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Hello guys! This is my first FanFic here in like years. This is my own re-telling for the original Basically a Novelization of the serial with some new characters and story added to the mix. Basically an alternate universe. Hope you guys all like it!
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Eventually, both sides will tither utter annihilation upon each other. No distinct victor, no fallen loser. Eventually, these powerful entities shall both enter their own respective eternal slumber. Like a dying star emitting a final burst of light before imploding into darkness...
But from an another plane of existence... Far from the ensuing titanic battle between two deities, two beings watched on end as they peered from the other side... The birth of this new universe. Both silhouettes were rather displeased by the development of each passing moment.
-Male Voice-
"Arrgh... this is what happens when the scale of power is non-existent! Both supposed tips of that scale will destroy each other!"
-Female Voice-
"Ah but such is the universal law and flow of order. The when the medium is absent, they are fated to destroy each other in order to either destroy the universe itself or give way to a new life."
-Male Voice-
"I know... but its the waiting I can't stand. This is why I hate deities, they're always a pain in the neck."
-Female Voice-
"Please be more considerate with your words! You're acting like a petulant child again. Eternity is a luxury we have so we must see to this final stage of the cycle of birth of this universe."
Two figures beyond the universal boundary, a male and a female, spoke about these deities as if they were mere toddlers, and tools as means of an end. In actuality, they themselves transcend gods and goddesses. Beings that oversee the multiverse at it take shape and form, and overseeing each birth and death cycle of each universes in an infinite seas of dimensions and realities. They were both nowhere and everywhere at the same time, beings that exist beyond the realm of reasoning and beyond esoteric. They are to what the godheads called, the Celestial Beings.
-Male Voice-
"Say... Are you really gonna do it? I heard from the superiors, that the boss lady herself granted you the pass."
-Female Voice-
"I must. They themselves have foresaw the fragment to emerge here in this newborn universe."
-Male Voice-
"I see... So I guess I won't be seeing you around then."
-Female Voice-
"Yes. I'm sorry... such is duty. That is why I chose you to accompany me here before I enter."
-Male Voice-
"But if you enter, you won't be yourself anymore. Your memories, your identity and most of your powers erased until the fragment is procured."
-Female Voice-
"I know. I may have to live as a common human. But if I fail... then I'm not worthy--"
The male figure held his hand over the female figure before she could utter anymore word of self-deprecation. To her, she might be saying all this because of her strong sense of duty, but to him, it meant losing his friend, and he won't have it.
-Male Voice-
"Don't say that please. It's not like you to put yourself down like that."
-Female Voice-
"..."
-Male Voice-
"I am aware of the consequences if you fail. But do promise me one thing."
The male figure held both her shoulders, gazing upon her eyes lit with honest concern. She could only return the gaze with a sad one. But no matter what, sense of duty or not, she had to be strong... for her husband.
-Male Voice-
"--that you will do your best. One our daughter would be proud of. If you were to vanish into non-existence--DO NOT do so when you know you could have still done something to prevail. Now can I trust you?"
-Female Voice-
"...as you always can."
-Male Voice-
"That's my girl."
The two figures exchanged a warm embrace and a gesture of affection towards one another. For the first time in a long while the female figure smiled to the bottom of her heart, now finding the burning motivation to succeed. She may not remember it, after her entry but it was nice for something to hold on to.
As the two embraced, the battle between the two ruling deities has reached its end. With the Vile God and the Goddess finally dealing each other their final blow. As the life drained from the two deities, they both fell from the sea of stars to the ground beneath them.
-Female Voice-
"That's my queue."
-Male Voice-
"Right."
-Female Voice-
"Goodb--"
-Male Voice-
"No."
The male figure pulled her frame towards him and pressed his lips unto hers.
-Male Voice-
"I prefer... 'See you later'."
-Female Voice-
"Oh dear, always... you're always like this. Mhm~ alright. See you later."
