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Just an odd Teenager


Long ago, when the land was still young, there was a warrior, who fought for the greater good, but one day a terrible curse fell upon his home and--HA! Sorry, I just couldn't help myself. It has always been a habit of mine to write stories of fantasy and I tended to get carried away with it. But, sadly to say, I don't have the skills of fiction writing like I use to. My mind isn't as far off as it once was. I can, however, tell you what it was like growing up in the 2000's. Though it was set it a normal time, my friends and I were far from being regular There are no kids with mutant abilities, mystical creatures that come at your every call, or a hero that goes on a magical journey. This is a story about the young me and my predicaments, this is a story about an odd teenager!​

Music plays: "All Star" by Smash Mouth

Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

So much to do so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets
You'll never know if you don't go
You'll never shine if you don't glow

Hey now you're an All Star, get your game on - go play
Hey now you're a Rock Star, get the show on - get paid
And all that glitters is gold
Only shooting stars break the mold

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
You're bundled up now but wait 'til you get older
But the meteor men beg to differ
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
The waters getting warm so you might as well swim
My world's on fire how about yours
That's the way I like it and I never get bored

Somebody once asked could you spare some change for gas
I need to get myself away from this place
I said yep what a concept
I could use a little fuel myself
And we could all use a little change
Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets
You'll never know if you don't go
You'll never shine if you don't glow


Let's see, what is a good year to begin with? Oh yes, the year 2006. Oh, was that was a very interesting year. So many political events, drama, and gossip, it truely was a year that never seemed to calm down. We'll start off in November, on the weekend to be precise. Hmm, let me try to remember what happened, detail to detail.
"CHENZIRAAAAA! GET THE HELL OUT OF BED!"
Oh yes....I remember now. *sighs*
"GET YOUR LAZYY ASS OUT OF BED!" My older sister, Xela (minus the wolf ears), pulled the covers off of me and pulled me out of bed. I fell hard to the ground with a big THUD!
"Awww damn it!" I rub my head. "Why the hell did you do that?!"
"Because you need to wake up!" That's my sister for ya. Despite her bitchiness, she was a very intelligent girl. I remeber around that time she was a senior in Highschool and was part of the Honors Society.
"It's a saturday! And we ain't got nothing to do, so..." I crawl back into bed and pull the covers over my head. "...get the hell out of my room!"
"Don't give me that!" She hisses at me.
"I wasn't planning on giving you anything!" I bark at her.
"Okay fine." She walks out of my room. I can here some water running.
"What the hell is she doing?" I whisper to myself.
"If you don't want to get out of bed willing..." She yells from outside of my room. "Then I'll have to make you get out!" she runs into my room, I know she is running because I can here her feet pat on the floor.
"What are you talking abou-AHHHHHH!" A splash of cold water hits my covers and quickly sinks in on me. "What the hell man!" I get from under the covers, I'm soaking wet. "You little heiffer!" I get in her face. "Why did you do that?!"
"Got cha out of bed, didn't it?!" She sneers at me, then walks out of the room.
"Oh, that b*tch!" I growl. Heh heh, Okay, I admit it. I was a little bit of a foul mouth back then.

