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darkriku14

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yeah...your character is...how do i want to say this.....eh.....insane XD

he's too busy staring at the lint on his shirt to do anything else XD
 

caffeinatedcows

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I see blatant LOTR-ness! BLATANT!

Beren Celebrindal...so...Lord of the Rings...

And Maximus...the "noble elf"

And Sora almost said holy...

yeah. I actually expected him to say something more along the lines of "Golly jee willikers, Mrs. Elf-Queen-Lady...that's a LOT of kids!"

And the gift of Shrika. I really, really, really expected Beren to go "may it shed light where none can be found" and blahdy-blah. LIGHT OF ELENDIL!!!

Yesh, I'm done.
 

darkriku14

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yes...it's kinda LOTORish, but that's just that chapter

the rest are less............can't think of adj....

but the next Chapters get back on track!!

as a treat, i shall tell you this: the next Chapter are so is similar to this line! : "i see dead ppl"
 

darkriku14

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*bump* come on! someone at least read it and tell me how crappy it is!! *bump* *bump*
 
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