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Fanfiction ► Kingdom Hearts:the Cloudisawesum1 version



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Hey sorry it took so long to update(again).Anyway,NOW FOR THE CHAPTER!!!!!!


Chapter 6:Leaving Traverse Town.


Kairi:What do you mean you can't do anything!There has to be SOMETHING you can do!

Doctor:I'm sorry madam,but there's nothing I can do!

She walks over to Sora's body.

Kairi:............Sora.........

She puts her hand on his hand and lays her forehead on his chest and starts crying.The doctor takes a picture from an X-ray.

Doctor:This shows whats wrong with his heartAs you can see,a majority of his heart is pitch black.I don't know what's wrong but this must be the problem.

Leon walks into the room after the doctor says this.

Leon:His heart has been touched by the darkness.

Kairi:Well so was mine!Why didn't I die?!

Leon:I don't know.The only way you could've survived is if your heart was completely pure light and have no darkness in it.But that would be impossible.There is always at least a shred of darkness even in the purest heart.

Kairi:.........Sora...........

The moniter beeps once,indicating that Sora is just barely alive.

Kairi:.......huh?........Did his heart just beat?

Leon:That's what I heard.

Kairi:Then he's still alive?

Leon:Well barely probably.

The moniter beeps once again.This raised Kairi's hopes of Sora surviving even further.

Kairi:Is there some way we can make him better?

Leon:I really don't know.

Her hopes go down and she starts crying again and puts her head close to Sora's ear and whispers into it.

Kairi:Sora............before you....sniff.........well.......you know.......

That was the only part I heard her whisper.

Leon:What did you tell him?

Her face glows beet red.

Kairi:nothing.

Leon:No it's something.Tell me.

Kairi:NO!

Leon:Tell me.

Leon starts walking torward her in an impatient manner when a familiar voice stops him in his tracks.

Sora:mmmmm..........don't even........touch one of her hairs..............

Kairi:Sora?

They stare at each other,smiling.Kairi continues crying,but from joy.

Sora:............Hey.............Kairi.

Kairi:Sora!

She hugs him and he hugs her back.

Sora:I'm sorry I left you.

Kairi:That's okay.

Sora:Thanks.What happened?

Kairi:You saved the town from a strong heartless.

Sora:Hahahah except that Kairi.

Kairi:..........You lazy bum!

Sora:Why did you call me that?

Kairi:Because you were too lazy to get up when I called you.

Sora:I'm sorry I said.

Kairi:Don't ever do that again.

Sora:I won't.I promise.

Kairi:Okay.

Sora:Kairi...........what did you whisper to me?

Her face glowed beet red once more.

Kairi:Nothing.

Sora:uhhhhh okay.

The two strangers that helped out in the fight walk into Sora's room.

???:Is he awake yet?

Sora:Who me?

?????:Finally your awake!We need to tell you that we've been looking for you!

Sora:You were looking for me?

Kairi:You were looking for him?

Leon:They too have been seeking the wielder of the Keyblade.

Sora:Oh yeah.Where is the Keyblade?

Kairi:Back in Cid's hotel.I told him not to touch it since it would appear in your hand if some one else tried wielding it.

Back in Cid's shop,Cid is staring at the Keyblade hungrily.

Cid:...............

Keyblade:(what are you lookin at gramps?)

Cid:.............Hmm..............it wouldn't hurt to just swing it once.

He gets up off the couch and starts walking torwards the Keyblade.

Keyblade:(Oh hey whoa!Get away from me fool!I'll kill you!)

He picks up the Keyblade happily and swings it.

Keyblade:(Dang your hands are sweaty!Wash your hands will ya?)

Cid:Oof your heavy

Keyblade:(You fool!)

It disappears.

Cid:Huh?!Uhm!Uh!

He walks away outside whisteling as if nothing wierd just happened.

Back in Sora's hospital room, the Keyblade appears in Sora's lap all of a sudden.

Sora:Huh?

Keyblade:(That old coot tried to use me!)

Sora:Looks like Cid didn't listen.

Kairi:We can worry about him later.Go on with why you were looking for Sora.

?????:Well our king went off looking for something,we think he's looking for Ansem's reports.He left us a note telling us to look for"the key to our survival"So we thought he meant you since that key seemed to be the only thing that can destroy the heartless.

Sora:Alright.But what am I supposed to do with it?

Leon:Save the worlds.

Sora:What?How?

