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there ya go. just keep at it. you already got 114 views so your story can't be bad.
i'm also advertising your fanfic.
 

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thanks PKK. i've always like them. even if they look scary but man they rock.:thumbsup:. oh you'd better continue the story.
 

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Ep.3-corruption chapter(mini chapter)1/4- Restart

"An...Epitaph?," Rika aked. "Yes, and because you're the last of the chaos 8, the world...is gonna
corrupt,"The man replied., Suddenly 6 more players showed up. "It's time, O Chaos no.1 this is
our plan, Plan E.P.!," The man said. The 7 mysterious players casted a spell and Rika suddenly
casts a spell but he wasn't controlling it, the epitaph did! "Wha..what is happening?,"Rona asked.
Suddenly an explosion happened and all players suddenly logged-out without noticing.

"The world, where many mysteries live"

The next day-
"Rika, i heard from the radio that "the world" was now closed, because of mysterious happening's," Rona said
"Really? now i have nothing to do this summer, i hope they make a world R:3!, Rika said
"Oh, no i forgot about that guy!," Rika added.

to be continued.............................
 
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N0thing, i know you're reading this thread, and sorry for all you guys because this is a short chapter
beacause i'm not in a good mood today
 

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don't worry man, just take your time.
don't over do yourself.
oh yeah just for a reminder you haven't added this part
(the letter):
" know all about your brother he was my classmate, and we always teamed up
but i heard he fell comatose so i have'nt seen him, if you wanna know more let's see each other at
Delta:Secretive beginner's blade"
 

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don't worry man, just take your time.
don't over do yourself.
oh yeah just for a reminder you haven't added this part
yeah!, i know about that, but i really made Rika forget that thing
so they will meet again in "The world R:3"
on the next ep. , got it?
and the chaos 8 will rise again!!!
 

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Ep. 3- corruption chapter 2/4-Revival

After 1 year.............
"Yeah, summer again," Rika said. He was just sitting in front of his computer
A text message came from his cellphone, "Hey, It's Rona!," Rika said.
The text message says:
"Hey, Rika! long time no see, have you heard "The World R:3" just opened?
I know we are too old for "the world", but you can Load your character from
R:2, is'nt that cool?, If you log-in i'll be waiting for Icheon Maine!"

"Hmmm, maybe i'll log-in!,"Rika said
Rika opened the site and he Loaded his character from R:2.
"A new root town!...Icheon Maine?,"Rika said
"Rika!!!!,"Someone mysteriously calls him. Rika has seen Rona's character, but the character of Rona
has changed costume styles
"Hey, Rika you have'nt costumize your character?," Rona asked
"Errr, I...I havent notice it!,"Rika replied.
"Hey, let's go to an area.... How about Delta:Bugging Veteran's corner?," Rona asked.
"Hey, that's a lv.13 area we're just lv.10, we need to be 3 players to beat that area,"Rika replied.
"Don't leave me behind!," someone mysteriously appears.
"Be...be.. BETEL!," Rika shouted.
"The one and only!,Betel replied.

Betel got out of his coma but Rika's sister is still not awakening, Betel said to Rika everything.

"I know that she is gonna...heal,"Betel said.
"And right now we gotta level up!,Rona added.

They warped to the area and beated the boss and got to lv. 14, after that the mysterious
guy who e-mailed Rika appeared.
"Betel?," the guy asked.
"Navix? it is you!," Betel replied.
"Hey! we're you the one that E-mailed me?," Rika aked.
"Of course!," Navix replied.

They all talked about what happened to the world, suddenly Rika saw someone
that looks like Zelfar

"Zelfar?, and those guys!," Rika said.

To be continued...............
 

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whoa!! never thought that Betel is gonna be healed that quickly.
man that's cool you can load your previous character.well afterall it was closed because of mysterious phenomenons. cool man, cool.
 

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whoa!! never thought that Betel is gonna be healed that quickly.
man that's cool you can load your previous character.well afterall it was closed because of mysterious phenomenons. cool man, cool.
Yeah, well it is 1 year later after all of those happenings
and i told you i would'nt forget about the E-mailer
and more improvements will be on R:3 just wait for chapter 3/4!
 

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Hey,N0thing this what you are waiting for!
Ep.3- corruption 3/4-Upgrade

"Hey, Rika what are you looking at?," Betel asked.
Wa...wait for a second," Rika replied.

Rika chased Zelfar and his gang.
"Zelfar!," Rika shouted.
Zelfar did'nt notice Rika, the 5 just walked away.

"Hey, how can they be all teamed up if the max members can be 3?," Rika asked to himself.
"That's because "The world upgraded the team memebers in a party into 5
and you can invite players on a field," Navix answered his question.
"......So that's why," Rika said.
"Let's get out of this area already!,"Rona said.
"Yeah!," Betel agreed.

They went back to Icheon Maine everybody said goodbye. Rika received an E-mail
it was about CC corp. about the upgrades of the R:3, Navix, Betel, and a mysterious character we all know.

In some part of the world-(Epitaph graveyard)
O, Epitaphs we call for you!
Bring us the darkness that you have promised
and revive Heine the god of Zero!

On the next day......
"better log-in while dad is still asleep!," Rika said.
Rika got to the @Home that Betel told him to go to.....
"Hey, Rika!," Betel said.
"Welcome to opening of the Clan!," Rona said.
"You all joined this clan?,"Rika asked.
Oh, and we added you as a member to!, there are other player's that joined too
you aready know one of them- Nivax
the other ones are: Max, Shino, N0thing,Xugoh and TLK," Betel said.

Rika saw Zelfar and his memebers again, but.........

To be continued.............
 
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hey finally another one except the Radiant of Abyss posts here and finally my user name is mentioned.
cool man, cool. :thumbsup:
 

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Sorry i've not been on in awhile to read it, but i read it all and it's great so far! Man, i wanna read more! Take your time like N0thing said, ok? Keep your head high kiddo! It's a great story and my character is already in yay! I'm thinking of making a Kingdom Hearts one i've already worked on for about two weeks, whaddya think guys? But anyway great story kiddo, great story!
 
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