How about a different perspective of the story like The views of Kairi, King Mickey, Ansem, Riku and others!
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well i was thinking of going on with the story as sora. i really don't like stories that go over the same plot line but through different people. thanks for the idea though!
Wow O_O....This is very interesting! Awesome job on it ^_^ Keep goin'!
*imagines Sora as Ten Second Tom*
Sora: What the hell am I doing he- Hi I'm Sora! ^^
*imagines Sora as Ten Second Tom*
Sora: What the hell am I doing he- Hi I'm Sora! ^^
I will now be keeping track of the chapters now so this isn’t actually chapter one but this is where I started keeping track. Enjoy
Chapter 1:The Getaway
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I know that the whole mental institution thing was a dream, but it was to real to ignore. As me, Donald, and Goofy were heading towards the second district, my mind drifted to that nightmare. As they walked off to the left, towards the hotel, I stopped in terror. How do I know that dream was my keyblade testing me. I just assumed that is what had happened since the keyblade was what gave off a life force. My mind started to race, how did I know what was real and what was fantasy. I started to panic. My breathing started to quicken and I fall to my knees, my palms on the ground. Nothing seemed like it was real, the dream or what I was experiencing right now. My mind then flashed to Kairi, that beautiful girl that I hoped was alright. How would she react to my panic attack? I shook my head and got up on my feet. If I was going to question reality I would do it rationally. Donald and Goofy finally realized that I had fallen behind, both still a little weary of me.
“Are you ok, Sora?” Donald whispered as his hand touched my back.
“I really don’t know Donald. I don’t know what’s real anymore and that really scares me.”
Donald gave me a look of worry and I know that I was in trouble. Donald never really showed any emotions to me and this look upon his face made me question reality even more.
“Look inside your heart and then you will know what’s real and what’s a dream.” Goofy said in a confident voice. Goofy always knew what to say but this time was different. My heart was shrouded by a force I couldn’t explain. I looked at them with a fear I never knew, how could I trust them if I didn’t even know this was reality.
I started to inch away from them, my keyblade drawn, ready for anyting.
“Sora, what are you doing, it’s Goofy and me.” I saw a look of terror come over Donald and Goofy’s face. It pained me to see them this way but I couldn’t even trust my emotions. I had almost given up on the keyblade to be with Kairi in the mental institution. She turned out to be false. The only thing I could rely on was the keyblade.
I bolted to the left and ran down the stairs. I could here the duck and dog follow me so I cast a gravity spell on them to slow them down. I heard them yell but fear had overtaken me. I ran towards the door to the third district. I forced my way through the door and searched frantically for a place to hide. I found a overhang on a building to my left. I jumped up and grabbed the edge with my hand, swinging myself up. I crouched down, hoping the two wouldn’t find me. Tears started to come to my eyes. I buried my head into my knees, trying to cover the sound of my sobs. If I was supposed to be the keyblade wielder, why couldn’t I keep anything straight. My mind just kept telling me that the only thing I could trust was my keyblade.
“You need nothing but your keyblade. It will show you the door to the light. Sleep Sora, sleep.”
The voice was soothing and it didn’t threaten me at all. I felt my eyes get heavy and the last picture I saw in my mind was one of Kairi crying.
“Please Kairi.........don’t cry.”
Chapter 1:The Getaway
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I know that the whole mental institution thing was a dream, but it was to real to ignore. As me, Donald, and Goofy were heading towards the second district, my mind drifted to that nightmare. As they walked off to the left, towards the hotel, I stopped in terror. How do I know that dream was my keyblade testing me. I just assumed that is what had happened since the keyblade was what gave off a life force. My mind started to race, how did I know what was real and what was fantasy. I started to panic. My breathing started to quicken and I fall to my knees, my palms on the ground. Nothing seemed like it was real, the dream or what I was experiencing right now. My mind then flashed to Kairi, that beautiful girl that I hoped was alright. How would she react to my panic attack? I shook my head and got up on my feet. If I was going to question reality I would do it rationally. Donald and Goofy finally realized that I had fallen behind, both still a little weary of me.
“Are you ok, Sora?” Donald whispered as his hand touched my back.
“I really don’t know Donald. I don’t know what’s real anymore and that really scares me.”
Donald gave me a look of worry and I know that I was in trouble. Donald never really showed any emotions to me and this look upon his face made me question reality even more.
“Look inside your heart and then you will know what’s real and what’s a dream.” Goofy said in a confident voice. Goofy always knew what to say but this time was different. My heart was shrouded by a force I couldn’t explain. I looked at them with a fear I never knew, how could I trust them if I didn’t even know this was reality.
I started to inch away from them, my keyblade drawn, ready for anyting.