Slightly flustered, the female figure gave him a light punch on the chest, like two flirting lovers at the prime of their relationship. With one final word of farewell, the male figure slowly let go of her hand and watched as his wife entered the passage towards the new universe. As the female figure's body slowly turn into a ball of light, she lightly blew her husband a farewell kiss before finally entering the passageway. The male figure clasped his hand in mid-air, as if catching something and put it on his chest.
This particular ball of light flew towards the passage, and zoomed faster than the speed of light. It caught up with the fall of the two deities' lifeless bodies within mere seconds. As the lifeless bodies of the dead gods fell into an another plane of existence, the ball of light fell with the numerous rain of weapons that were used by both deities in battle prior. Until finally, crashing into the primordial earth where life finally begins.
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In a dark cell from a dungeon underground, loud snores of a man lying asleep in one of the cells reverberated upon the empty place. The man was sleeping so soundly and even lying comfortably in his prison bed, to a prisoner, this was highly unusual. Then from the distance shrouded in shadows, footsteps was heard approaching this particular cell. A female figure, crouched slightly as she looked around cautiously, darting her eyes from left to right scanning the area.
She was a fair-pale skinned girl with a looks of a 17 year old with bright pink eyes and light pink hair worn in big pigtails. Holding them are black four-tail bows with two stripes of red on each tail and three big gold spheres in the center of both. She has very light, orange-pink gradient wings. She also wears a short red dress with accents of pale gold, white, and black. It is very frilly and has big puffy sleeves that match. Attached from the chest and going past the shoulder are black straps to match the frilly collar worn on her neck. In the center of it is a magenta cross lined in black. She wears red and black shoes with gold on the heel and a single, big gold orb a the tongue, along with tall white socks.
From her sleeve, she pulled out a ring of keys that she has stolen from the guards earlier. One by one she tried fitting the keys into the cells door, grunting frustrated as she kept picking on the wrong ones. Until finally the last key slid and clicked into place, she could almost jump in cheer. The girl then pulled the cell door open, and it took quite a lot as she did not expect it to be THAT heavy; she then approached the prisoner, still sleeping on the bed.
-Girl-
"Wake up, Fang."
-Fang-
"Zzz..."
-Girl-
"Fang... Wake up."
The girl was first poking him, but soon began shaking him as he was still sawing logs even after his cell opened. Frustration began bubbling up, the girl began shaking him violently.
-Girl-
"Hey! Fang! Wake up already! Wake up!"
Realizing her voice was too loud, she lowered the volume of her voice and continued her attempt on waking up Fang.
-Eryn-
"It's me, Eryn! I'm here to rescue you! We need to run."
-Fang-
"Huh...? Who's gotta to run?"
Finally waking up, although sluggishly, Fang slowly sat up on his bad and looked at Eryn with drowsy eyes. Letting her frustration loose, she womped his head.
-Eryn-
“You! Obviously, duh!â€
She could only let out another grunt of frustration, it was almost saddening at this rate.
-Eryn-
“You’re so pathetic, I can’t believe you tried to skip out on paying for bread. Now rise and shine! We need to run!â€
-Fang-
“Run? Why?â€
-Eryn-
“You still have a duties as a Fencer, remember?â€
Fang just cast a rather displeased and disapproving look unto Eryn.
-Eryn-
“Hurry up and let’s get out of here, so you can collect the Furies with me!â€
-Fang-
“...Nah. You go by yourself. I kinda like this place already, and I’m planning to live the rest of my life here.â€
Fang said nonchalantly to which thoroughly surprised Eryn, she just stared at him with mouth agape with disbelief.
-Eryn-
“Huh? Do you even know where you are? You’re in prison! The clink! The slammer! The crowbar hotel!â€
-Fang-
“I know exactly where I am: Heaven! Seriously, this place rocks! I get free food and sleep all I want.â€
Fang said it with conviction, not a stutter nor a gesture of doubt. Eryn felt like she was about to get a headache with his responses as she rubbed her temples.
