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C4E

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Here I am again. after another 2 year break.
This is my second tag in 4 years.
I just feel like getting back into things.
 

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It's really good, especially since it's your second tag in 4 years. Though I personally would like it better if Ven didn't stand out as much.
 

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Thanks.
Still experimenting with things. Making sure I can still do it right.

In case anyone ever wants to critique, and offer suggestions on how to finish these.

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Welcome back?

Yeah the tags look pretty nice, the Ven looks pretty fine to me, though I would have set a little opacity on the main Ven to where he didn't take away from the rest of the image.

For the second image, make sure your lights are evenly distributed, even if you are trying to highlight a specific thing.
 

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Here I am again. after another 2 year break.
This is my second tag in 4 years.
I just feel like getting back into things.

I dont think there is much else you could do to this one given with what you've already done to it. Kind of surprised anyone still uses the basic dupe/clipping mask lol. I think for this I could only really suggest is for a little more dynamic with your background. It feels flatter than your stock, and with limited "presence" it doesn't capture interest but for a brief period of time. The Foreground and text kind of make up for that, but the color choice makes them almost hardly noticeable and aesthetically pleasing to the eye.

damn. Thanks for all the help guys!

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I used to never get responses unless I smudged the shit out of things.

Color choice brotha, i feel like this could work. the smudging actually isn't too bad, if it was a little harder, (especially the left) and stood out more you'd be solid. The lightsource is pretty weak here, you can fix that easy with a few adjustment layers without taking away too much from the stock.

Thanks.
Still experimenting with things. Making sure I can still do it right.

In case anyone ever wants to critique, and offer suggestions on how to finish these.

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I like the idea of this, but I i guess I'm being annoying about color choice and should probably stop lol. The vectoring is great, i think what would help this besides just reworking the colors to more prominent venerations, with with your effects like to the fair left. Don't be afraid to make a splash or two more, i think for the most part when you have things to take away, you're getting somewhere.
 

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There's no way it has been for years C4E. You were doing a few tags just earlier this year. I lied. You're not the person I thought you were.
 
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