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Dancbanks

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Me:Wow. A long time since I updated this. It needs to be, and we need a new thread. So, here it is. The link to the old one is in my sig, kudos muchas gracias.
Dan,Ken: *Walk through door*
Dan: HEY! YAHOO! We're back.
Ken: *sighs, and whacks Dan on head* Yup. It's us.
Me: Okay, since I have a case, of, urm, writer's cramp....
Dan: *coughs*
Me:.... I'll let you decide what happens, first!

A: Raid the underworld.
B: Sneak in.
C: Bring a giant army.
 

Krazy

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Yay!! Randomness time!! ^-^

meh: I watched The Sixth Sense the other day; I had to pause it 19 times!! ^-^

Sora: You counted..? o_O

Aozora: Is that something to be proud of..? o_O

Kaze: To her it is. >_>

meh: It was awesome.....soooo awesome...*huggles Haley plushie* <3
 

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T4I: I've never seen that movie.................

Phil, Steve, Jimmy: o_O

T4I: WHAT?!-hey were's that new guy Fred?

Phil: move to France.

Steve: pitty.....anyway um......*hands Dancbanks a spark of inspiration* there ya go^^
 

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CCCCCCCCCCCCC!!!!!!!!!!!
We need violence!!!:D.And Here is a presssie for DD1!*gives a spark of inspiration(i read it all but wasnt registered)
*door opens and mystirous figure comes in
me:eep
???:Update or i kill this person
me:and that is
???:its you thickhead!
me:darn i knew there was a catch
 
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Dancbanks

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I is backeth. Sorry about longeth delayeth.... hereth. Prologue....eth. I write chapter latereth.
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Me: I can finally get down to WRITING! W00T!
Dan: YAHOO!
Ken: YEAH!
(Sorry this dosen't follow what you've chose yet, I'll do it after the prologue)
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DEEP DIVE: WHAT REALLY HAPPENED 2:prologue
Sora landed in a chasm lined with blue rocks. He could see many bodies roaming around.
There were pillars of flame all around the place, shooting out magma. Suddenly, somebody tapped Sora on the shoulder. He
turned around.
"So, we meet again, Sora." Said the man.
"Riku?" Replied Sora.
"No, not Riku. Riku's Clone." Muttered the Replica.
"Oh. What are you doing here? Where am I?"
"We are in the underworld. Here is where the bodies of the dead people go. The rest of them turn into heartless."
"How do you get out?" Said Sora.
"You can't. You either need permission from the big man himself...."
"Hades?"
The clone nodded.
"Yup. Or you can beat him in a battle...."
"Hahah. Good idea. I've beat hades before."
Sora ran off, towards an opening in the wall.
"Where are you going?" Shouting Replica.
Sora stopped for a while, then thought.
"....where my heart takes me." He said. He laughed and ran on. Riku ran after him.
"....uuh....uuuh....you....can...call...me....Rick...." Said Riku Replica inbetween breaths, "Short....for...Riku..."
"Urm, okay." Replied Sora. Suddenly, they were surrounded in a circle of flames. They lit up the blue cave walls, and reached up