-Fang-
“--In fact, I’m retiring here. Right now!â€
Fang stood up from his bed, facing Eryn. He was young 22 year old man with light skin, short brown hair, and deep blue eyes. His attire consists of a white shirt covered over by a black jacket with white lining and red stripes going on both sleeves. He wears slightly baggy red pants with several pockets on both pant leg along with matching boots with the base color of black but are red on the bottom.
-Eryn-
“You really are an idiot, aren’t you? You’ve committed a serious crime! You’ll be punished with a hundred slaps on the wrist.â€
Eryn crossed her arms, now lecturing Fang.
-Eryn-
“Your hands would be so numb that you won’t be able to move them anymore.â€
-Fang-
“Oh that’s fine. Now I would have a reason not to wash my face.â€
-Eryn-
“Again, your stupidity never ceases to amaze me. You won’t be also able to eat if your hands are useless, you know?â€
-Fang-
“Okay. Let’s go.â€
A complete 180 turn, Fang was instantly convinced. Eryn shook her head in frustration, and rubbing her temples intently. It would seem that when it comes to food and laziness, Fang immediately accepts the case wholeheartedly.
And so without any more moment to spare, the two finally walked out of the cell. Eryn could only think of getting out of here as soon as they can. But as they stepped out of Fang’s cell and into the end of the dungeon, Fang suddenly stopped in his tracks.
-Fang-
“I’m tired. You’re gonna have to carry me for the rest of the way.â€
-Eryn-
“Huh…??? You haven’t even took 10 steps yet since he stepped out of your cell!â€
Again, Eryn was furious at this sudden notion.
-Fang-
“Prison life has made me soft and weak. Now stop complaining and carry me.â€
-Eryn-
“Quit messing around! You’ve only been locked up for 3 days!â€
-Fang-
“Stop talking back to me, you stuck-up fairy. I’m the master here. You should be even thankful that I even entrust a fairy with my amazing body.â€
-Eryn-
“Okay, just so we’re clear here. I am *not* your slave. Got it? Fencers and Fairies are equals. Remember that.â€
Eryn, controlling her urge to beat him senseless, stated the primary rule of Fencers and Fairies’ bond to one another. While Fang was not entirely an abusive(?) Fencer himself, his overt laziness was a pain for Eryn.
Dismissing the topic completely, Eryn went to the corner and peeped to see if any guards were following them. Sure enough, two guards were lying on the floor just around the corner. Having been taken out by Eryn prior to reaching Fang’s cell.
-Eryn-
“Now be quiet. I put the guards asleep with my sleep magic. Now let’s get out of here before it wears off.â€
-Fang-
“Sigh. Guess I have no choice.â€
-Eryn-
“Sigh… why did I have to be stuck with him as my partner?â€
Both sighing in resignation, the two hurried snuck out of the dungeon. Then from the dungeon, out on the forest where they stopped, after being spotted and running from the three guards from outside. The both of them stopped for a while and catch their breath.
Not far from where they were, a figure limply walked and wandered aimlessly throughout the woods. A woman, covered in a very dirty and ragged red cloak. Her stomach grumbling loudly as she has not eaten anything for 3 days; which would explain why she was limping and wobbling all over the place. Sheer willpower alone was keeping her on her feet.
As she proceeded further, she stumbled upon two individuals at a distance; Fang and Eryn just in the middle of taking a breather. The ragged woman hid behind the nearby tree as she contemplate on whether she should approach them or not.
To be Continued...
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Long ago when darkness and light still bore life, the Goddess emerged from the light and a malevolent entity known as Vile God took form from the darkness.
The Vile God, drawing strength from sorrow and suffering...
And the Goddess drawing strength from hopes and dreams...
In a desperate struggle for power and survival on both sides... For unending days and years, they fought...
