box- There's a Mod on my thread. .___."

QUICK. ACT NATURAL.

...-chucks knives at Sora's head-

I like adjectives. <33 And Aozo-kun. Even though he's mean to his mommy.

[/end spoilers]

We're so smart, SA. xD;

EDIT: THEY'RE GONE NOW, BUT I KNOW THEY WERE THERE.

-shifty eyes-
 

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Haha, of course we know where that voice came from. xD

Aozora's narrating for you? Great. I wasn't able to fill in the blanks though.

Did the Nobodies steal the words? o.o No, I'm joking.

You have SERIOUS Darkness issues. In case I haven't expressed that enough.

That's good then. It means I don't have to pay the electric bills for your side of the gutter. =D *unscrews lightbulb* Now it's nice and dark in your corner.
 

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o_O I'm not sure I like K_K all dark... It was much funnier when she was all flippant and kewl ^_^

Still good chapters, just not as spazzy as your old ones. SINCE WHEN DID AOZORA NARRATE? AND WHO THE HELL IS HE ANYWAY?!
 

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If you truly want to know who Aozora is, highlight this next sentence so I don't spoil it for new readers. You should know since you read HOFAH.

Aozora is Meganm's son, and his father is Ketso, Pickle's OC

There. Welcome to the happy, land of Darkness K_K! Where the bishies are hot and there are free cinnamon buns! *eats cinnabon* Now if only I could convice Kraddu to wear a butler's outfit and serve me junk food...
 

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I update! Just not on a regular basis...

I feel like a right moron now, I realised who Aozora was about ten seconds after I last posted >_<

I will not respect your authority, K_K! Instead I shall blackmail choo! *pulls cord to open curtains that reveal Kaze gagged and tied to a chair over a pool of ravanous goldfish!*

... THEY'RE PIRANAHS DAMIT! Update now or zeh bishe gets it!! >=D (what's 'bishe' mean anyhow?)
 
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