Yes, let's go with that then...
What happened after that?
What happened after that?
Fanfiction ► Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles: A tale of four losers!
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I'm not done yet. Each file is only a part of their bacstory. One more file adds to it.
Alright. Thanks! Limit stuff.
No problem the Next main chapter is called: Day on the town and the Black Knight.
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Excellent, this is really good. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'll keep trying my best.
Hello everyone. I'm heading for the snow this weekend so by Sunday I will have not one but two new chapters for the fic. Wish me luck.
Chapter 6 Finding a town and the Black Knight part 1.
The team had now gotten off the wagon and walked to the town's giant iron gate. There was a sign that read Mog's Pass. Zero stopped Lanydx, Mina, Lee-Roy and Fuzz. The Tall Yuke took off his bronze, bird helmet for some air. They never saw the back of Zero's head before. It was shaved with, pure black skin. The Selkie looked at Zero and put her hand on his shoulder. "Something up?" Mina asked.
"No I'm good. Thanks anyway." Zero said while putting on his helmet back on. He looked at Lanydx. "Dumb ass cover your right eye. I don't need an angry mob chasing us out town until we get what we need." He ordered.
Lanydx looked at him puzzled. "Why?" He asked. Lee-Roy kicking Lanydx in the foot. "Just do it so we can get into town!" Lee-Roy yelled. Lanydx punched Lee-Roy in the face. The rich kid went flying into gate, and crashed into the main square. The Lilty's armor had been ripped to peaces. Lanydx and Fuzz came out of the other side of the newly made hole. "Fuzz time for plan W." Lanydx shouted. Fuzz looked at his friend and nodded. "Kupo." the moogle replied.
Unknown to the two, Lee-Roy ran at Lanydx with an uppercut. Lanydx went down, Then Lee-Roy grabbed Fuzz and put the moogle in a head lock. Mina was shocked at all this, while Zero couldn't stop grinning.
Lee-Roy spoke out of breath. "It's like I told ya Selkie girl. Huff. Stop-Huff- abusing them for ONE Second and, they think they're George Washington all of a sudden, Wanting freedom and equal rights. Well that's not gonna happen!" Lee-Roy ending his rant.
Mina pushed to three away from each other. "Okay that's it! No more fighting. You two are worse then a couple of children. Don't you get that we need to work as a team,or our village and everyone we love will die!" She scolded at the two.
Lee-Roy push the writer back from him. "Who the hell do you think you are Selkie? Same for you, Yuke?" He pointed at Zero. He finally looked at Lanydx with hate in his eyes. "Lastly you, The Crystal Bearer! The Village freak of nature! The, the Thing that killed his own father for God's sake. Hell the only reason your even here is so you can be used as human shield." Lee-Roy yelled and ran off to a bar.
Lanydx ran from everyone crying. Zero just walked to the black smith.
Mina just stood there. Fuzz was trying to comfort her.
The team had now gotten off the wagon and walked to the town's giant iron gate. There was a sign that read Mog's Pass. Zero stopped Lanydx, Mina, Lee-Roy and Fuzz. The Tall Yuke took off his bronze, bird helmet for some air. They never saw the back of Zero's head before. It was shaved with, pure black skin. The Selkie looked at Zero and put her hand on his shoulder. "Something up?" Mina asked.
"No I'm good. Thanks anyway." Zero said while putting on his helmet back on. He looked at Lanydx. "Dumb ass cover your right eye. I don't need an angry mob chasing us out town until we get what we need." He ordered.
Lanydx looked at him puzzled. "Why?" He asked. Lee-Roy kicking Lanydx in the foot. "Just do it so we can get into town!" Lee-Roy yelled. Lanydx punched Lee-Roy in the face. The rich kid went flying into gate, and crashed into the main square. The Lilty's armor had been ripped to peaces. Lanydx and Fuzz came out of the other side of the newly made hole. "Fuzz time for plan W." Lanydx shouted. Fuzz looked at his friend and nodded. "Kupo." the moogle replied.
Unknown to the two, Lee-Roy ran at Lanydx with an uppercut. Lanydx went down, Then Lee-Roy grabbed Fuzz and put the moogle in a head lock. Mina was shocked at all this, while Zero couldn't stop grinning.
Lee-Roy spoke out of breath. "It's like I told ya Selkie girl. Huff. Stop-Huff- abusing them for ONE Second and, they think they're George Washington all of a sudden, Wanting freedom and equal rights. Well that's not gonna happen!" Lee-Roy ending his rant.
Mina pushed to three away from each other. "Okay that's it! No more fighting. You two are worse then a couple of children. Don't you get that we need to work as a team,or our village and everyone we love will die!" She scolded at the two.
Lee-Roy push the writer back from him. "Who the hell do you think you are Selkie? Same for you, Yuke?" He pointed at Zero. He finally looked at Lanydx with hate in his eyes. "Lastly you, The Crystal Bearer! The Village freak of nature! The, the Thing that killed his own father for God's sake. Hell the only reason your even here is so you can be used as human shield." Lee-Roy yelled and ran off to a bar.
Lanydx ran from everyone crying. Zero just walked to the black smith.
Mina just stood there. Fuzz was trying to comfort her.
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Hilarious story, but it confusing and hard to understand.
I really like it and will check in to see more.
I really like it and will check in to see more.
Hello everyone. Now I've been thinking things over, and I'm not all that happy with this fic. As much as love working on this I think it could be better and it all starts with the first chapter. I'm going to reboot this fic for now I have the full game. I plan on having a good story and comedy. I'm not sure when the reboot will be but rest assured, the story of Lanydx, Zero, Mina, Fuzz and Lee-Roy will be back and better then ever.
Zero: Great, were getting laid off.
LR: Only for a little bit.
Lee-Roy: Wonderful, I need a break from this.
Mina: What do you plan on changing?
LR: The first chapter and other stuff. putting in more jokes in and KH hints.
Mina: So do I still get a-
LR: Yes but don't spoil it.
Lanydx: Spoil what?
LR: all in good time my son.
Fuzz: Wait for our comeback loyal fans. Kupo.
Zero: Or I'll burn all of your houses down!!!
LR: Damn it, Zero that's plan B.
Zero: Great, were getting laid off.
LR: Only for a little bit.
Lee-Roy: Wonderful, I need a break from this.
Mina: What do you plan on changing?
LR: The first chapter and other stuff. putting in more jokes in and KH hints.
Mina: So do I still get a-
LR: Yes but don't spoil it.
Lanydx: Spoil what?
LR: all in good time my son.
Fuzz: Wait for our comeback loyal fans. Kupo.
Zero: Or I'll burn all of your houses down!!!
LR: Damn it, Zero that's plan B.
Let me know when you do!
Dang, the limit is still here.
Dang, the limit is still here.
I'll reboot will be in the afternoon.
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