Summary: Boy meets Girl,Girl meets Boy,they fall in love & become a couple, TYPICAL. But what happens when a long time friend of your lover comes back from years & years to destroy your life,friends..............AND RELATIONSHIP? Sometimes we need to know who our REAL friends ARE,& who's not. Not everyone you think...is your friend..........
-Yes,I have came back from the dead from writing my last sucky fanfic about nothing!!! Don't ask why I returned,I was just bored & wanted 2 type something up so this is my 2nd attempt 2 write 1 again. w00t! Um, all the characters are made up by me so no STEALING! The only anime I used 2 help my fic is BoogiePopPhantom(the manga) so I pretty much used their beginning to help me start it out so sorry about that!!!-
Beginnings are hard for me so HERE WE GO!!! I hope u like it THIS time!!!
*note*-there's 2 POV's in this story,the first part is started by the boy,second part ,girl-
Italics-Thoughts
Regular-Narrator
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Chapter 1~
Damn,where is she? Shouldn't she be here by now? My watch had read 5:13 pm. Me & Sandra were suppose to meet 15 minutes ago but I had guessed all that stereotype crap wasn't all that true. Mostly it was the boyfriend who came in late,panting lika a dog who just gotten chased after some crazy maniac because he had ran outta time to get that last mission done in Halo. Plus after that,the girl would dump the guy saying he didn't care about her at all,when all the guy wanted was to finish that one damned part in Halo but realizing,he had a date to attend do.
Gosh,that must suck.Between Halo & my date........got me there My watch now had read 5:17pm. Daylight doesn't last forever you know. I looked around trying to see any sign of my girlfriend but all I could see was a couple bratty kids riding bicylces almost riding over my black converses'. Yes,I was dressing casual on my date. Always had....Everything had seem usual,people chatting with fellow elders,teens cracking up laughing on the street,doing something stupid(I wasn't like that).
But I had looked around,observing my surroundings for my ever late girlfriend, a crowd of people,near an Italian restaurant,had caught my eye,but thinking it was some chubby sweaty dude,choking on a meatball,something I heard pulled all of my attention back into the crowd.
" I saw him!!!! I saw him with my own eyes!!!! That stupid kid!!!!"
Talk about exploding,the guy of course was chubby & sweaty......& had a really reddish pinkish face too,showing that he was mad as hell.....except for he wasn't choking on a meatball of course.
"That kid, brat,where is he?!!!!!" I can see a police officer walking towards the man,wearing those really really big dark sunglasses where you can't even see through to match their eyes.
"Sir,what's the problem here. Do I need to step you aside causing all this commotion? Or can you calm yourself down sir.."
"OFFICER! Arrest that kid!!!! Wherever he is!!!! He has dark black hair,covers some of his face,wearing a black hooded sweater,really pale skin &"
Hmm,that reminds me of someone
"Sir...please,calm down. Now who is this......kid you are talking about. What did he do....?"
Man,that chubby guy looked like he was gonna give in a heart-attack,clasping his hand on his chest like that & panting angry mad.
Already,I gave in from the situation that was occuring & focused on where the hell Sandra was doing making her arrive so late when-another voiced tuned in,making the crowd silent as if we were pledging to the flag.
"He needs to get to a hospital,he's not going to make it"
Right when all hell was suppose to break loose......it didn't?
"That,that......THAT'S HIM!!!!! THAT'S THE BRAT!!!! OFFICER,HE'S THE ONE YOU SHOULD ARREST NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Speak of the devil. I nearly fell over to see who this kid was(couldn't the guy referr him as a teenager,he's even not close to a kid!) That exact description that was just mentioned really DID take my breath away. Black hoodie,black baggy pants,black hair as straight as paper.....& skin so white, it was whiter than....WHITE?!!
That guy right there, who stood among the crowd of paranoid citizens.....was Jake Summons.......the boy who nearly bombed our Middle school 6 years ago.
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Dun Dun Duunnnnnnnnn(the supsense)
So....did it suck....was it awesome?!!! Was it as least....alrite lookin???