The city that we lived in was Chicago a.k.a The Windy City. A few miles away from the downtown area, where a group of apartments, which me, my sister, and mother lived in. Surrounding the apartments where Condos, and houses, which my friends lived in( you will meet them later). If anything, I loved the city. It was always full of life and plus with me being so active, it was the perfect enviorment for me.
It was a sunny saturday morning, and I was feeling bright. "What the hell happened to the Froot Loops?!" Well...sort of bright. "I could have sworn we got a box yesterday." I stare into the empty box of cereal.
"It appears that it's all gone." Xela looks says to me while looking into the box over my shoulder.
"I can see that!" I throw the box down. "But what happened to it?!"
"Hmm, I don't know. Maybe...somebody...at it?!" She rolls her eyes.
"Don't get smart with me. I know that somebody at it, but the question is who?" I look at her with accusing eyes.
"Could it be...hmm...you?!" She glares back at me while zipping up her pants.
"Please! If it was me, I wouldn't be complaining!" I pick up the cereal box and throw it into the trash can.
"Whatever, I don't have time to argue with you. I got to go." She grabs her house keys off the key rack.
"Where are you going?" I pull out another box of Froot Loops.
"I got a job interview, something that a future bum like yourself, wouldn't know anything about." She pokes fun at me.
"Tsst!" I take out a bowl from the cabinet. "I know what a job interview is. It's where you go and suck up to the manager to get the job."
"......I'm leaving, I'll see you later." She heads toward the door.
"Yes I won the arguement and you lost. Failure!" I stick out my tongue at her.
"You didn't lose, I just chose not to win." She opens the door.
"That doesn't make any sense!" I scratch my head.
"An idiot says what?"
"What?"
"Ha! Lame!" She laughs as she walks out the door and closes it.
"Damn it! Why do I always fall for that?" I walk over to the fridge and grab some milk. "She thinks she can just outwit me?" I pour the milk into my cereal and begin to chow down. "Who the hell does she think she is?!" I stuff the spoon full of cereal into my mouth as I walk over to my couch. (Note to the viewers. I was always cranky in the morning, but I loosen up as the day goes on.:thumbsup:)
TAP TAP TAP! I hear a knock on the door. "Aww damn it! I was getting comfortable." I get up from the couch with the spoon still in my mouth. "Who is it?!" I yell as I open my door.
"Umm...is this a bad time?" Ami looks surprised.
"AMI?!" I cough out of the spoon that was in my mouth. Oh, Ami, I've had a crush on that girl for so long. Very beautiful as I just showed you, sincere, and she was from the United Kingdoms, England I think. Ami was the dream girl of most of the guys in my neighborhood. Determined, pretty, intelligent, not to mention that the girl was interested in videogames! HOW OFTEN DO YOU COME ACROSS A GIRL THAT LIKES VIDEOGAMES?!! *Coughs* Ah hum...anyway, though she was the right girl for me, I wasn't really good at speaking to her...or any girl at that matter.
"Um...are you alright?" She chuckles a little.
"Oh, me? I'm fine, just choked on something that deep-throated me..." My god, that didn't sound right. "No no, I mean I choked on my spoon..." Still doesn't sound right. "No no, I mean I sucked my spoon too hard! UGH!" I should have just given up from the start *sighs*
"Heh heh, it's okay. I get what you are saying." Ami smiled warmly at me.
"So...umm...what are you doing here so early?" I lend on the door's edge but soon slips.
"Uh....I was returning your game." She hands me a Playstation 2 game, Kingdom Hearts 2, as I recall it. Yes, back then we were playing games on disk! Not this virtual stuff that you youngins are playing today. And we used controllers, we didn't have those helmets that take you into a computer world. You see? We actually had to be good in hand and eye coordination.
"Oh yeah, thanks." I take the game. "How was it?"
"It was good. I didn't get very far because my little sisters kept interrupting me." She places her hand in her other and swing back and forth a little. God, that looks so cute.
"Yeah, well it gets better as you get futher in the game. Um...you can borrow it some more if ya want." I look the other way, I couldn't look any girl straight in the eyes, I always got nervous.
"Oh thanks!" She takes it back quickly. "Between me and you I really was reluctant to give it back." She chuckles.
"Yeah well it's a good thing you did return it, other wise I would have called the police, hahahahaha..aah." I sigh at the corny joke I just made. There is an awkward silence between us.
"Well...I better get going. I'm almost late for work." She stares at me with her emerald green eyes.
I begin to blush. "Oh, well...um okay, bye." I quickly close the door on her. "Oh man, I'm such a loser! Oh crap, I shut the door on her face!" I open the door again. She is still standing there with a look of bewilderment. "Hey, Ami?"
"Yeah?" She looks confused. God, that was a bad move.
"I was wondering, when you get off of work, maybe we like...could ya know like...umm...like get some like...ice cream?" I stutter.
"Sure!" She shouts a little. "That'll be lovely. I get off at 3:30PM." She trotts off.
"Wait, where do you work?" I call after her.
"At Barnes and Nobles." She turns the hallway of the apartment.
"Barnes and Nobles..the book store? But that's where...Rachelle and Zackery hang out....uuuhhh man." I shut the door and slide down on the floor. "Those two...well not Rachelle, but....Zackery...ohh god, kill me now."

Yes! First Chapter is done, well not really a chapter more like the first part of the story! I really feel this is a break from all the fantasy stories I use to write when I was younger. Don't worry, I still got a lot of memory, and trust me when I say this, THERE ARE A LOT MORE FRIENDS AND FOES THAT WILL BE COMIGN IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! *Coughs* My voice isn't what it use to be. So all you youngins of the year 2052, tell me what ya think, okay?
 
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Finally, something different in the Fanfic secton!!! I can tell already that this is going to be a huge hit, maybe breaking people away from the whole Kingdom Hearts/Final Fantasy/other Fantasy fanfic genre.
 