“Sora, what are you doing, it’s Goofy and me.” I saw a look of terror come over Donald and Goofy’s face. It pained me to see them this way but I couldn’t even trust my emotions. I had almost given up on the keyblade to be with Kairi in the mental institution. She turned out to be false. The only thing I could rely on was the keyblade.
I bolted to the left and ran down the stairs. I could here the duck and dog follow me so I cast a gravity spell on them to slow them down. I heard them yell but fear had overtaken me. I ran towards the door to the third district. I forced my way through the door and searched frantically for a place to hide. I found a overhang on a building to my left. I jumped up and grabbed the edge with my hand, swinging myself up. I crouched down, hoping the two wouldn’t find me. Tears started to come to my eyes. I buried my head into my knees, trying to cover the sound of my sobs. If I was supposed to be the keyblade wielder, why couldn’t I keep anything straight. My mind just kept telling me that the only thing I could trust was my keyblade.
“You need nothing but your keyblade. It will show you the door to the light. Sleep Sora, sleep.”
The voice was soothing and it didn’t threaten me at all. I felt my eyes get heavy and the last picture I saw in my mind was one of Kairi crying.
“Please Kairi.........don’t cry.”
OMG!OMG!OMG!This is the best fanfic in the WORLD!I AM NOW YOUR #1 FAN!!!!!!!!Mwhahahahayhahahhahahahaha!!!!Your fanfic is so good that it should be published and worth millions!*does the Numa Numa Dance for Noezel*
Noezels thinks i'm crazy for the worshipping and danceing.
But i dont care!Noezels is the KOOLNESS!
*starts worshipping Noezel*
Noezel;okay.......
Noezels thinks i'm crazy for the worshipping and danceing.
But i dont care!Noezels is the KOOLNESS!
*starts worshipping Noezel*
Noezel;okay.......
Sora's Gone Mad!! keep on going make more chapters!
wow that is totally amazing that you guys really like this. oh and FT you can keep worshiping me
*looks down at her subject and thinks of the dark things she can accomplish with followers.*
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*looks down at her subject and thinks of the dark things she can accomplish with followers.*
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This chapter will be dedicated to the readers who took a chance on desperate fan fic:FlyingTomato1, twilight_dragon, and SorasAngel1292.
Chapter 2:The Hearing
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I felt like I was going to drown in the darkness. My arms and legs couldn’t move and my mind was fuzzy. I opened my eyes and found myself in a familiar place. I was where I first received my keyblade. I was on a platform with Princess Belle engraved into the glass. I couldn’t think of any reason to be here. I tried to summon my keyblade but it wouldn’t come. I tried to stay calm but I knew the sense of comfort wouldn’t last long.
“Sora, why have you stayed from the light?”
I whipped my whole body around, trying to find the source of the voice that sounded so familiar. I saw nothing but darkness.
“But I haven’t! Where are you and who are you!” I screamed but knew I wouldn’t get either of the answers.
“You have lost trust in the keyblade and in doing so have lost the ability to wield it.”
This fact knocked the breath out of my body. How was I supposed to save Riku and the King without the keyblade, or even get back to Kairi. I now felt foolish about not trusting Donald and Goofy. I had no reason not to trust them; they had been with me at my best moments and my darkest hours. I guess I had no right to wield the keyblade, with what I had done to my friends.
“I understand but can you at least send me back to see Donald and Goofy so I can apologize to them.” There was silence for a long while and for a few moments I thought I had been banished to this dark place to serve my sentence for betraying the keyblade.
“Sora you will be given a second chance to wield the keyblade but this time obtaining it will be difficult. You have to prove that you are still pure of heart and that you will not end up like the original keyblade wielder.”
I know who the voice was talking about, Riku. He was the one who was supposed to have sealed all the doors and should have rescued Kairi. At the same time I knew I was different from Riku. I would never give my heart to darkness, there was always another way.
“What do I have to do?”
“You will know what your task is when the time is right. For now I will give you the keyblade but heed my warning, if it is used for anything else than protection, it will leave you forever.”
I looked up and nodded my head, not sure if I was up to the mysterious task that was ahead of me.
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I awoke on the overhang in the third district. My back had cramped up since I had fallen asleep in a crouched position. My face was tear stained and my head was throbbing from the dream I had just had. Again, for the second time I had to ask myself, was any of that for real or not? For now I would just have to accept the here and now, and my dreams as realities. I didn’t have enough proof to say either of them was real or not.
I slowly stood up. I felt a twinge of fear and the only way to suppress it was to try something I could do for so long but wasn’t sure I could do now. I tried to summon my keyblade. It came to me instantly, in a brilliance of light. A sigh of relief escaped my throat. I then suddenly remembered what I had done to Donald and Goofy. I jumped from the balcony and as soon as I did Donald and Goofy came bursting through the doors.
“SORA!” They both screamed, both having looks of pure fear and worry on their faces. I smiled at them and ran at them. They both flinched but I glomped the crap out of them.
