Fanfiction ► Beginning of Destiny

[Merlin326]

""“And like I said, the first taste never hurts anybody, but the second one, people usually regret, so just be careful not to bite into—“

But her warning was too late, as Buddy had taken a big chomp out of the ice cream ball in his exuberance, wanting more of that amazing taste.

”B-B-B-B-BRAIN FREEZE!!!” The Youth hollered, clutching his head as his mind started to feel like a thousand ice sickles were prodding the inside of his cranium.""

probably my favorite part of this fic. yet so true (i have enough exp on the subject with vanilla milkshakes).

yet another masterful chapter in a masterful fanfic.

with all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[Nojerom]

yeah pretty much what Merlin just said.
i like the way you tied in Fuu with this whole thing.
sweet thinking, Matt.

 

[blendedhearts]

good chapter. it's nice to return to buddy's story, and like Merlin and nojerom, i loved the thing about the ice cream. one question though; why are you showing him as an accidental pervert?

 

[Athel]

Great chap, Matt. You seem to enjoy Roxas enduring embarrassment. Anyway, great job.

Btw, I'm pretty sure that Roxas' jacket doesn't have a hood.

 

[Ban Mido]

Great chap, Matt. You seem to enjoy Roxas enduring embarrassment. Anyway, great job.

Btw, I'm pretty sure that Roxas' jacket doesn't have a hood.

Think of it as a personalized modification.


@Blendedhearts: Inept, not perverted. There's a difference. Besides, it's not like he saw anything.

 

[blendedhearts]

@Blendedhearts: Inept, not perverted. There's a difference. Besides, it's not like he saw anything.

i said accidental. as in he seems to be one to everybody, except hes not.

 

[roxasfire]

great fanfic, i like how u make fun of roxas at times; its hilarious

 

[iloveyou502]

That was a great chapter, i like fuu. Oh sorry i havent been commenting I haven't even been on khi all that much. but i'm caught up now. mostly.

 

[R0ad H0g]

Good chapters! I cannot wait for the next one. The ice cream incident was my favorite part!

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

That's what I call a real fic. Man, I forgot the last time that I read something so good like this fic. Keep up the good work, man.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

a new reader, matt will be pleased to see that, have you read them all my friend?
he's good right?

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

a new reader, matt will be pleased to see that, have you read them all my friend?
he's good right?

Yes, I've read all the fic from the beggining(You might not believe it but i took me only two days to read all the pages). Man, I wish I was half of he is in writing...

 

[Nelo Angelo]

very impressive, glad you caught up. matt will be updating soon, he's been busy at the moment.
dont worry my friend you need any pointers matt will gladly help. just PM him.

 

[Ban Mido]

I'm always happy to have a new reader!! Welcome! and thanks for the compliments!:blush:

And nelo's right. I will be updating soon. I haven't really been working on the fic the last couple weeks because I wasn't feeling well, but I'm feeling better, and am thinking I'll have chapter 19 up sometime this week.

 

[Merlin326]

glad you're feeling better allstar. i was starting to wonder where you were off to. hope to see the next chapter soon. until then.

with all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[blendedhearts]

yay, new chapter coming soon! i'm glad to read you're feeling better, though i didn't even know you were sick. oh, and welcome to the fic, HF.

 

[Ban Mido]

glad you're feeling better allstar. i was starting to wonder where you were off to. hope to see the next chapter soon. until then.

with all due respect,
Merlin326

Partially me feeling like crap, partially me working at a theatre. It's been taking up a lot of my time and energy. I'll be going on School leave next week, so that 'll free me up some.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

good to hear your better my friend. we shall eagerly be awaiting the next installment.

 

[Roxi-chan]

Yay! I'm glad you're feeling better, Mattie!
^_^

 

[Ban Mido]

Hey all. A bit of bad news. My Laptop, which had the latest version of BoD on it, is acting up, so there's gonna be a delay. It's only an incomplete chapter ninteen thats in trouble, since I have the rest of the chapters backed up on a CD.

So there's gonna be a delay. Sorry.