Okay! I made this one a while ago(In November or somewhere around there...) but it didn't do so good, probably because I never updated it, SOOOOOO!!! I rewrote it and got the WHOLE story figured out!
I'm trying my best to be more literate so, please rate this!
I'm working on the first chapter right now but here's the prolouge:
Chaos 0: Prolouge
Welcome to our Nightmare.
A thousand years ago, the keyblade wielder managed to seal Kingdom Hearts, sealing away the heartless forever. But, forever didn’t last very long. The heartless started to grow stronger with the longer they stayed behind the door. They changed into their ultima forms, and broke out of Kingdom Hearts, destroying it in the process. Now, the heartless are destroyed every world they can get their claws on! But, there’s still some hope left. If the light and dark keyblader come together to save the worlds, no one will know what the meaning of the word heartless is anymore! But, there’s a price. One keyblader might have to sacrifice themselves just to do it.
The sky continued to grow darker as the rain poured on their heads. A one winged demon stood there, motionless, her eyes glaring at the boy on the ground. The girl started to motion towards the boy as she raised her blood covered dagger. “No...Don’t! Please don’t!” the boy cried out helplessly, hoping she wouldn’t do THAT. “I’m...sorry.” the girl said, lifelessly. The dagger slowly dropped from the demon’s hand. Suddenly, there was a horrific scream, followed by someone laughing. The girl fell onto her knees as her wing disappeared. Sitting in its place was a 13 year old girl, who didn’t look demonic at all. The girl squinted her eyes, asking herself, “What happened...?” She soon realized what did happen. “No...Someone...Shugo! He’s....!” The girl fell onto the ground next to the boy, crying on the muddy ground. Her best friend was gone.
“Aw, what’s wrong, Kris...?” Someone, or something, appeared behind Kris, a grin on their face. Kris instantly stood up and saw what it was. A boy, who looked like he was 15 or 16, stood there, his arms crossed. “You. You did this, didn’t you? DIDN’T YOU!?” The boy shook his head, “You aren’t THAT stupid, are you?” The boy smirked as he said, “Shugo’s dead, and its all your fault!” The words “All your fault” echoed in the girl’s head. Millions of voices chanted in her head. She covered her ears, hoping that they would stop but they just contiuned chanting. She started to feel herself fall. She closed her eyes and started screaming. All that could be heard after that was someone laughing....
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Whatcha think?
I'm working on the first chapter right now but here's the prolouge:
Chaos 0: Prolouge
Welcome to our Nightmare.
A thousand years ago, the keyblade wielder managed to seal Kingdom Hearts, sealing away the heartless forever. But, forever didn’t last very long. The heartless started to grow stronger with the longer they stayed behind the door. They changed into their ultima forms, and broke out of Kingdom Hearts, destroying it in the process. Now, the heartless are destroyed every world they can get their claws on! But, there’s still some hope left. If the light and dark keyblader come together to save the worlds, no one will know what the meaning of the word heartless is anymore! But, there’s a price. One keyblader might have to sacrifice themselves just to do it.
The sky continued to grow darker as the rain poured on their heads. A one winged demon stood there, motionless, her eyes glaring at the boy on the ground. The girl started to motion towards the boy as she raised her blood covered dagger. “No...Don’t! Please don’t!” the boy cried out helplessly, hoping she wouldn’t do THAT. “I’m...sorry.” the girl said, lifelessly. The dagger slowly dropped from the demon’s hand. Suddenly, there was a horrific scream, followed by someone laughing. The girl fell onto her knees as her wing disappeared. Sitting in its place was a 13 year old girl, who didn’t look demonic at all. The girl squinted her eyes, asking herself, “What happened...?” She soon realized what did happen. “No...Someone...Shugo! He’s....!” The girl fell onto the ground next to the boy, crying on the muddy ground. Her best friend was gone.
“Aw, what’s wrong, Kris...?” Someone, or something, appeared behind Kris, a grin on their face. Kris instantly stood up and saw what it was. A boy, who looked like he was 15 or 16, stood there, his arms crossed. “You. You did this, didn’t you? DIDN’T YOU!?” The boy shook his head, “You aren’t THAT stupid, are you?” The boy smirked as he said, “Shugo’s dead, and its all your fault!” The words “All your fault” echoed in the girl’s head. Millions of voices chanted in her head. She covered her ears, hoping that they would stop but they just contiuned chanting. She started to feel herself fall. She closed her eyes and started screaming. All that could be heard after that was someone laughing....
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Whatcha think?