Fanfiction ► Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Keyhole

[Efflictim]

Lolll at Kairi whining over Sora. (Another excuse why I shouldn't read books! Yay)

Good job as usual, keep it up

Thanks Sugarmelts

 

[Efflictim]

Here it is the final chapter.

Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Keyhole
Chapter 13:​

"So now that we're out of there I can tell you what I know about the Lost Keyhole" said Terra.
"What about it?" asked Sora.
"I know it's location" replied Terra.
"Wha-what, where?" asked Mickey.
"The Land Of Keys" said Terra.
"But I thought it was destroyed" said Mickey.
"Yeah I thought so too, but it turns out that Sora's home is, all of the houses that were built there covered the crossroads" said Terra.
"The Islands?" asked Sora.
"Yes"
"Okay, we're gonna need all of us to find the Keyhole, we're going back to the castle to get Kairi and Minnie" said Mickey as he headed for the castle.​

Kairi sat in the chair worrying about Sora.
"Don't worry Kairi, he'll be back soon" said Minnie.
"I know...." said Kairi.
"What?" said Minnie as she pointed to the hallway.
The darkness started to disappear.
"Does this mean she's leaving?" asked Kairi.
"I think so" said Minnie.
Kairi ran to the window and saw a Gummi Ship landing in the Gummi Hangar.
"It's them!" she yelled.
Kairi and Minnie ran to there.
"Hi guys, did you miss us?" asked Sora.
Kairi ran up to Sora and hugged him tightly.
They came face to face and kissed!
"Uh....... Sora?" asked Riku as he looked at the two.
Sora hugged Kairi and they went to the Library.
"Okay, so here's why we came back, as you may know Terra has found the location of the Lost Keyhole, we're going to need all the people we to find the Keyhole, so Minnie, Kairi, you're coming with us" said Mickey.
"Yes, finally I can go on an adventure!" said Kairi.
"Okay so we need to go now before Maleficent finds it" said Mickey.
They went to Gummi Ship.​

"So, uh, have you found them yet Leon?" asked Yuffie.
"No, but-" Leon was interupted by someone trying to comunicate with them through their intercom.
"Yes? Hello?" asked Leon as he picked up the intercom.
"Leon? Is that you?" asked a voice on the other end.
"Yes! Who is this?" asked Leon
"It's Mickey, we know the location of the Lost Keyhole, it's at Sora's Islands, I'm sending you the coordinates now" said Mickey.
"Okay, we'll be right there your majesty" said Leon.​

Sora and the rest arrived at the Islands.
"What is that?" asked Sora as he pointed at the middle of the ocean where there was a big black hole.
"Maleficent is here, we have to hurry" said Mickey.
They ran to the place where Terra said the Keyhole would be.
"Minnie, Donald, use your magic to lift the houses up!" yelled Mickey.
They lifted the houses and sure enough the Keyhole was there.
Sora, Riku, Terra, Kairi, and Mickey lifted their keyblades in the air trying to lock the Keyhole but Maleficent showed up and distracted them.
"Hello there idiots!" said Maleficent.
"You really thought I was just gonna let you lock the Keyhole this easily?"
Leon and the gang showed up.
It was 15 against 1 but Maleficent was powerful, very powerful.
She quickly defeated Cid, Aerith, Yuffie and Minnie.
Sora jumped on top of a house and used a fire spell on her but it just bounced off of her.
Then she defeated Leon, Cloud and Tifa.
Kairi started attacking Maleficent, she was actually wearing her down but Maleficent grabbed her and threw her on the ground, she became unconcious.
Terra and Riku were also defeated.
Now it was just Mickey and Sora.
Maleficent grabbed Mickey by the neck and threw him into a house.​

Now it was Sora vs. Maleficent.
"You're a lot stronger from the last time I saw you Maleficent" said Sora.
Sora jumped at Maleficent and hit her in the face, she wiped the blood off of her mouth and continued fighting.
Sora jumped again but it failed as she took the Keyblade away from him.
Sora was now defenseless.
Maleficent threw her staff at Sora.
Sora knew he was about to die.
Right before it hit Sora Kairi ran in front of it and the staff struck and killed her.
Sora grabbed Kairi and started crying.
"Why did you do that?" asked Sora.
"Because I love you" replied Kairi.
Kairi layed there and died.
Sora grabbed the staff and threw it at Maleficent, she quickly disappeared and left the Keyblade behind.
Sora grabbed the Keyblade and went to the Keyhole.
But right when he was about to lock it, it disappeared.
"No!!!!" screamed Sora.
He started hitting the ground with his Keyblade in frustration.
Everyone that was defeated by Maleficent had now woken up.
"I'm gonna get you Maleficent, you're gonna pay for what you've done" said Sora.​

To be continued in my new fanfic:
Kingdom Hearts: Revenge of Death​

Alright guys, that's a rap for The Lost Keyhole, Revenge of Death will be out sometime this week or the week after that.​

 

[Chakolat Strawberry]

They came face to face and kissed!

noooo!!!!

Kairi layed there and died.

yaaaay!!!

