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Okay, guys. This is my first fanfic. This fanfic includes some Kingdom Hearts characters, as well as my own, original characters. This is all takes place at the starting of Kingdom Hearts, but it does not follow the same story line at all.
This fanfic has very different concepts in it from the original Kingdom Hearts.
I personally think this is a pretty good fanfic that I wrote here with a great ending to it at the end. This is a very different fanfic than what you have read before, as it mixes new, original characters with the Kingdom Hearts characters. Even though it starts off kind of traditionally, when it starts to get going, it's good.
So please, give this fanfic a read. Even if you don't like it straight off, you soon will as it gets into the story. And the ending will blow your mind. But that won't be here for a while. Anyway, I hope you really enjoy my very first fanfic! This should be enjoyable!
"Wake up, Sora. Come on, wake up!" Kairi was tugging and pulling on Sora, who had dozed off on the docks.
"Wha-wha? Stop Kairi!" Sora said, still groggy and unaware of anything that happened.
"Sora, your such a lazy bum! You fell asleep on the docks again!"
"Huh? Oh!" sora jerked up quickly and stood up, brushing himself off, smiling and laughing weakly.
Kairi started laughing. "Sora, I can't believe you! I knew I'd find you resting on the docks like you always do here."
Sora smiled too, but had this wierd feeling that something was wrong. Something just wasn't quite right. Perhaps it was how the sun didn't reflect off the clear, blue water; perhaps not.
Kairi walked by Sora and stared off into the sea. "We have to get ready forthe event. You remember, don't you?" Kairi turned her head to look at Sora. It was wierd.
That's when it hit him. The feeling of uneasiness and security suddenly became all too clear. The thing was, he didn't remember. In fact, he had no idea what Kairi was talking about.
"Wait a second!" he said, frightened. "I've never dozed off on the docks before!"
Kairi just kept staring at him.
"And what are you talking about? What event? What's going to happen?"
Kairi just still kept staring at Sora. It was eerie.
Sora stepped back in fear. His voice soft and frightened. "Wait a second. What's going on?"
Suddenly an enormous, booming ripple violently tore threw the whole mainland. A thunderous explosion ripped through the sky.
The force was so powerful, it knocked Sora off the end of the docks. He was sent falling towards the water. But it appeared as if it wasn't there, because before he knew it, Sora was falling through the sky.
Sora fell towards a huge, blinding, semi-circle, white light and was engulfed in it.
He was suddenly standing on a skinny cliff with grass blowing peacefully in the wind. It was a moonless night. The stars were glimmering unusually brightly.
Sora looked around and saw Riku standing on the brink of the cliff, looking up at the stars and overlooking the forest and mountains way below.
"Riku!" Sora called, surprised.
Riku turned aroune and looked at Sora, unspeaking, and a malicious grin on his face and an evil glint in his creamy, sea-green eyes. He suddenly began to fall backwards off the edge of the cliff.
"Riku! No!" Sora screamed. He ran to him, trying to get there in time to break his fall... But just as Sora got to the brink of the cliff, Riku dissapeared, and in his place stood a tall figure in a black, hooded trenchcoat. The figure turned around to face Sora.
Sora tried as hard as he could to make out a face underneath the hood, but all he could see was the faint outline of a face, nothing else.
The black figure slowly lifted his hands and placed them on the hood, slowly edging ot off.
Sora desperately gazed into the face off the hooded figure, which was soon to be recognizable.
The tall fugure continued to slowly edge the hood off. It was almost off. And Sora could almost see its face.
But just as the face was about to became recognizable, there was nothing.
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Rays of sunight beamed through the bedroom window and hit Sora's face. He shot up in his bed, gasping. Cold beads of sweat dripped from his face, dampening his sheets. Sora looked around the room, and sighed. Another dream. The first one in months.
"No, they can't be coming back," Sora said to himself, more hoping than stating.
A few months ago, Sora would have haunting, disturbing dreams. It happened whenever he laid his head down to go to sleep. But he hadn't had another dream in months. He thought he had shaken them off finally. But here he was. It was morning and he has just woken up frm another disturbing dream. He had never gotten any sleep with them, and here they were again.
Sora was curious, though. This deram had been different from all the others. It was the first time that he had seen Riku falling off a cliff. But he dismissed it.
What he really focused on was the tall, hooded figure in the black trenchcoat. Who was he? Sora knew he hadn't seen him before. So why did he want to see his face and know who he was so much? So why was he beating himself up about not staying asleep long enough so that he could see who he was?
Sora shook his head. "Get it out of your system," he said to himself. "It was just a dream. Didn't mean anything. Nothing at all," he falsely reassuered himself.
Sora then walked downstairs, trying to convince himself that it was nothing more than a random dream, while someting inside told him otherwise. --
How'd you guys like it? If poeple read it and post their opinions, then I'll probably do the next chapter today!! I know the starting is kind of traditional, but trust me! It gets better! Please! Post what you think of it!