Please...ANYONE.........SOMEONE...comment & post your opnion about it.
I wanna hear it all from u fans!(if I have any ^^; )
-Yes,I have came back from the dead from writing my last sucky fanfic about nothing!!! Don't ask why I returned,I was just bored & wanted 2 type something up so this is my 2nd attempt 2 write 1 again. w00t! Um, all the characters are made up by me so no STEALING! The only anime I used 2 help my fic is BoogiePopPhantom(the manga) so I pretty much used their beginning to help me start it out so sorry about that!!!-
Beginnings are hard for me so HERE WE GO!!! I hope u like it THIS time!!!
*note*-there's 2 POV's in this story,the first part is started by the boy,second part ,girl-
Italics-Thoughts
Regular-Narrator
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 1~
Damn,where is she? Shouldn't she be here by now? My watch had read 5:13 pm. Me & Sandra were suppose to meet 15 minutes ago but I had guessed all that stereotype crap wasn't all that true. Mostly it was the boyfriend who came in late,panting lika a dog who just gotten chased after some crazy maniac because he had ran outta time to get that last mission done in Halo. Plus after that,the girl would dump the guy saying he didn't care about her at all,when all the guy wanted was to finish that one damned part in Halo but realizing,he had a date to attend do.
Gosh,that must suck.Between Halo & my date........got me there My watch now had read 5:17pm. Daylight doesn't last forever you know. I looked around trying to see any sign of my girlfriend but all I could see was a couple bratty kids riding bicylces almost riding over my black converses'. Yes,I was dressing casual on my date. Always had....Everything had seem usual,people chatting with fellow elders,teens cracking up laughing on the street,doing something stupid(I wasn't like that).
But I had looked around,observing my surroundings for my ever late girlfriend, a crowd of people,near an Italian restaurant,had caught my eye,but thinking it was some chubby sweaty dude,choking on a meatball,something I heard pulled all of my attention back into the crowd.
" I saw him!!!! I saw him with my own eyes!!!! That stupid kid!!!!"
Talk about exploding,the guy of course was chubby & sweaty......& had a really reddish pinkish face too,showing that he was mad as hell.....except for he wasn't choking on a meatball of course.
"That kid, brat,where is he?!!!!!" I can see a police officer walking towards the man,wearing those really really big dark sunglasses where you can't even see through to match their eyes.
"Sir,what's the problem here. Do I need to step you aside causing all this commotion? Or can you calm yourself down sir.."
"OFFICER! Arrest that kid!!!! Wherever he is!!!! He has dark black hair,covers some of his face,wearing a black hooded sweater,really pale skin &"
Hmm,that reminds me of someone
"Sir...please,calm down. Now who is this......kid you are talking about. What did he do....?"
Man,that chubby guy looked like he was gonna give in a heart-attack,clasping his hand on his chest like that & panting angry mad.
Already,I gave in from the situation that was occuring & focused on where the hell Sandra was doing making her arrive so late when-another voiced tuned in,making the crowd silent as if we were pledging to the flag.
"He needs to get to a hospital,he's not going to make it"
Right when all hell was suppose to break loose......it didn't?
"That,that......THAT'S HIM!!!!! THAT'S THE BRAT!!!! OFFICER,HE'S THE ONE YOU SHOULD ARREST NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Speak of the devil. I nearly fell over to see who this kid was(couldn't the guy referr him as a teenager,he's even not close to a kid!) That exact description that was just mentioned really DID take my breath away. Black hoodie,black baggy pants,black hair as straight as paper.....& skin so white, it was whiter than....WHITE?!!
That guy right there, who stood among the crowd of paranoid citizens.....was Jake Summons.......the boy who nearly bombed our Middle school 6 years ago.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dun Dun Duunnnnnnnnn(the supsense)
So....did it suck....was it awesome?!!! Was it as least....alrite lookin???
Please...ANYONE.........SOMEONE...comment & post your opnion about it.
I wanna hear it all from u fans!(if I have any ^^; )
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