I should go

[Pablo]

It was a request

 

[C4E]

seems empty. I also don't feel like there is enough black to go with the amount of white.

 

[Gram]

I also find it a bit...empty. Not sure what to think could fill up the space though.

 

[Ðari]

Not enough going on in your foreground beyond the creation of depth. Try merging your bg and foreground a little bit more for a better immersion, that would also at the sametimes give you more things to play with.