Well this thread has been revived, hasn't it? 2007 was the last post before yours, Sorarules.
Nonetheless, I felt inclined to read this oneshot. Quite frankly, snow, it's amazing. You captured the emotion of the whole piece perfectly. In doing so, you were able to characterize the man, using his thoughts, actions, and feelings as the basis. Also, I absolutely adore your descriptions.
I should have noticed this when you first posted it, because it was a great read!~
~Deedee