Fanfiction ► BHK Fanfic

[blobbity]

i really like where its goin...keep it up, dont make it crap!

Yeah hey Kingdom Clasm, i havent heard from u aswell lately. im a bit upset im not on ur buddy list, after all ur on mine

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

OMG! I totally forgot! I was so caught up in everyting! Ya know, my fanfic, all teh rps I'm in, and all teh other fics I'm reading! Plus this week has been totally crazy! not to metnion I just started my buddy list this week! I will put you on ASAP! I'm so sorry! I just totally forgot!
that reminds me that I have other people to put on too! Again, I'm so very sorry! I'm puttin' ya on right now! After all, we are friends!

 

[Winged Mirage]

I'm running out of room in my sig, so if you're not on my buddy list it's because I ran out of room. lol

 

[KHDRUMMER]

Chapter 10

"Okay. I'll do it. I'll help you. Where do we start."
"Good. We first need to go pick up a friend. He's by the bridge." With that Blind got up and started walking towards the docks. He walked up to a short cloaked figure.
"Hi. Who are you?" BHK asked.
"This is King Mickey. He will assist us along the way. Now to the location of the first rift. See that island out there?" Blind pointed out to a faroff island. "That's where we start."
Blind walked to a boat and got on. The other two followed.

They sped across the waters to the island and landed at the dock. No ones ever been on this island for years. Its a nice quiet spot." Blind walked on the beach around the main rock in the middle. He was followed by the others but stopped right before the other side. He backed away as a huge heartless covered the beach. It was protecting a portal. The closer the three got to the portal the more they were pulled to the ground. The gravity was crushing them.

They all drew their blades and walked up behind the heartless. It automatically spun around and hit them across the beach and hit the wall. It shot giant dark balls of energy at them. BHK blocked the energywave and sliced at the beast. It roared and smashed him inot the ground. He leapt onto its head and stabbed it. It roared again. This time it threw him off and he landed in the water.

Blind attacked the portal. It split in half into two more. He knew this wouldn't work so he attacked the beast. It grabbed him and threw him into the portal. He vanished. Mickey attacked the monster in rage but was easily grabbed up and thrown in the portal. BHK got up and ran at the monster. it swiped at him but a figure appeared. A short boy about 16 sliced the beasts arm off with his sword. The boy was flung into the portal by the portals own will.

"I'm the only one left." BHK thought. He lifted his blade and shouted "Twilight Awakening!" A huge energy blast shot out of the sword and hit the darkness. It parted into a million tiny peices and engulfed BHK. He shouted in horror and was pulled into the portal.

 

[Winged Mirage]

Whoa that's not good O_O

Yeah, this chapter was much more exciting than the last one. Wonder where they all end up?

 

[KHDRUMMER]

are you stalking this thread? ... just kidding! thanx for replying! where will they end up next? no really. where. i don't know. the twist will be in the next chapter. THIS WILL BE THE BIGGEST MOST UNSESPECTED TWIST THE WORLD HAS EVER KNOWN IN THE NEXT POST. i hope. it will be odd. really odd. CAN"T WAIT!

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

Cool! totally awesome!
Although it was kinda wierd and rushed, as a 16-year-old guy just suddenly "was there" without saying a word. and nobody even acknowledged him.
That's okay, though! It was still really exciting! And awesome! Can't wait for the twist!

P.S. You don't mind if I post the pros and cons of your fanfic, do you?

 

[KHDRUMMER]

no, i don't mind, here's the next part.

Chapter 10.5

The sixteen year old walked into the portal to find the others. He thought about his friend in the cloak and thought about how long ago it was since he had seen him.

He remembered when they had fought with wooden swords on the island not to far away from the one he had just left. He remembered his friends Riku and Kairi like he had just seen them yesterday. he knew he had to find them. because right now. He was all alone. He closed his eyes as he walked into the portal before it completely vanished due to the heartless that spawned it died.

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

That was wonderful! Wonder who he is?

Also, are the chapters gonna get longer? Cause no offense, but they're "freakishly short", and it'd make the story even better! (If there is, actually, a way to make it better than it already is!)