to the rocky ceiling lined with Stalactites.
"Oh, I know this scene too well..." Muttered Sora, remembering his death.
Around a dozen heartless dropped down and launched themselves at the pair. Sora fended himself off with his keyblade, and hit
one upwards, impaling itself on the spike. Rick threw his Souleater past Sora destorying three in a row. He reapearred on the
other side of the heartless to catch it.
"Nice catch." Said Sora.
"Thanks." Replied Rick. He ran suicidally into a defender, and Sora backed him up by knocking it's shield to the side. Rick
dropped down, sword in hand, and destroyed the heartless. Suddenly, the flames dissapeared and the heartless retreated.
"What happened?" Shouted Sora. "Whoever did that, come out!"
"Relax." Muttered Rick. "It was just Hades. He was just testing you."
"Damn."
Sora looked around for an exit. He looked towards the right, when-
"Hey!" Said a voice in Sora's head.
"Who are you?" Thought Sora.
"I'm your heart, remember?"
"What?"
"Go to the left." Said the heart.
"Urm.. okay."
Sora started walking off, following his heart's intructions. Rick was confused, and wondered what was going on.
"Hey!" Said the heart again. (Remind you of anybody, Link? Stupid Navi.....)
"What now?" Thought Sora.
"I'm hungry." Said the heart.
"I thought you was a heart, not a stomach."
"Oh, carry on."
Sora saw a narrow path in front of him. He started walking on it, when Rick interrupted.
"Where are you going?" He said.
"Following my heart! Now come on!" Shouted Sora. Rick stopped for a while, then walked on.
All around the path was lava. Above them, magma was being exchanged from one pool to the other, as if by an invisible hand.
In front of Sora and Rick was a giant door. There was a keyhole at the bottom, and Sora placed his key in it, and opened it.
Inside, there was a blank room, with the same features as the last. And the one before it, and the one before that, too.
"Wow, this guy needs an interior decorator." Said Sora. Rick put his finger to his lips. Out of the shadows stepped a firey haired
menace.
"Hades." Said Sora.
"So, fancy seeing you here kid." Replied Hades. "Want a ticket out of here I guess?"
"Of course!" Shouted Rick.
"Oh, and the little clone of your little friend. How sweet. But, you'll have to go through me, first!" At this, Hades' hands lit up with
flames, and his hair turned red.
"To arms!" Shouted Sora.
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Me: Boohoo. I'll have to leave it at that, I'm afraid. Chappy 1 coming up... soon. I have a lot of time, as my internet is down,
as I am writing this.....
Dan, Ken: *Crying*
Me: Seeya in a while.
#################################THE NEXT DAY########################################
Me: *Yawn*
Dan: *drinks coffee and is super hyper and running around*
Ken: *eating cereal*
Me: So.... ready for chapter one, guys?
Dan: *nods really fast* YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
Ken: *whacks Dan on head* Sure.
Dan: *lying on floor knocked out*
Me: *Anime sweatdrop*
Dan: *twitch*
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CHAPTER 1: REVIVAL

