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Woo-hoo! Chapter 10.
I hope you guys liked that chapter. Chapter 11 coming soon.
Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Keyhole
Chapter 10:
Sora looked at Ansem in disbelief.
"How did you come back?" asked Sora.
"Easy, Maleficent brought me back so I could finish you off while she gets The Lost Keyhole"
"What's in it for you, she has to be paying you or something, right?"
"Yes but that's none of your business"
Sora started to get angry with Ansem, he grabbed his Keyblade and jumped up at the balcony where Ansem was.
He struck his Keyblade at Ansem but he bounced off of the force field Ansem had put around himself.
Sora crashed to the ground, Donald quickly healed Sora.
He got up blood dripping out of his nose.
Ansem came down from the balcony and he summoned his Dark Guardian.
The guardian picked up Sora and threw him against the wall.
Donald started using fire spells on Ansem and the guardian but it didn't effect them.
Goofy and Mickey heard what was going on and they came into the cave.
Mickey summoned his Keyblade and ran over and bashed Ansem in his face.
The blow effected the guardian also.
Ansem got his own Keyblade and they fought.
Mickey dodged Ansem's attacks easily, Goofy jumped on the back of the guardian.
Goofy hit the guardian at least 120 times before it threw him off of his back.
The guardian started to bleed darkness from the attacks that he took from Goofy.
Ansem started to get weak and he ran up to the balcony and disappeared through a black hole in the wall.
Mickey ran up to Sora and helped him up.
"Where is that idiot?" asked Sora.
"He disappeared, he was starting to get weak" replied Mickey.
Sora got up and wiped the blood off of his mouth.
"Where are they Squall?" asked Yuffie.
"Don't ever call me Squall, and I don't know where they are, they just disappeared in front of us" replied Leon.
"Darn it!" said Cid as his radar broke.
"What happened?" asked Aerith.
"My darn radar broke, it was the only way we could find Sora and the rest" replied Cid.
Cloud got up from his seat and grabbed some tools.
"What are you doing?" asked Tifa.
"I'm gonna fix the old man's radar" replied Cloud.
Cloud opened up a door at the bottom of the radar and started to work on it.
"I'm not an old man pretty boy!!" yelled Cid.
"Shut up, I won't help you if you keep on yelling at me" said Cloud.
Terra looked out the window of the Library.
Riku was on his left.
"I feel like I need to help them out" said Terra.
"Why? They're fine" asked Riku.
"No they're not, I can feel it in my heart!" said Terra.
"Fine, but I don't what to do or where to look"
"We just need to take a Gummi Ship and look for them in different worlds"
"Alright... but I'm telling you they're fine" said Riku.
Kairi ran up to them.
"You're leaving?" asked Kairi.
"Yes, we're going to look for Sora, Mickey, Donald, and Goofy" replied Riku.
"Then, I'm coming too!" said Kairi.
"No... the castle is still full of darkness and someone has to protect the queen" said Terra.
"Fine..."
Terra and Riku headed for the Gummi Ship.
Chapter 10:
Sora looked at Ansem in disbelief.
"How did you come back?" asked Sora.
"Easy, Maleficent brought me back so I could finish you off while she gets The Lost Keyhole"
"What's in it for you, she has to be paying you or something, right?"
"Yes but that's none of your business"
Sora started to get angry with Ansem, he grabbed his Keyblade and jumped up at the balcony where Ansem was.
He struck his Keyblade at Ansem but he bounced off of the force field Ansem had put around himself.
Sora crashed to the ground, Donald quickly healed Sora.
He got up blood dripping out of his nose.
Ansem came down from the balcony and he summoned his Dark Guardian.
The guardian picked up Sora and threw him against the wall.
Donald started using fire spells on Ansem and the guardian but it didn't effect them.
Goofy and Mickey heard what was going on and they came into the cave.
Mickey summoned his Keyblade and ran over and bashed Ansem in his face.
The blow effected the guardian also.
Ansem got his own Keyblade and they fought.
Mickey dodged Ansem's attacks easily, Goofy jumped on the back of the guardian.
Goofy hit the guardian at least 120 times before it threw him off of his back.
The guardian started to bleed darkness from the attacks that he took from Goofy.
Ansem started to get weak and he ran up to the balcony and disappeared through a black hole in the wall.
Mickey ran up to Sora and helped him up.
"Where is that idiot?" asked Sora.
"He disappeared, he was starting to get weak" replied Mickey.
Sora got up and wiped the blood off of his mouth.
"Where are they Squall?" asked Yuffie.
"Don't ever call me Squall, and I don't know where they are, they just disappeared in front of us" replied Leon.
"Darn it!" said Cid as his radar broke.
"What happened?" asked Aerith.
"My darn radar broke, it was the only way we could find Sora and the rest" replied Cid.
Cloud got up from his seat and grabbed some tools.
"What are you doing?" asked Tifa.
"I'm gonna fix the old man's radar" replied Cloud.
Cloud opened up a door at the bottom of the radar and started to work on it.
"I'm not an old man pretty boy!!" yelled Cid.
"Shut up, I won't help you if you keep on yelling at me" said Cloud.
Terra looked out the window of the Library.
Riku was on his left.
"I feel like I need to help them out" said Terra.
"Why? They're fine" asked Riku.
"No they're not, I can feel it in my heart!" said Terra.
"Fine, but I don't what to do or where to look"
"We just need to take a Gummi Ship and look for them in different worlds"
"Alright... but I'm telling you they're fine" said Riku.
Kairi ran up to them.
"You're leaving?" asked Kairi.
"Yes, we're going to look for Sora, Mickey, Donald, and Goofy" replied Riku.
"Then, I'm coming too!" said Kairi.
"No... the castle is still full of darkness and someone has to protect the queen" said Terra.
"Fine..."
Terra and Riku headed for the Gummi Ship.
I hope you guys liked that chapter. Chapter 11 coming soon.
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Hooray, new update!!! I really liked the banter between Leon and the gang, especially Cloud; it's always good to see Cloud talk. God, Ansem is such a douchebag. Seroiusly, someone needs to hand him his ass. Also, I am loving Terra more and more. It's good to see him more emotional, especially since he is so hard. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
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As your chapters have progressed, I must say that your talents as a writer have really flourished. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks, chapter 3 is officially up and, well, I already told you that. Check it out when you get a chance.
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Ugh, I waited and then Ansem got away! NO! Ansem is such a jerk! I want him to get hurt! Again great chapter!
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Haha. Chapter 11 will be out tomorrow or Saturday, I've just been so busy with my Little League baseball team.
Awesome story.If we were judging I would it 10
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I like the way how you always make new twists and turns to the story
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Thanks, I'm trying to come up with something for Chapter 11 but nothing's coming to me.
You could have Ansem come back and try to kidnap Sora and the others again but instead he could fight Terra and Riku
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Then try it out if you don't like it think of something and I'll help
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Tell me how it goes tommorow and if goes bad you got me to help out.Okay
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I got something! But I'm not gonna be able to post it until tomorrow, I'm busy right now.
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