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Give me a break, Sorasheart281! My mind has to come up with the ideas for a chapter, I actually like to think my stuff through, unlike some people I know....:mellow: *looks at Sorasheart281*

Chapter 2

*Coughs* Ahem! It's good to see you all again on this wonderful day of the year 2052. I feel as though my memory of the year 2006 is rushing through my brain like Whitney Housten on Crack...hahaha...*sighs* You all weren't even born when that woman was alive. I suppose my humor isn't with these times today. Oh well, let me continue with the story.

Where did I leave off? Oh yes, after i so "smoothly" got a little rendezvous with Ami. I remember I was still in my house, trying to figure out what to wear when all of a sudden...
"CHENZIRA!!! MY MOM FOUND YOUR PORN!!!"
....my best friend, Corri, burst into my house. My mother gave him an extra key to our house.
"Um...what?" I walk out of my room with my shirt in my hands.
"My mom went into my room this morning, ya know, to clean up and she stumbled across YOUR porn!" He walks into my room and flops down on my bed.
"Dude, that's your porn. I said you could have it." I put on my shirt.
"But I didn't want it! I don't need it! Unlike you, I have a girl." He picks up one of my manga from the floor and flips through it. "I don't need some pictures to stimulate me." He makes a jerk-off hand gesture to me. Like he never did it! I tell ya that boy was a hypocrite!
"Heh, yeah, sure ya don't. Is that why you held on to my porn?" I pull open my drawer and look for some pants.
"No! I just forgot about it, that's all." He tosses the manga.
"Hey, watch it! I just bought that." I pick up the manga, still in my boxers.
"Whatever...Hey so what are we doing today?" He yawns.
"The same as usual for now, but later on I got to go meet Ami at her job." I smile as I take out a pair of jeans.
"Why, you forgot to give her something?" He asked.
"No." I pull up my jeans.
"She needs your help with something?"
"No." Oh I remember this...my zipper on my pants wouldn't go up.
"You owe her some money?"
"No! Damn zipper." I began to tug at my zipper.
"You shouldn't pull the thing up so hard." Corri watches me.
"I know what i'm doing!" I growl as I pulled the zipper up harder.
"No, seriously dude, I wouldn't be yanking at it so hard!" He says with a smirk.
"You're such a pervert! The stupid thing won't zip up!" I began to get frustrated. Bad idea for guys.
"You're the pervert for thinking I was thinking something perverted!" He snaps back.
"Will you shut up! I'm trying to get this thing up!" I pull on the zipper viciously. "God damn it! You stupide zipper!"
"Just change your pants, idiot." Corri turns on my T.V.
I continue to work at the zipper. "You would like to see that wouldn't you?!" I'm getting a migrane from the zipper.
"If you suck at zipping your pants, just think how you would do when you're trying to unstrapp a bra." Corri sneers.
"SCREW YO--" ZIIIIIIIP!!! "ah....ah..." I couldn't make a sound...that pain was too unbearable.
"Dude, what's your problem now--" Corri looks down at my pants in shock. "....Chenzira..." He whispers to me. "Did....did you just."
"I....I.." I stutter. My hands are still on my zipper that is now pulled up, but with something caught in it.....figure it out, your all teenagers!
"Dude...don't move or scream." Corri tells me.
I glare at Corri with demon eyes. Let his manhood get caught in a zipper and see if he does not scream.
"Ah...ah..." I'm gasp. "ah......AHHHHHHHHHH, MY PEEENIISSSS! AHHHHHH, MOTHERF*CKER, AHHHHHH!" I collaspe to the ground and began to wail in agony. Yes....that was a very painful experience. *holds crouch*
"Dude, shhhh! Calm down." Corri jumps off my bed.
"SCREW YOU, YA BASTERD! AHHHHHHHHH!" I roll on my floor.
"Dude! Come on, shhh." Corri puts a hand to his lips.
"STOP TELLING ME TO BE QUIET AND GO GET SOME ICE!"
"Get what again?"
"GO GET ME SOME F*CKING ICE, YOU DOUCH BAG!"
"First you need to take it out." Corri bends over me. "Move your hand so i can see how much is caught in it."
"GAHHH, GOD, WHAT DID I DO?!" I remove my hands.
".....HOLY SH*T DUDE!" Corri begins to laugh.
"WHAT?! HOW MUCH IS CAUGHT?!" I panick.
"Hahahaa..." Corri laughs. I swear, sometimes i just wanted to kick him straight in the seed flower! "Okay...i'm done laughing. It's not a lot. Just some of the skin from your balls is caught.'
"WELL DON'T JUST STAND THERE! PUSH UNDER THE ZIPPER!" I yell at him.
"No freaking way! I ain't touching that! It's part of your cock!"
"Just do it! I would do the same for you." I'm lying.
"Like hell you would!" Corri knows me to well.
"PLEASE MAN, HELP ME OUT, GOD HELP ME!!!" I cry out.
"Okay okay! But this is just between me and you." Corri closes his eyes as he reaches down to my zipper.
"AHH!" I shriek.
"What?!" He snaps at me.
"YOUR HANDS ARE COLD!" I growl.
"Dude shut up!" He reaches down again. "Oh my god.....i'm touching a dude's penis! AHHHHHHH"
"AHHHHHHHH!" I yell too. I don't know why the hell he is yelling. I'm the one with a zipped up pee pee!