Leon:The Keyblade is the only thing that can seal the keyholes in the other worlds.This town must have one also.

Kairi:What's "the keyhole"?

Leon:The keyhole leads to the heart of the world that keyhole is in.And every keyhole must have a key.Thus the Keyblade was made.

Sora:Why do the heartless want to find the keyholes?

Leon:They look for the keyhole so they can go into it and go to the heart of the world and they do something to it.

Kairi:What happens to the world?

Leon:In the end............it just disappears.

Sora,Kairi,and the 2 strangers:WHAT????????!!!!!!!!!!

Leon:That's why the Keyblade is so important.

?????:And we need you to come with us!

Sora:I wonder if I could find my friend.

?????:Of course!

Sora:Really?!

Leon:Sora.........go with them..........especially if you want to find your friends.

The two strangers start whispering to each other.

???:Are ya sure?

?????:Who knows?But we need him to come with us,to help us find the king!

The tall one shrugs and pulls his head away from the shorter one's ear.

Sora:Alright then it's settled!I'm going with you guys to other worlds!

Kairi:You wouldn't last a second without me!So I'm coming too!

Sora:Alright.But what's the point in traveling with some one if you don't their names?

???:The name's Goofy!

He puts his hand out with the back of it facing the ceiling.

?????:Donald Duck!

He puts his hand on Goofy's hand.

Kairi:Mines Kairi!

She puts her hand on Donald's hand.

Sora:And mine's Sora!

Puts his hand slowly on Kairi's hand and blushes a little.

Goofy:All for one and one for all!

A few hours later at the world gate..............

Aerith:Before you go,here's something from all of us.Spend it as you see fit.

Aerith hands them some munny.

Yuffie:They have a lot of great items here!

Leon:Here's something from me.

Leon hands Sora an Elixir and he takes it from Leon.

Sora:Thanks.Uh what does it do?

Leon:It completely heals ONE person's health and allows them to cast more magic.And remember,JUST one.

Sora:I can't cast as much magic as I want?

Donald:No.Especially if you don't know any magic.Here!

He hands Sora a red scroll and Sora recites the words written on it out loud.

Sora:Uh thanks.Ahem.Concentrate and think about fire.Then yell "FIRE".Whoa!

Keyblade:(is it hot?Or is it just me?)

Sora:The Keyblade feels hotter!

Donald:That means you can cast it now!

Kairi:Come on!Let's go!

Sora:Yeah!Let's just go already!

Goofy:Alright!To other worlds!

The 4 joyfully run to the world gate side by side.

HOORAY!!!FINALLY!DONE WITH TRAVERSE TOWN!!!!!!
 
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Oh yeah and i 4got!THE PEOPLE GET TO decide whether Sora and co. go 2 the Coliseum first or do they go 2 Wonderland first?THE FIRST 1 WHO POSTS AFTER THIS DECIDES WHICH WORLD THEY GO 2 FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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i sgree go to the coloseum first THEN go to stinky old wonderland! i wanna see kairi meet cloud!
 

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actually i wanna see PHIL get lovesick for kairi. (he does stuff like that in the movie)
 

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well.................have you been looking in my mind!?cause thats where everything in the story is!(i know its kinda hard 2 believe but i memorized the whole thing)
 

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It's been a long day on the gummi ship and it is now night time.........


Chapter 7:The Coliseum


Kairi:*yawns*

Donald:*driving the gummi ship*

Sora:*watching stars go past*Reminds me of the sunsets back on the island........

Kairi:Yes.......they do.

Goofy:Well it's getting really late so I guess it's time to go to bed.*big yawn*Goodnight.

Donald:Goofy!There's only 2 beds and I'm not sleeping on the floor!

Sora:I'll sleep on the floor.

Kairi:What?No it's okay Sora I'll sleep on the fl...

Sora:No you won't!I will.

Goofy:Ah,that means I have to sleep on the floor also_Oh well.Goodnight.*falls asleep on the floor*

Donald:Wow that was fast.

Kairi:*shivers*

Sora:*puts a blanket around Kairi*Alright time for bed*walks Kairi to the bed*

Donald:*switches engine off*Night.....um.........Sora.

Sora:Night*lays down on the floor*

The next day........

Donald:WAKE UP EVERYBODY!We've reached a new world!