This fanfic has very different concepts in it from the original Kingdom Hearts.
I personally think this is a pretty good fanfic that I wrote here with a great ending to it at the end. This is a very different fanfic than what you have read before, as it mixes new, original characters with the Kingdom Hearts characters. Even though it starts off kind of traditionally, when it starts to get going, it's good.
So please, give this fanfic a read. Even if you don't like it straight off, you soon will as it gets into the story. And the ending will blow your mind. But that won't be here for a while. Anyway, I hope you really enjoy my very first fanfic! This should be enjoyable!
This is there story.
The story of the ultimate friendship.
How it began,
How it ended,
And how it changed the universe.
The story of the ultimate friendship.
How it began,
How it ended,
And how it changed the universe.
Chapter 1
"No, they can't be coming back."
"No, they can't be coming back."
"Wake up, Sora. Come on, wake up!" Kairi was tugging and pulling on Sora, who had dozed off on the docks.
"Wha-wha? Stop Kairi!" Sora said, still groggy and unaware of anything that happened.
"Sora, your such a lazy bum! You fell asleep on the docks again!"
"Huh? Oh!" sora jerked up quickly and stood up, brushing himself off, smiling and laughing weakly.
Kairi started laughing. "Sora, I can't believe you! I knew I'd find you resting on the docks like you always do here."
Sora smiled too, but had this wierd feeling that something was wrong. Something just wasn't quite right. Perhaps it was how the sun didn't reflect off the clear, blue water; perhaps not.
Kairi walked by Sora and stared off into the sea. "We have to get ready forthe event. You remember, don't you?" Kairi turned her head to look at Sora. It was wierd.
That's when it hit him. The feeling of uneasiness and security suddenly became all too clear. The thing was, he didn't remember. In fact, he had no idea what Kairi was talking about.
"Wait a second!" he said, frightened. "I've never dozed off on the docks before!"
Kairi just kept staring at him.
"And what are you talking about? What event? What's going to happen?"
Kairi just still kept staring at Sora. It was eerie.
Sora stepped back in fear. His voice soft and frightened. "Wait a second. What's going on?"
Suddenly an enormous, booming ripple violently tore threw the whole mainland. A thunderous explosion ripped through the sky.
The force was so powerful, it knocked Sora off the end of the docks. He was sent falling towards the water. But it appeared as if it wasn't there, because before he knew it, Sora was falling through the sky.
Sora fell towards a huge, blinding, semi-circle, white light and was engulfed in it.
He was suddenly standing on a skinny cliff with grass blowing peacefully in the wind. It was a moonless night. The stars were glimmering unusually brightly.
Sora looked around and saw Riku standing on the brink of the cliff, looking up at the stars and overlooking the forest and mountains way below.
"Riku!" Sora called, surprised.
Riku turned aroune and looked at Sora, unspeaking, and a malicious grin on his face and an evil glint in his creamy, sea-green eyes. He suddenly began to fall backwards off the edge of the cliff.
"Riku! No!" Sora screamed. He ran to him, trying to get there in time to break his fall... But just as Sora got to the brink of the cliff, Riku dissapeared, and in his place stood a tall figure in a black, hooded trenchcoat. The figure turned around to face Sora.
Sora tried as hard as he could to make out a face underneath the hood, but all he could see was the faint outline of a face, nothing else.
The black figure slowly lifted his hands and placed them on the hood, slowly edging ot off.
Sora desperately gazed into the face off the hooded figure, which was soon to be recognizable.
The tall fugure continued to slowly edge the hood off. It was almost off. And Sora could almost see its face.
But just as the face was about to became recognizable, there was nothing.
---------
Rays of sunight beamed through the bedroom window and hit Sora's face. He shot up in his bed, gasping. Cold beads of sweat dripped from his face, dampening his sheets. Sora looked around the room, and sighed. Another dream. The first one in months.
"No, they can't be coming back," Sora said to himself, more hoping than stating.
A few months ago, Sora would have haunting, disturbing dreams. It happened whenever he laid his head down to go to sleep. But he hadn't had another dream in months. He thought he had shaken them off finally. But here he was. It was morning and he has just woken up frm another disturbing dream. He had never gotten any sleep with them, and here they were again.
Sora was curious, though. This deram had been different from all the others. It was the first time that he had seen Riku falling off a cliff. But he dismissed it.
What he really focused on was the tall, hooded figure in the black trenchcoat. Who was he? Sora knew he hadn't seen him before. So why did he want to see his face and know who he was so much? So why was he beating himself up about not staying asleep long enough so that he could see who he was?
Sora shook his head. "Get it out of your system," he said to himself. "It was just a dream. Didn't mean anything. Nothing at all," he falsely reassuered himself.
Sora then walked downstairs, trying to convince himself that it was nothing more than a random dream, while someting inside told him otherwise. --
How'd you guys like it? If poeple read it and post their opinions, then I'll probably do the next chapter today!! I know the starting is kind of traditional, but trust me! It gets better! Please! Post what you think of it!
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