Overall, this is very good! I think you could be a little more descriptive in a few parts though. But it's very nice!

Can't wait for the next fanfic :]

 

[UltraVen]

That is the meaning of excellence.This is the best chapter ever

 

[Efflictim]

noooo!!!!

yaaaay!!!

Overall, this is very good! I think you could be a little more descriptive in a few parts though. But it's very nice!

Can't wait for the next fanfic :]

That is the meaning of excellence.This is the best chapter ever

Thanks guys

 

[Deleted member]

Dude, S/R/K, that was totally awesome!!! Hooray, you killed Kairi!!! Not trying to be mean, but I really dislike her, and that was probably the most useful thing she did all throughout the story. Now, with that being said, I don't like the fact that Sora is upset and angry. He is one of my favorite characters, and I hate when my heroes get like that. I hope Sora kills Maleficent and finds a new girlfriend (one that is nothing like Kairi, of course) in the next story. Anyway, great job on the story, and I eagerly await the sequel.

 

[Efflictim]

Dude, S/R/K, that was totally awesome!!! Hooray, you killed Kairi!!! Not trying to be mean, but I really dislike her, and that was probably the most useful thing she did all throughout the story. Now, with that being said, I don't like the fact that Sora is upset and angry. He is one of my favorite characters, and I hate when my heroes get like that. I hope Sora kills Maleficent and finds a new girlfriend (one that is nothing like Kairi, of course) in the next story. Anyway, great job on the story, and I eagerly await the sequel.

Thanks!

 

[Neko]

Dude, that was wicked awesome! I loved it! You killed Kairi off! You also gave her purpose, which she needed. =)

 

[Sapphire Skies]

Haha, about time Kairi died...
*Watches Kairi Haters rejoice*
I liked it but a bit hard to follow because of all the characters that talked, I got lost sometimes hehe.
Overall I liked the whole fanfic, can't wait for part two to be posted ^^

 

[Efflictim]

Haha, about time Kairi died...
*Watches Kairi Haters rejoice*
I liked it but a bit hard to follow because of all the characters that talked, I got lost sometimes hehe.
Overall I liked the whole fanfic, can't wait for part two to be posted ^^

Thanks CC4E!

I wonder what Rain would say if she saw that I killed Kairi off, hmmmm.

 

[Neko]

Thanks CC4E!

I wonder what Rain would say if she saw that I killed Kairi off, hmmmm.

I wonder too...who knows how Rain would react. =)

 

[Sapphire Skies]

Probably be a bit happy and probably thinking "Sure, Kairi was a failure for an important character but killing her is a bit drastic..." But I have no idea what she's thinking.

 

[revarai20]

I might finish more of your fanfic later but so far, it looks good. Hopefully you've improved a bit on your writing since it was kind of hard to read the first three chapters.

 

[Efflictim]

I might finish more of your fanfic later but so far, it looks good. Hopefully you've improved a bit on your writing since it was kind of hard to read the first three chapters.

Yeah the first three chapters suck badly but the rest is good.

 

[Passion]

Oooo!
I liked it!
It's an interestnig plotline you've got going on!
I love how Kairi's all whinny, finds Sora again, kisses, and then dies...
I think I died of laughter when that all happened.
You could be a bit more descriptive in your writing to have an even LARGER impact on your readers, but I guess I'll deal with it.
You could have spaced out when people talked a little bit more so that the conversations could be a little bit easier to follow.
Overall, I liked it!
Just needs some minor improvements but served it's purpose of being an entertaining fanfic =D

 

[Efflictim]

Oooo!
I liked it!
It's an interestnig plotline you've got going on!
I love how Kairi's all whinny, finds Sora again, kisses, and then dies...
I think I died of laughter when that all happened.
You could be a bit more descriptive in your writing to have an even LARGER impact on your readers, but I guess I'll deal with it.
You could have spaced out when people talked a little bit more so that the conversations could be a little bit easier to follow.
Overall, I liked it!
Just needs some minor improvements but served it's purpose of being an entertaining fanfic =D

Thanks

 

[Zipporahss]

noooo!!!!

yaaaay!!!

Overall, this is very good! I think you could be a little more descriptive in a few parts though. But it's very nice!

Can't wait for the next fanfic :]

What? You thought Kairi's death was cool? NO~!

I love this story but I thought that Kairi and Sora were going to be together! NO! Why Kairi why!

Awesome story! I liked chapter 12 too.

And is everybody whom is reading thi fanfic a Kairi hater?! Not that I like Kairi, I like Namine more but I don't hate her but geez you all praised her death. Is there some kind a hatred-fan-club for Kairi or something?

 

[Efflictim]

What? You thought Kairi's death was cool? NO~!

I love this story but I thought that Kairi and Sora were going to be together! NO! Why Kairi why!

Awesome story! I liked chapter 12 too.

Thanks, the prequel of the sequel is out now, check it out if you want

 

[Zipporahss]

Thanks, the prequel of the sequel is out now, check it out if you want

Ugh! You gotta be joking! You have a prequel to the sequel already?

 

[Efflictim]

Ugh! You gotta be joking! You have a prequel to the sequel already?

Yup.