It's still a beautiful morning. The birds are chirping, the sky is blue, and I have ice inside my pants.
"This is so uncomfortable." I waddle down the street with Corri.
"Shut up! At least you didn't have to touch another guys dic--"
"Hey look there's Reizo!" I cut Corri off.
My other close friend, Reizo, was quiet a mysterious one. He was some-what of an atheist and didn't care for church. Back then I didn't know why, but now it all makes since, he seems more at peace with himself and with god now, then he was back when we were kids. I won't tell you why, you'll just have to keep reading to find out:nahnah:.
"How come i'm not surprised to find you two losers here, downtown?" He stared at me. "Why are you standing like that?"
"Because I feel like it." I sneer.
"You freaking wish! Ol num nuts here, got his d*ck caught in his pant's zipper.' Corri frowns.
".........that's more than i wanted to know." Reizo looks at us with an awkrard stare.
"Anyway!" I push Corri. "What are you doing wandering Downtown?" I ask Reizo.
"I'm searching." Reizo eyes the cars that pass us.
"Searching? For what?" Corri looks at him with confusion.
"Hey, Chenzira. Rachelle was looking for you." Reizo ignores the question. "She seems really edgy about something."
"I know what she wants. And she can wait!" I diss the subject.
"What does she want?" Reizo asks.
"Why do you care?" I smirk.
"I don't." He says casually. "Just was curious, but if you are going to play these little games it won't be worth it." Yep that's Reizo for ya, always up front.
"Tsst, whatever." I place one of my hands on my crouch. Still hurts.
"Oh yeah! Reizo check it out! Chenzira has a date with Ami." Corri teases.
"Really? You actually asked a girl out?" Reizo smirks a little.
"Go screw yourselves." I flip them off. "Both of you are just jealous."
"Why? I have a girl." Corri says proudly.
"I don't care for one. It's really irritating to be in a relationship. Kind of pointless, too." Reizo begins to walk and we follow him.
"Why's that?" I ask.
"You're commiting to something that doesn't promise anything." he sighs.
"Nothing's ever promised." Corri informs him.
"Exactly, so what's the point. If anything isn't promised to you, why bother looking foward to it, why bother putting an effort in it?" He looks at both of us. There is an odd silence between the three of us.
"I guess..." I begin. "I guess it's curiosity. Curiosity of what's to come."
"Hmm, Then what if the curiosity leads you to hurt, Chenzira?" He stares into my eyes. When he stared at me like that it was like he was staring into my soul. It was kind of creepy.
"Then get back on your feet and move foward." I whisper
"Heh, you're so unaware." He sighs.
"Man, Reizo, you're such a goth. You're kinda bumming me out." Corri teased Reizo.
"If reality is gothic, then we live in a depressing world." Reizo walks off.
"That dude needs to get laid, BIG TIME." Corri jokes.
"Are you two just going to stand there? I don't like waiting on people." Reizo shouts back at us.
"You go on, I'll catch up with you guys later. And if you see William, tell him that I'm going to kick his ass." I crack my knuckles.
"Why? What did he do." Corri asks.
"Nothing important. I'll see ya later." I walk in the opposite direction as Corri catches up with Reizo.