Also, just wanted to say that my "freakishly long" chapters are perfectly normal size in a fanfic. Your chapters are WAY WAY SMALL for a fanfic. That's okay, though! You still don't have to read them if you don't want too! I'm perfectly fine with that.


And I still LOVE your fic! It's fantastic!

 

[Winged Mirage]

Hey, that sounds like.....Sora

So he's an unknown now?

 

[KHDRUMMER]

yah. chapter 10.5 was just to introduce the 16 year old figure. The next chapter will be longer, (GRRRRR i'm mad at you KC) and better. And yes, i do take offense to have my posts be called "freakishly short" so plz stop.

 

[Winged Mirage]

It's okay. Just write at the pace you feel comfortable with.

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

I'm so sorry. I won't do it again. I was just emphasizing the "freakishly long" thing.
Please don't be mad at me. The people in my fic post the pros and cons too. I won't do it if it actually offends yo though for some reason.
But please keep in mind:
I LOVE your fanfic!
It's wonderful! Fantastic! Exciting! Fast-paced! Awesome! Excellent! Well-delivered! My kind of deal!
One of the best one's I am reading right now!
Yeah! BHK Fanfic all the way!
Post more sooooooon!

(Again, please don't be mad at me.
Just asking, but why are you?)

 

[mr.moozuls]

good story i loved it post more post more u should get this published!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Winged Mirage]

Well it's kinda hard to publish a fan fic based on something copyrighted

But anyways, eager for the next chapter and more Unknown Sora.

Unknown Sora. Pffft. How is Sora an Unknown?

lol

 

[KHDRUMMER]

*whisper, whisper* Sora just likes the big cape. lol

Sorry i've been gone for so long. I'll try to get a new chapter in sometime but i've had computer problems and school work. Next post nxt chapter

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

That's fine! I haven't postedthe next chapter to my story in a while either! I'll wait patiently, then!
(If that's possible!)

 

[Winged Mirage]

(runs around franticially)

I've been real busy too. But I'm getting up to speed now.

 

[KHDRUMMER]

Time for Chapter 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK, OK. This won't be that big of a twist but that's ok.

The four landed on a hard rocky cave. King Mickey, Blind, and BHK all landed in the middle of the cave. The sixteen year old figure who followed in after stayed in the corner. The three in the middle awoke.
"Whoa... what was that." BHK said. He looked around to see two people next to him. He got up in horror and ran three feet back.
"Who are you!" he said. The other two got up and looked at each other.
"Where am i?" the short, cloaked figure spoke as he stepped away.
"Wow. Do we know each other? You guys look familiar." the last one said with the blind fold in his hands said. He took it off because he couldn't see through it. The sixteen year old figure saw the man behind the mask and ran forward.
"Riku!" he said, "It's me Sora! Where have you been?" Sora patted the back of the one known as Riku.
"I don't know you." Riku said.
"Wow. I thought the whole amnesia thing would be gone in castle oblivion. Yes you do know me. I'm Sora. You're Riku. And you, " Sora said pointing to the short one, "are King Mickey. But I don't know you." Sora said pointing to the only other.
"I'm... a King?" the short one known as King Mickey said. "But what is this place."
"I know as much as you do. Well, actually. Never mind. By the way. If you don't know your name then I'll give you one." Sora said speaking to the only other in the room.
"I don't know who I am but you can only give me a name if it's good. That sounds weird to say but oh well. It sounds familiar."
Sora thought for a moment and said, "You shall be know as... as... I don't know." we'll ask the audience then come back to the story.

OOC=alright. Its time for you all to give me names for BHK. I need one quick before i can go on. That wasn't much of a twist, u know, with the amnesia, but still. I need names. Post names(s) on your posts so i can go on.

 

[Kingdom Clasm]

That was an awesome twist! I liked it!

Well..... I'm just saying names..... Kendall, Devin, Dustin, Tyler, Spader...... I don't know. I'll think of more! Ya don't have to go wtih these, I was just naming off some names! XD