“I’m so sorry guys. I guess I’m still in shock from the whole mental institution thing.” They looked at each other and started to crack up laughing.
“We honestly thought you had lost it. We were even considering putting you into a mental institution!” Both of them now rolling in laughter on the ground. I couldn’t resist and started laughing along with them. For now I wouldn’t worry about what was real and what wasn’t. At the time I didn’t know how much pain I was going to go through and how much I was really going to loose.
Thought I would make a longer chappy! Hope you like it!
Chapter 2:The Hearing
-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_
I felt like I was going to drown in the darkness. My arms and legs couldn’t move and my mind was fuzzy. I opened my eyes and found myself in a familiar place. I was where I first received my keyblade. I was on a platform with Princess Belle engraved into the glass. I couldn’t think of any reason to be here. I tried to summon my keyblade but it wouldn’t come. I tried to stay calm but I knew the sense of comfort wouldn’t last long.
“Sora, why have you stayed from the light?”
I whipped my whole body around, trying to find the source of the voice that sounded so familiar. I saw nothing but darkness.
“But I haven’t! Where are you and who are you!” I screamed but knew I wouldn’t get either of the answers.
“You have lost trust in the keyblade and in doing so have lost the ability to wield it.”
This fact knocked the breath out of my body. How was I supposed to save Riku and the King without the keyblade, or even get back to Kairi. I now felt foolish about not trusting Donald and Goofy. I had no reason not to trust them; they had been with me at my best moments and my darkest hours. I guess I had no right to wield the keyblade, with what I had done to my friends.
“I understand but can you at least send me back to see Donald and Goofy so I can apologize to them.” There was silence for a long while and for a few moments I thought I had been banished to this dark place to serve my sentence for betraying the keyblade.
“Sora you will be given a second chance to wield the keyblade but this time obtaining it will be difficult. You have to prove that you are still pure of heart and that you will not end up like the original keyblade wielder.”
I know who the voice was talking about, Riku. He was the one who was supposed to have sealed all the doors and should have rescued Kairi. At the same time I knew I was different from Riku. I would never give my heart to darkness, there was always another way.
“What do I have to do?”
“You will know what your task is when the time is right. For now I will give you the keyblade but heed my warning, if it is used for anything else than protection, it will leave you forever.”
I looked up and nodded my head, not sure if I was up to the mysterious task that was ahead of me.
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I awoke on the overhang in the third district. My back had cramped up since I had fallen asleep in a crouched position. My face was tear stained and my head was throbbing from the dream I had just had. Again, for the second time I had to ask myself, was any of that for real or not? For now I would just have to accept the here and now, and my dreams as realities. I didn’t have enough proof to say either of them was real or not.
I slowly stood up. I felt a twinge of fear and the only way to suppress it was to try something I could do for so long but wasn’t sure I could do now. I tried to summon my keyblade. It came to me instantly, in a brilliance of light. A sigh of relief escaped my throat. I then suddenly remembered what I had done to Donald and Goofy. I jumped from the balcony and as soon as I did Donald and Goofy came bursting through the doors.
“SORA!” They both screamed, both having looks of pure fear and worry on their faces. I smiled at them and ran at them. They both flinched but I glomped the crap out of them.
“I’m so sorry guys. I guess I’m still in shock from the whole mental institution thing.” They looked at each other and started to crack up laughing.
“We honestly thought you had lost it. We were even considering putting you into a mental institution!” Both of them now rolling in laughter on the ground. I couldn’t resist and started laughing along with them. For now I wouldn’t worry about what was real and what wasn’t. At the time I didn’t know how much pain I was going to go through and how much I was really going to loose.
Thought I would make a longer chappy! Hope you like it!
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That was great! i mean sora almost lost his keyblade and donald made fun of him by saying they were about to put him in a mental place and that was the best way for them to laugh things off. keep on writing and have you considered making your own stories? If you do that would be great!
O_O,stares blankly at screen.*Noezels pokes me*
*FT1 starts freaking out and running all over the walls and ceiling.
"AHHHH!Best fan fiction in the world!
*worships and goes to Nolezels whim*
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unrelated;Have you read Chobits?Its awesome!
*FT1 starts freaking out and running all over the walls and ceiling.
"AHHHH!Best fan fiction in the world!
*worships and goes to Nolezels whim*
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unrelated;Have you read Chobits?Its awesome!
Yes I but I only read the first volume and the second
i have writen my own story. its called red rose. you should read it sometime twilight dragon.
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Well i think you might have to fight FlyingTomato1 for number one fan redharry123
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WOW! this is like one of the best fics here! when i got to the part where soras is the mental institute i was like O.O! keep up the good work^-^
thank you so much! i'm really glad more people are starting to read this!
your very welcome^.^
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oh i love that song and the anime that goes with it.
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