Sora:WHAT!*jumps up and looks out the cockpit*

Kairi:*walks up next to Sora*There's a building over there.*points at Coliseum*

Goofy:*yawns*Well let's go!*jumps out and runs to the gates*

Donald:Wait for me!*follows Goofy*

Sora:Uh,are you guys just going to leave us?*follows Donald*

Kairi:Sora!Wait for me!*follows Sora*

Goofy:Huh?*looks up at the top of the gate*

Donald:That's big!

Sora:*opens the gate*What are we waiting for?

Kairi:*walks in*GASP!It's beautiful!*looks around*

Donald:Wow!*also looks around*

Goofy:*looks around with mouth open*

Sora:*walks beside Kairi and looks around also*What is this place?

Kairi:Well let's go further!*runs to a pair of doors*

Sora:Right!*runs after her*

Donald&Goofy:*run after the 2*

Inside.............

Satyr:*carving rules into the stone walls*

Sora:*walks up behind the Satyr*Uuuuuuuuuum.......

Satyr:Good timing!Give me a hand will ya?Move that pedestal over.I gotta spruce this place up for the games.

Sora:O........k*walks to the pedestal*

Kairi:You can do it!

Sora:*pushes it*

Pedestal:*stays in the same spot*................

Sora:*starts sweating*It weighs a ton!*stops pushing*

Kairi:It's okay Sora.No one could have done it.

Sora:It's way too heavy!

Satyr:*stops carving*TOO HEAVY?!Since when have you been such a little.*turns around and sees Sora*Oh!Wrong guy!Who are you clowns?

Sora:The names Sora shorty!Who are you?And what is this place?

Satyr:The name's Phil.This here is the world famous Coliseum.Heroes only!

Sora,Kairi,Donald,and Goofy:*Glares at Phil*

Phil:Look it's like this:Heroes are coming from all over to fight ferocious monsters in the arena.But weaklings like you wouldn't make it past the first round!

Donald:*folds arms*You've got heroes standing right in front of you!

Kairi:Yeah!Sora's a real hero!

Goofy:*puts hands on Sora's shoulders*Yep.He's a real hero chosen by the Keyblade!

Keyblade:(That's right midget!So back off!)

Phil:WHAT?!That runt!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*starts wheezing*

Everyone:*Glares at Phil*

Phil:*stops laughing and walks over to the pedestal*If you can't even..*starts pushing*move this........*pushes with his back*You can't be........*grunt*...A HERO!*falls*

Sora&Kairi:*smirk*

Phil:Alright........it takes more than brawn to be a hero.Well.......well let's see what you can do in "The Trials"

BUM BUM BUM!!!!THE TRIALS!
 
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dont be sad! that was a good chappy! u do FANTASTIC writing! soras going to the tests? *shivers* post soon!
 

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Phil:Alright......well.....well let's see what you can do in "The trials!"


Chapter 8: The Trials



Sora:The trials?

Phil:If you pass the trials you can enter the games.

Kairi:Might as well let him enter any ways!He'll pass the trials!

Donald:That's right!

Goofy:Uh-huh.

Phil:But there's a fee to try the trials.

Sora:Ummm how much?

Phil:1000000 munny.

Sora:But we only have 100 munny!

Phil:That little lady over there might be worth 1000000 munny!She's so hot!

Kairi:*Looks at Phil in disgust*

Sora:*Lunges at Phil and puts the Keyblade to his throat*How about I let you live and you let us enter the games!

Phil:*cough*ALRIGHT!*cough cough*JUST GET OFF OF ME I'M CHOKING!*cough*

Kairi:Should've just let him choke.*glares at Phil*

Phil:*whispers to himself*mmm I like 'em fiesty!

Sora:That's it!*Prepares to hit Phil*

Goofy&Donald:*grab Sora's arms*

Kairi:Sora!Stop it!

Phil:ALRIGHT JUST GO THROUGH THAT DOOR AND WAIT FOR ME!

Sora:*pushes free of Donald and Goofy and walks through the door watching Phil*

Phil:*points to another door*That way leads to the stands*

Kairi,Donald,&Goofy:*Go up to the stands*

Out in the arena of The Coliseum..........

Phil:You must break all the barrels within 25 seconds!

Sora:That's it?

Phil:The barrels are scattered all over the place and there are 20 barrels!

Sora:*looks around*This might be harder than I thought.

Phil:Ready.........

Sora:*prepares to run*

Phil:Set...........

Sora:*gets out Keyblade*

Phil:...................

Sora:..................

Kairi,Donald,and Goofy:..................

