Lemme write a poem

[Ta-Chan]

Don't have a peice of paper right now, and I don't mind it getting critiqued, so:

Asking for permission to hurt someone, is
Hurting myself even more
One is a constant mystery
Another, and open book
'I'm always happy' says one
'I'm always lonely without you' says another
How do I know when they greet me with the same 'Hewo'?
They're similar but different in their wonderful ways
I don't know who I like more
I don't know who is less of an illusion
When on fades away
Another comes running

Yay, a poem >.>
CnC if you wanna

 

[cloudwolf124]

i like it...it sounds very good.

 

[Ta-Chan]

Thank you ^^
I was just kinda venting feelings and it kinda came out in a splatter
plus I didn't have any paper or anything within arms reach to write with

 

[cloudwolf124]

i dont write any thing done anymore i just put words together and hope it works