Okay, everyone, something really big has come up in my life, I was hoping it would solve itself, but it didn't, and now I have to deal with it - I'm really sorry, but I'll have to leave this site until at least May -
I'll be back and with a real chappie because by then I'll be done with my semester and with this problem that I have to get under control....it's not something I want to go into detail with, but it deals with my family, and part of my family is going through a really hard time, and with college and finals around the corner - my time is spent.
I'll miss yall T.T but I will return - until then peace and Cloverfield dear friends! T.T
*Hops on Spirit and rides off into the sunset*
Wow, dude...that sucks. I hope you are able to help everything get situated, or at least I hope you're able to pull through the hard times. Good luck and best of wishes.
Also, I recently read Part One in its entirety and enjoyed it thoroughly. I don't have any cc this time, as I wasn't really scanning to improve your writing; I was more or less reading for the enjoyment, but I can easily say that I'm impressed with the crisp imagery of your writing, and also I noticed how none of the words or concpets in your work (or Part 1, as it's the only part I've read) seem to be repetitive or overdrawn. When you come back, I have no doubt that you'll have something else in store for everyone. Perhaps I'll be caught up in reading this by then