Keyblade:(JUST SAY GO ALREADY!DAMN THIS IS TAKING FOR EVER!!!)

Phil:...........GO!

Sora:*lunges at the closest barrel and throws it at another*

Phil:23 seconds left.18 more barrels.

Sora:*hits another barrel torward a stack of 3 barrels*

Phil:20 seconds left.12 more barrels.

Kairi:GO SORA!

Goofy!:*eats Roman popcorn*mmmmmm this is good!

Donald:YEAH!

Sora:*swats a barrel toward the wall*

Phil:17 seconds left.11 more barrels.

Sora:*runs torward the wall*

Phil:16 seconds!

Sora:*pushes off the wall and hits 3 barrels before he hits the ground*

Phil:14 seconds left!8 more barrels!

Goofy:Garsh,that was a nice move!

Kairi:COOL!

Donald:woooooooooooooooow!

Sora:*throws the Keyblade at a barrel and causes it to hit another barrel*

Phil:10 seconds left!6 more barrels!

Sora:*runs torward a barrel thats partly buried and lifts it*

Phil:8 seconds left!

Sora:*throws it torward another 3 barrel stack*

Phil:6 second!3 barrels!

Sora:*hits a barrel torward another*

Phil:3 seconds left!1 barrel left!

Sora:*runs torward the last barrel*

Phil:2!

Sora:*lifts the Keyblade in the air*

Kairi,Donald,and Goofy:*watch in suspense*

Phil:1!

Sora:*smashes the barrel*

Phil:*blows a whistle*...........Come over here.

Kairi:gasp!What's wrong?

Goofy:Uh-oh.

Donald:I don't think he passed........

Sora:*walks depressingly to Phil*

Phil:*Lifts Sora's hand in the air*SORA HAS PASSED THE TRIAL!

Sora:*looks at Phil*

Kairi:YEAH SORA!*hops off the stands and runs torward Sora*

Donald&Goofy:HOORAY!

Kairi:*hugs Sora*Congratulations Sora!

Sora:*blushes*

They just stand there hugging each other for a while.

Phil:................

Donald&Goofy:..............

Sora:Ummm..........Kairi?

Kairi:Hmm?

Sora:You can let go now.

Kairi:Oh*lets go of Sora and blushes*Sorry about that.

Sora:It's okay.

Phil:You did pretty well kid.

Sora:*laughs*Looks like I'm headed for the games!

Phil:Afraid not!

Kairi:GASP!

Donald:WHAT!

Goofy:Huh?

Sora:Why not!*looks angrily at Phil*

Phil:TWO WORDS!you guys ain't heroes!

Sora:BUT I PASSED!

Goofy:*counts his fingers*

Donald:You big paooka!

Kairi:That's 4 words!

Phil:Close enough!

Sora:Fine!I didn't want to enter your stupid games anyway!Let's go guys!*goes out the doors*

Kairi,Donald,and Goofy:*follow Sora*

Outside the Coliseum..............

?????:Mmmmmmmm bit of a hot-head isn't that old goat?

Kairi:Huh?

Sora:*turns around*do I know you?

Donald:Who are you!?

?????:Whoa hey wait there fuzz boy.Names Hades Lord of the Underworld.And have I got something for you!*walks behind Sora*

Sora:*watches Hades cautiously*

Hade:*a pass appears in his hands*Cha-ching!Here you go.*gives Sora the pass*

Sora:*takes it*A pass?

Hades:Keep it if you want to enter.*disappears in a puff of smoke*I'm rooting for ya little shorty.

YAY!SORA GETS TO ENTER THE GAMES NOW!but that Hades guy is a bit suspicious dont cha think?anyway i hope i get 2 write the next chapter soon!
 
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FINALLY MY FANS R BACK!now for the chapter!


Chapter 9:Cerberus's Interruption


Sora:Well let's go back since I got a pass now.

Kairi:Alright.

Donald:I hope he let's all three of us enter with one pass.

Sora:What do you mean?

Goofy:It'll be easier if three people are on a team than just one.

Sora:Oh.Haha thanks guys.

In the lobby........

Phil:WHAT!How did you guys get this!?

Sora:The only thing that matters is that we can get in the games now.

Phil:.........*grunst*Alright.The preliminarys are first.

Donald:Can me and Goofy enter with him?

Goofy:Yeah.

Phil:Alright.Just stop bothering me and get out there!

Kairi:I'll be watching you guys!

I'd type up the fight scenes against all those heartless but that would take up too much space so I'll skip to the last round.