A fierce battle ensued between these two supreme beings, deities of their own right, almighty of their own dominion.
The light tore the darkness into shreds, darkness corroded the light.
The Vile God, drawing strength from sorrow and suffering...
And the Goddess drawing strength from hopes and dreams...
In a desperate struggle for power and survival on both sides... For unending days and years, they fought...
A fierce battle ensued between these two supreme beings, deities of their own right, almighty of their own dominion.
The light tore the darkness into shreds, darkness corroded the light.
Eventually, both sides will tither utter annihilation upon each other. No distinct victor, no fallen loser. Eventually, these powerful entities shall both enter their own respective eternal slumber. Like a dying star emitting a final burst of light before imploding into darkness...
But from an another plane of existence... Far from the ensuing titanic battle between two deities, two beings watched on end as they peered from the other side... The birth of this new universe. Both silhouettes were rather displeased by the development of each passing moment.
-Male Voice-
"Arrgh... this is what happens when the scale of power is non-existent! Both supposed tips of that scale will destroy each other!"
-Female Voice-
"Ah but such is the universal law and flow of order. The when the medium is absent, they are fated to destroy each other in order to either destroy the universe itself or give way to a new life."
-Male Voice-
"I know... but its the waiting I can't stand. This is why I hate deities, they're always a pain in the neck."
-Female Voice-
"Please be more considerate with your words! You're acting like a petulant child again. Eternity is a luxury we have so we must see to this final stage of the cycle of birth of this universe."
Two figures beyond the universal boundary, a male and a female, spoke about these deities as if they were mere toddlers, and tools as means of an end. In actuality, they themselves transcend gods and goddesses. Beings that oversee the multiverse at it take shape and form, and overseeing each birth and death cycle of each universes in an infinite seas of dimensions and realities. They were both nowhere and everywhere at the same time, beings that exist beyond the realm of reasoning and beyond esoteric. They are to what the godheads called, the Celestial Beings.
-Male Voice-
"Say... Are you really gonna do it? I heard from the superiors, that the boss lady herself granted you the pass."
-Female Voice-
"I must. They themselves have foresaw the fragment to emerge here in this newborn universe."
-Male Voice-
"I see... So I guess I won't be seeing you around then."
-Female Voice-
"Yes. I'm sorry... such is duty. That is why I chose you to accompany me here before I enter."
-Male Voice-
"But if you enter, you won't be yourself anymore. Your memories, your identity and most of your powers erased until the fragment is procured."
-Female Voice-
"I know. I may have to live as a common human. But if I fail... then I'm not worthy--"
The male figure held his hand over the female figure before she could utter anymore word of self-deprecation. To her, she might be saying all this because of her strong sense of duty, but to him, it meant losing his friend, and he won't have it.
-Male Voice-
"Don't say that please. It's not like you to put yourself down like that."
-Female Voice-
"..."
-Male Voice-
"I am aware of the consequences if you fail. But do promise me one thing."
The male figure held both her shoulders, gazing upon her eyes lit with honest concern. She could only return the gaze with a sad one. But no matter what, sense of duty or not, she had to be strong... for her husband.
-Male Voice-
"--that you will do your best. One our daughter would be proud of. If you were to vanish into non-existence--DO NOT do so when you know you could have still done something to prevail. Now can I trust you?"
-Female Voice-
"...as you always can."
-Male Voice-
"That's my girl."
The two figures exchanged a warm embrace and a gesture of affection towards one another. For the first time in a long while the female figure smiled to the bottom of her heart, now finding the burning motivation to succeed. She may not remember it, after her entry but it was nice for something to hold on to.
As the two embraced, the battle between the two ruling deities has reached its end. With the Vile God and the Goddess finally dealing each other their final blow. As the life drained from the two deities, they both fell from the sea of stars to the ground beneath them.
-Female Voice-
"That's my queue."
-Male Voice-
"Right."