I walk to the Downtown Park. I use to always go there when I wanted to be alone, it was so peaceful, still is. In fact, the same spot where i'm sitting now is where I was sitting then.
"Ugh!" I moan as I stretch my legs out on the bench. "I need some money." I dig in my pockets and pull out an empty wallet. "What the hell am I supposed to do with Ami, if I don't have any money?"
"You're paying Ami to go on a date with you?" Rachelle snuck up behind me. "You're such a pervert."
"Maybe he was trying to treat her out." James walked behind her.
Okay, these two are my other friends. Let's start off with the crazy one, Rachelle. Ever since I known Rachelle, she has been abusing me. She still does in fact, but it hurts much less now. For some odd reason she always thought she could control me and tell me what to do, I had gotten enough of that from my sister, not to mention that this girl has a chaotic side. Besides her constant nagging and duo personality, she really was a close friend, I kind of seen her as my little crush, but hey...ya know.
James, on the other hand, was a very interesting person. He was a Poet, deep, caring and a little dark...to me. Since my brother was away, I saw James as a person to take my brother's place. I loved to hang around with him, he was always so meaningful. Plus his apartment was cool to relax in.
"You really should stop talking to yourself." Rachelle frowned.
"I ain't talking to myself." I get up from the bench. "And you're one to talk, Miss duo-personality." I flick her head.
"Watch it." She steps back from me.
"What are you doing in the park." James pulls out a sucker.
"Just relaxing."
"Or thinking about how you could pay Ami!" Rachelle glares.
"What?! No way!" I snarl.
"No? Then why were you complaining about not having any money for her? OH!" Rachelle points her finger at me. "You owe her money, don't you?!" She stomps over to me.
"No! I never asked her for a cent!" I defend myself.
"LIAR!" Rachelle grabs me by my neck and puts me in a head-lock. "Asking a girl for money is a sign of a worthless punk! You asked her for money, tell us the truth!"
"I-I am-Ow! Rachelle that hurts!" I could have broken free, but it's best to let her get her frustration out.
"Hmmm, must you two be so affectionate." James chuckle.
"Am not!" She pushes me away. "He started it."
"Hmm, Weren't you the one that accused him of being a perv?" James twirl his sucker around in his mouth.
"But he is!" Rachelle calms down.
"No he isn't." James responds.
"Ha! Thank you Jamesy!" I rub my neck.
"If you would have said he was a Closet Pervert, then that would have been on the target." James smiles.
"DAAAH! WHAT?!" I grab James by the collar. "You're suppose to be on my side, here!"
"What's wrong? It's okay being a closet pervert." He chuckles.
"I'm not a pervert!" I shake his collar as I whine.
"Like hell you aren't! I know what you do in your room at night!" Rachelle lightly punches me in my back. "You read those porn magazines!"
"I do not!" I yell at her.
"Then how come Corri got caught with the magazines you had?" She raises an eyebrow.
"Those aren't mine! I gave them to him!" I shout.
"Oh ho ho! So you are a framer and a closet pervert. Oh Chenzira, I'm so ashamed." James begins to laugh.
"AHHH! STOP CALLING ME A PERVERT OUT LOUD, PEOPLE CAN HERE YOU!" I scream. Everyone in the park stares at me. I'm such a hypocrite.
"Eh...nice one." Rachelle chuckles.
"I don't have to deal with you two! I got plans....CRAP WHAT TIME IS IT?!" I begin to panick.
"About a 3:15." James looks at his watch.
"Crap! I got to go." I begin to run off.
"Hey!" Rachelle screams after me. "You're forgetting that you're supposed to have something for me!"
"Oh yeah." I Unzipp my pants and pull out the bag of ice and throw it at Rachelle, she catches it. "Keep it safe!"
"AHHHHH!" Rachelle drops the bag of ice.
"Wow....I wonder if keeping ice in his pants get's him off." James looks curiously at the bag of ice.
"You....you.....YOU PERVERT!!!!" Rachelle begins to chase after me. "I'LL KILL YOU"
"Damn it. I knew she couldn't take a joke!" I run off.


Thus ends part 2 of my story. I hoped you all enjoyed it. But don't worry like I said before, more interesting Characters will be introduced. Tell me what you all think, ya youngins.
 
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I have a huge problem with the fact you use pictures for appearences. You're supposed to describe them yourself, to give the fanfiction more life.

Eh. Other then that, it's got some potential.
 

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I have a huge problem with the fact you use pictures for appearences. You're supposed to describe them yourself, to give the fanfiction more life.

Eh. Other then that, it's got some potential.


I know I know, I got scolded at by one of my mentors for doing that:cry: I'm sorry, I was being really lazy. But it seems to late to stop using pictures of character, after i went through so much to find the pics that fit the characters. I just don't randomly choose pictures, they have to fit the character and their personality. *Twirsl thumb innocently.* Okay, I take the blame, not one of my better decisions, but keep reading, you won't even notice the pictures. Thanks for all your comments, but give me some time for the next one, I got to set out when which character comes in at what time and location.
 
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