Phil:The Final Preliminary Match!Sora,Donald,and Goofy vs. the One Winged Angel.....CLOUD STRIFE!

Sora:*holds out his hand*

Cloud:*shakes Sora's hand*

Phil:Ready!3.......2........1..........

Sora:*starts sweating*

Cloud:*gets out Ultima Weapon*

Goofy:*puts shield in front of him*

Donald:*gets ready to cast magic*

Phil:FIGHT!

Cloud:*rushes past Sora and strikes him*

Sora:*falls down*Whoa that was fast!

Donald:*casts fire*

Cloud:*rolls out of the way*

Sora:*hits Cloud*

Cloud:*gets hit but backs away quickly*Is that the best you can do?

Goofy:*runs at Cloud*

Cloud:YAH!*hits Goofy to the side*

Donald:*casts fire*

Sora:FIRE*also casts fire*

Cloud:Ugh*guards himself*

Kairi:YOU CAN DO IT!

Goofy:C'mon!*uses Charge*

Cloud:Arg!*knocks into the wall and gets knocked out*

Sora:Now's our chance!*runs at Cloud*

Goofy:*running next to Sora*

Donald:*casts Fire*

Cloud:*wakes up*Nuisance

Sora:*lunges at Cloud and hits him 3 times*

Cloud:*uses Sonic Blade*

Sora:Un!

Goofy:Oof!

Donald:*runs away from Cloud*

Cloud:*repeatedly uses Sonic Blade on Sora*

Sora:*uses Guard*

Cloud:*stops and lifts Ultima Weapon in the air*

Goofy:*runs hard into Cloud*

Cloud:Arg!*red electricity surrounds him*

Sora:Wha-what's happening?

Cloud:*reveals a torn up-looking wing and flys torwards Sora*

Donald:*gets in the way*

Cloud:*rams Donald into the wall and continues flying torward Sora*

Sora:*lifts Keyblade*

Cloud:*hits Sora*

Goofy:*charges quickly at Cloud*

Cloud:*hits Goofy to the side*

Sora:*hits Cloud*

Cloud:*deflects it without the Ultima Weapon*

Sora:What happened?You deflected it without your weapon!

Cloud:Omnislash.......*hits Sora*C'mon.......give me your best shot!

Donald:*casts Fire*That good enough?

Cloud:*deflects it*Not even close

Sora:Grrrrr*hits Cloud repeatedly*

Goofy:*uses Charge on Cloud*

Cloud:Unh!*gets knocked out again*

Sora:ARR!*rages out on Cloud*

Cloud:*falls to the ground*

Sora:*still hitting Cloud*

Phil:*blows whistle*ENOUGH!He's knocked out already.You won.The last thing we want is a casualty.

Sora:*stops*

Cloud:*lifts his head*Should've just finished me off*uses Omnislash again only on Sora this time*

Kairi:He's cheating!He lost already!

Phil:Cloud Strife!Disqualified for being a poor sport!You lost already!

Sora:*falls on one knee*

Cloud:*raises Ultima Weapon*

Sora:*waits for his demise*

Cloud:*puts Ultima Weapon down*

Sora:*looks up and sees a giant black silhouette*

Cloud:*looks behind him*

Giant 3-headed dog:*stomps Cloud**growls and roars*

Donald:RUN*runs back to the lobby*

Goofy:Wait for me!*runs after Donald*

Phil:KID!Let's go!

Sora:I'll hold it off!

Phil:Ya can't beat that thing alone!

Kairi:Sora!Run!

Sora:GO!

3 Headed dog:*lunges at Sora*

????????:*stops the dog*

Phil:HERC!

Hercules:phil!Get them outta here!

Phil:ALRIGHT KID!*runs to the lobby*Let's go!

Sora:*hops up on the stands*

Kairi:*stares in fear at the dog*

Sora:*picks up Kairi*Let's go!*runs to the lobby*

Kairi:*shakes her head*What happened?

Sora:A dog just interrupted the preliminarys

Kairi:Oh yeah.

Phil:That was Cerberus.The guardian of the Underworld.But Herc should be able to handle him.Or maybe not.*puts hand on head*Oh this isn't good!

Sora:*puts Kairi on the pedestal*Stay here.We're going to fight Cerberus.

Kairi:Be careful out there Sora.

Sora:I'm not going to leave you again.

Phil:You can't just go out there!This isn't some fight!This is real!
 
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