-Female Voice-
"Goodb--"
-Male Voice-
"No."
The male figure pulled her frame towards him and pressed his lips unto hers.
-Male Voice-
"I prefer... 'See you later'."
-Female Voice-
"Oh dear, always... you're always like this. Mhm~ alright. See you later."
Slightly flustered, the female figure gave him a light punch on the chest, like two flirting lovers at the prime of their relationship. With one final word of farewell, the male figure slowly let go of her hand and watched as his wife entered the passage towards the new universe. As the female figure's body slowly turn into a ball of light, she lightly blew her husband a farewell kiss before finally entering the passageway. The male figure clasped his hand in mid-air, as if catching something and put it on his chest.
This particular ball of light flew towards the passage, and zoomed faster than the speed of light. It caught up with the fall of the two deities' lifeless bodies within mere seconds. As the lifeless bodies of the dead gods fell into an another plane of existence, the ball of light fell with the numerous rain of weapons that were used by both deities in battle prior. Until finally, crashing into the primordial earth where life finally begins.
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Present Day
In a dark cell from a dungeon underground, loud snores of a man lying asleep in one of the cells reverberated upon the empty place. The man was sleeping so soundly and even lying comfortably in his prison bed, to a prisoner, this was highly unusual. Then from the distance shrouded in shadows, footsteps was heard approaching this particular cell. A female figure, crouched slightly as she looked around cautiously, darting her eyes from left to right scanning the area.
She was a fair-pale skinned girl with a looks of a 17 year old with bright pink eyes and light pink hair worn in big pigtails. Holding them are black four-tail bows with two stripes of red on each tail and three big gold spheres in the center of both. She has very light, orange-pink gradient wings. She also wears a short red dress with accents of pale gold, white, and black. It is very frilly and has big puffy sleeves that match. Attached from the chest and going past the shoulder are black straps to match the frilly collar worn on her neck. In the center of it is a magenta cross lined in black. She wears red and black shoes with gold on the heel and a single, big gold orb a the tongue, along with tall white socks.
From her sleeve, she pulled out a ring of keys that she has stolen from the guards earlier. One by one she tried fitting the keys into the cells door, grunting frustrated as she kept picking on the wrong ones. Until finally the last key slid and clicked into place, she could almost jump in cheer. The girl then pulled the cell door open, and it took quite a lot as she did not expect it to be THAT heavy; she then approached the prisoner, still sleeping on the bed.
-Girl-
"Wake up, Fang."
-Fang-
"Zzz..."
-Girl-
"Fang... Wake up."
The girl was first poking him, but soon began shaking him as he was still sawing logs even after his cell opened. Frustration began bubbling up, the girl began shaking him violently.
-Girl-
"Hey! Fang! Wake up already! Wake up!"
Realizing her voice was too loud, she lowered the volume of her voice and continued her attempt on waking up Fang.
-Eryn-
"It's me, Eryn! I'm here to rescue you! We need to run."
-Fang-
"Huh...? Who's gotta to run?"
Finally waking up, although sluggishly, Fang slowly sat up on his bad and looked at Eryn with drowsy eyes. Letting her frustration loose, she womped his head.
-Eryn-
“You! Obviously, duh!â€
She could only let out another grunt of frustration, it was almost saddening at this rate.
-Eryn-
“You’re so pathetic, I can’t believe you tried to skip out on paying for bread. Now rise and shine! We need to run!â€
-Fang-
“Run? Why?â€
-Eryn-
“You still have a duties as a Fencer, remember?â€
Fang just cast a rather displeased and disapproving look unto Eryn.
-Eryn-
“Hurry up and let’s get out of here, so you can collect the Furies with me!â€
-Fang-
“...Nah. You go by yourself. I kinda like this place already, and I’m planning to live the rest of my life here.â€
Fang said nonchalantly to which thoroughly surprised Eryn, she just stared at him with mouth agape with disbelief.
