Re: itt: bitches with horns and other things but mostly horns
I'll post here, so you don't hate me so much!
for the first picture:
It seems
very sketchy, but it has a very decent propotion in it. It has a lot of lines in it, which makes it seem a little "messy", but also probably tell that you've used your time on making it. I would have wished, that you would make a more solid line, that would make it look less "messy"
the second:
The hair in this picture seem a little od to me, a bit misplaced at some points, but thats something you can easily correct
Her body though have a decent propotion - but it's not normal for a human(with horn)/or demon to look so stiff, make the arms be more bent, that gives the character a more natural stance.. Her eyes look dangerously red
"picture the third":
I find this picture the best among them all. You have moment, action and a more marked line. The body propotion and composition is fine. Just sad that it isn't finished. Also: I think shes holding her sword a bit too girly c:
picture number four!!:
Her arms are
very close to her body! Try also sometimes to use more clean lines
Fifth:
Doctor who!
anyway; the glasses look like they're gluede close in to his face, and I'm pretty sure thats not how you wear glasses ;P try find a picture of a guy with glasses, from the side. I think you'll notice right away
I hope my comments are fair
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