There was a gust of wind. A lone stranger dropped from the blossoming oak tree onto the weathered pavement. He pulled his
hood down on his cloak to reveal silver hair, and vivid blue eyes. He walked up to a house. He put his hand on the door and
appeared on the other side, unscathed. He pulled a piece of paper from his pocket and placed it on a table. It read:

Dear Kairi,
This is Riku writing to you. I am sorry for what happened to Sora,
but I wish to repay my debts. Come to the Air-Docks tomorrow
at noon, sharp.
From,
Riku

The cloaked man raised his hood again, and dissapeared into thin air. Around 5 minutes later, dawn broke.
Ned was the first to wake up. He yawned and opened the curtains in his room. Kairi and the others were
staying in his house for a while. He ran downstairs and started up the coffee machine. As he turned, he noticed the note
out of the corner of his eye. He picked it up and read it. He dropped it on top of Kairi's face, who was lying on the couch.
She stirred and noticed the note. She briefly read it, then went into the kitchen to talk to Ned.
"What's all this about?" She yawned.
"No idea." Replied Ned. "Guess we better go, though."
"I suppose."
There was a rustle of leaves outside. Ned saw a figure, and told Kairi to wake the others. The figure was wielding a rapier,
and was dressed in black clothing, although not a cloak. As the others gathered, the figure appeared. Shaun yawned and
pulled out his weapon, and Goofy and Donald readied to fight. The figure raised his hand and lowered his mask.
"I wish you no harm." Said the person. It was a woman, with blonde hair, and vivid purple eyes. "I come to join you in your
fight to restore the chosen keyblader."
"Who has sent you?" Shouted Shaun, angry that a woman was a better sleath than he was.
"Nobody. I have come of my own will." After saying this, the woman dropped to her knees and bowed.
"My name is Angelica. I am not your average ninja, though. I have perfected my skills with a rapier."
She looked at Ned's blade.
"And not a Katana."
"So I see. My name is Ned. This is Shaun, Kairi, Donald and Goofy. We are honoured to have you join us."
"Thank you."
Shaun groaned, then grabbed a cup of coffee. He drank it furiously, then walked out of the room so fast, you
could have sworn he had dissapeared. Ned put away his sword, and grabbed a cup. He gave one to Angelica
then sat at the kitchen table. Donald and Goofy both sulked into their makeshift beds, and went back to sleep.
"What's up with them?" Said Angelica.
"Hm?" Replied Kairi. "They've been acting so depressed since Sora passed away...." Kairi grabbed a cup then ran into
the lounge to switch the tv on. Angelica sat down across from Ned and slurped her Coffee.
"So, where are you from?" Said Ned.
"Hollow Bastion."
"Really? So am I!"
"Wow." Said Angelica. "Howcome I didn't know you?"
"I have no idea. It might have been because of all the cafuffle around Ansem and the Darkness."
"Yup."
Ned poured the rest of his drink in the sink, then went into the lounge. Angelica followed, dazily.
Kairi sat on the floor watching Robot Rumble, and was muttering about "....Flames....Flames....."
Shaun was lounging on an armchair, which left the sofa to Angelica and Ned. After a while, Ned picked up the remote
and turned off the T.V.
"Training time." He said. Everybody moaned. He went upstairs and woke up Donald and Goofy, (Kairi heard something
about No games for a week)
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When 12 O'clock came, Everybody was at the docks, ready to invade.
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Okay, I lied... a bit... half of chappy one dere. Somebody post so I can.
 

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me: it doesnt matter. Well i guess u cant kill me person!
???:darn.well i know what to do!
me:what?
???:i have to say my name!
me:fine.
???:its Mike! a.k.a ???
me:eek:k then,oh and dancbanks where are the choices
Mike:we need choices!
 

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T4I:SORA DIED?!!?!!?!!

Steve: HE DIED?!?!?!?!

T4I & Steve: *start running around in circles ranting on about death, salami, and Sora*

Phil: *calmly walks up to Steve and slaps him in the face.*

Steve: *stops looking stunned*...........................................................
......................*10 minutes later* owwwwww......

Jimmy: SORA DIE?! BUT HE GREAT FISHY KING!!!!!!!!

T4I: *looks around* uh hey what happened to fred?

Jimmy: he go bye bye to paris.

T4I: *crosses arms looking upset* lucky.
 

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me:i need to see dd1 again
Mike:why
me:cuz i dunno the part when sora got *moves thumb over his neck
Mike:eek:h
me:and mike
Mike:hm
me:quit dancing the polka in the nude!
Mike:eek:hhh
 

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Phil: kay!! that's great!!!!!*is covering ears with hands*

T4I and Steve: *are still panicing about Sora n' stuff*

Jimmy: *is staring at a sign that says:

TUNA #1 FOOD SOLD ANYWHERE NOW 50% OFF*

Jimmy: *eye twitches* HENRY!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!

Phil:....anyway.....I'll just wait for more then....
 
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SZQ: This is a really good story
???: I agree
SZQ:Who the hell are you?
???: Shadow
SZQ: You mean Shadow the Hedgehog?
Shadow:That's right
SZQ:Why are you here?
Shadow:I was feeling lonely{mutters something about Maria}
SZQ: ........................Fine, you can stay, but you have to leave when this story is over.
Shadow:{sighs}Fine{makes his way towards the cheese curls}
SZQ: Don't touch my cheese curls fool!
Shadow: Sorry.

Keep writing!
 

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T4I: ....................................................................so where's that chapter you were talkin about at?

Phil: yeah?...........

Steve: *looking arund exspectantly*

Jimmy: *preocupied*

T4I: well I'll be here all day if you write anymore....
 
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