-Eryn-
“Huh? Do you even know where you are? You’re in prison! The clink! The slammer! The crowbar hotel!â€
-Fang-
“I know exactly where I am: Heaven! Seriously, this place rocks! I get free food and sleep all I want.â€
Fang said it with conviction, not a stutter nor a gesture of doubt. Eryn felt like she was about to get a headache with his responses as she rubbed her temples.
-Fang-
“--In fact, I’m retiring here. Right now!â€
Fang stood up from his bed, facing Eryn. He was young 22 year old man with light skin, short brown hair, and deep blue eyes. His attire consists of a white shirt covered over by a black jacket with white lining and red stripes going on both sleeves. He wears slightly baggy red pants with several pockets on both pant leg along with matching boots with the base color of black but are red on the bottom.
-Eryn-
“You really are an idiot, aren’t you? You’ve committed a serious crime! You’ll be punished with a hundred slaps on the wrist.â€
Eryn crossed her arms, now lecturing Fang.
-Eryn-
“Your hands would be so numb that you won’t be able to move them anymore.â€
-Fang-
“Oh that’s fine. Now I would have a reason not to wash my face.â€
-Eryn-
“Again, your stupidity never ceases to amaze me. You won’t be also able to eat if your hands are useless, you know?â€
-Fang-
“Okay. Let’s go.â€
A complete 180 turn, Fang was instantly convinced. Eryn shook her head in frustration, and rubbing her temples intently. It would seem that when it comes to food and laziness, Fang immediately accepts the case wholeheartedly.
And so without any more moment to spare, the two finally walked out of the cell. Eryn could only think of getting out of here as soon as they can. But as they stepped out of Fang’s cell and into the end of the dungeon, Fang suddenly stopped in his tracks.
-Fang-
“I’m tired. You’re gonna have to carry me for the rest of the way.â€
-Eryn-
“Huh…??? You haven’t even took 10 steps yet since he stepped out of your cell!â€
Again, Eryn was furious at this sudden notion.
-Fang-
“Prison life has made me soft and weak. Now stop complaining and carry me.â€
-Eryn-
“Quit messing around! You’ve only been locked up for 3 days!â€
-Fang-
“Stop talking back to me, you stuck-up fairy. I’m the master here. You should be even thankful that I even entrust a fairy with my amazing body.â€
-Eryn-
“Okay, just so we’re clear here. I am *not* your slave. Got it? Fencers and Fairies are equals. Remember that.â€
Eryn, controlling her urge to beat him senseless, stated the primary rule of Fencers and Fairies’ bond to one another. While Fang was not entirely an abusive(?) Fencer himself, his overt laziness was a pain for Eryn.
Dismissing the topic completely, Eryn went to the corner and peeped to see if any guards were following them. Sure enough, two guards were lying on the floor just around the corner. Having been taken out by Eryn prior to reaching Fang’s cell.
-Eryn-
“Now be quiet. I put the guards asleep with my sleep magic. Now let’s get out of here before it wears off.â€
-Fang-
“Sigh. Guess I have no choice.â€
-Eryn-
“Sigh… why did I have to be stuck with him as my partner?â€
Both sighing in resignation, the two hurried snuck out of the dungeon. Then from the dungeon, out on the forest where they stopped, after being spotted and running from the three guards from outside. The both of them stopped for a while and catch their breath.
Not far from where they were, a figure limply walked and wandered aimlessly throughout the woods. A woman, covered in a very dirty and ragged red cloak. Her stomach grumbling loudly as she has not eaten anything for 3 days; which would explain why she was limping and wobbling all over the place. Sheer willpower alone was keeping her on her feet.
As she proceeded further, she stumbled upon two individuals at a distance; Fang and Eryn just in the middle of taking a breather. The ragged woman hid behind the nearby tree as she contemplate on whether she should approach them or not.
To be Continued...
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