Burnt Tower

[Nexolous]

A manip that I made:
http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/nexolous/BurntTower.png
and a crop made for SOTW on another forum.

 

[KeybladeLegacy5]

Thats pretty cool, but you should make the text more legible

 

[Teiku 5]

it seems like you went a little wild with the flames (the right side looks thrown together, but the left has nothing) but i like it a lot still.
only major problem is i had to strain to read the text.

i really like the contrast of the white tower and the red flames. it helps it stick out and look cool imo.

EDIT: as a tag, its good.

as a whole piece, its AWESOME.
a little scary...
but really cool.

only problem i see there would be the white stuff near the castle (is it supposed to be smoke?) looks a little weird and the random lighting on the left.

 

[Nexolous]

the white stuff on the right is actually stuff leftover from the background, there is a big piece of flame missing so its showing through.

 

[Deleted member 36435]

Change the colors around I bit. I knew it's on fire the orange just makes it look ugly. Try to add some cooler colors. Also, text needs to go.

 

[Ðari]

Text needs to go.
You blurred and should be ashamed of yourself >:C
/dontkillme.

Alright in all seriousness this is pretty adequate, just cant get over the look that its been slapped on. The tower on fire looks too artificial (oh hay, got that word from Sean ). This can potentially blend better, but because the tower is white, it looks too out of place.

I recommend burning and contributing some other warm colors. Its pretty monotone anyway, not always a bad thing.

 

[Pablo]

Those c4ds in the background kill it. It made something that could possibly look a bit professional look completely unprofessional. If you ask me, scratch them.