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Erebus Kronos

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Still trying to sharpen up. This is better than the last one in my opinion....

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Still needs work I know. CnC please.
 

King Sora X

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I like the skeme that you are using, the blakc and white goes really well with the theme, all is good, except the text could barely see it. So maybe make it a bit lighter nexxt time, but still the rest of it is really well. Love it.
 

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^why would you make the text lighter if you can't see it?^

This is alot better than the last one. The compo in this is good and it has good flow
 

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I like the concept of this but the placement is to far to the
right. Good light source but the text is hard to read and its
placement isn't all that good.
A good concept you just need to work on the placement of
your stock and text.

@Stavvy:
PFSC is the shit
 

Erebus Kronos

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For those asking about the text:

I suck at text as you can see, but I also face, as Troy said, ruining the point of the focus. :/ If I was the shit with text it would have came out better. xD

Malibu:

I totaly agree with the stock and I would have moved it more towards the center, but there is oe slight problem...that's where the stock ends (ends to the right). Haha. It was an amazing stock, but it came with price.

Thanks for the comments guys! I really appreciate them!

Anyone else?
 

Zook

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While I like the light to dark effect you got there it might be a tad too strong, especially on his face, try toning it down a little bit and yeah fix that text.
 
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Charlie

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It's an interesting concept, but it feels as if its lacking something to draw the eye to it longer.
Like if you threw in a random bright colored effect or light source/text, etc.

Its minimalistic.
But its lack of anything else makes it feel flat and under developed.
I'm feeling the stock choice, but I encourage you to do something more with your palette there.
 
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