Finally, now this one, you can't say looks bad!

[DaDarkDude]

I only made a sig for this one, it's all I thought was necessary, but, enough talk, here it is:

I read up and looked at tutorials like hell to get this far. But, there's always room for improvement, so... C&C?

V2:




Latest editted version:

 

[Sean]

It looks like you pasted your stock on a random background with no real flow. The stock itself and the bacground have no real connection to make it look like you put menial effort into making this. My advise is to incorporate some colors of your stock into the area. Although, this render does not have any true colors except for the eyes.

 

[DaDarkDude]

I see.... And what color would you suggest to use for the background?
I used green and blue, since, well, I love the color blue and green from the eyes. So, that's how I came up with the background, but... What color would you suggest?

 

[Dark Master]

try blending the render into the bg a little on the arms

 

[DaDarkDude]

I tried making them compliment each other.
I edited the first post to show what I got

 

[Zook]

the background just seems...useless like it really doesn't need to be there. You need to create a background that agrees with the stock and makes it better.

 

[DaDarkDude]

You referring to the first or second one?

 

[Salty the Hero]

The second one looks really bad. The background looks... well, empty.

I would say use different effects, and add some colors.

I`m sorry man, but I like the first one alot better.

 

[DaDarkDude]

I see... Add more effects you say?
I'll see what I can do. I'll remove the noise from it, I think that would help it out, and enhance the shadow. I'll also see if I can sharpen up and Blur around the stock...

Anything else?

 

[King Sora X]

there could be a little more contrast, as well with some hue and sateration added, to give it more deaph, as well with some brushes and blurring to give it a good looker at..

But othere than that great job keep it up.

 

[DaDarkDude]

I see... I'll take that into consideration...

Is there anything else I should do?
I want this to be my first perfect sig...

 

[Zen]

The second one looks really bad. The background looks... well, empty.

I would say use different effects, and add some colors.

I`m sorry man, but I like the first one alot better.

I have to disagree there.

Both of them are bad, really bad. It just doesn't fit the render. To me the one that fits it most is the second one because of the color...nothing more.

 

[DaDarkDude]

Ouch...
Well then, how should I fix that? I'm looking for effects, but, I can't really find a lot of things.

 

[E.J.]

Hmm. I dunno about it. It looks too...liney. It needs to have more flowing and bursting effects.

 

[SiiNz]

Add more effects to it, it looks DEAD.
Another thing, the backround doesn't blend in with it at all.
It just looks like you copied and pasted the guy into different backrounds.

 

[DaDarkDude]

I see..
I think the second background fits, though... Doesn't it? Seeing as how I based it exactly as the stock's appearance..

 

[Nine-Tailed Fox]

The third one is okay.

The second looks a little odd,because of the way the shadow is cut off at the top.

As for the first one,the background might be a little too much.

My advice would be to try adding text of some sort.

And maybe a few effects.