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Well, as I always say.
'You can't write poetry with your head up your ass."
Don't know why I say that though.
'You can't write poetry with your head up your ass."
Don't know why I say that though.
M
Miss Murder
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Neither do I, Chosen, neither do I.
Anyway, I was bored in Math class today and wrote two more! It's quite the rare occurance for me to write two poems in the same class / hour or so. Anyway, here they are:
~"Lost"~
Lost in a sea of shadows,
Close your eyes and see the hallows
Carried out by the fateful tide
See the Angelic Demon; you try to hide
You gave up on love,
Gave your emotion to a single black dove
But you see now how wrong it was,
To lose what mattered most, because,
I followed you all the way, to Hell and back
Saved you from the sea of shadows, to lack
Only to find I wasn't close to your heart
You gave up on your hopes, and tore us apart
Now as i rise up, you try to keep me, but fail
And you wish you hadn't been lost; wished to sail
You wish you hadn't lost your emotion and love,
That you hadn't given me to that single black dove.
~----------------~
~"Untitled Happiness"~
Thinking you would find happiness,
As you unknowingly fell into darkness
You fell to the ground, breaking
Like a marionette in the making
You continued, oblivious to reality
For true love, you gave up your mortality
Never to die, never to suffer great pain,
But pain and pleasure are in the same
And then, in eternal immortality, you are alone
Without a love, without a soul, you moan
But your cries fell upon deaf ears,
For the loss of love, of fate, of me! got nothing but leers
The passion that awaited us in paradise,
Is no more, for the demons snap at you with avalice.
At one time, I rose to the skies,
Flying free, away from you, to rise.
But now I fall once again, fallen but together
For existing with you is far better
Than a life in Paradise, with Angels singing a song
Because with you, my love, is where I belong.
Anyway, I was bored in Math class today and wrote two more! It's quite the rare occurance for me to write two poems in the same class / hour or so. Anyway, here they are:
~"Lost"~
Lost in a sea of shadows,
Close your eyes and see the hallows
Carried out by the fateful tide
See the Angelic Demon; you try to hide
You gave up on love,
Gave your emotion to a single black dove
But you see now how wrong it was,
To lose what mattered most, because,
I followed you all the way, to Hell and back
Saved you from the sea of shadows, to lack
Only to find I wasn't close to your heart
You gave up on your hopes, and tore us apart
Now as i rise up, you try to keep me, but fail
And you wish you hadn't been lost; wished to sail
You wish you hadn't lost your emotion and love,
That you hadn't given me to that single black dove.
~----------------~
~"Untitled Happiness"~
Thinking you would find happiness,
As you unknowingly fell into darkness
You fell to the ground, breaking
Like a marionette in the making
You continued, oblivious to reality
For true love, you gave up your mortality
Never to die, never to suffer great pain,
But pain and pleasure are in the same
And then, in eternal immortality, you are alone
Without a love, without a soul, you moan
But your cries fell upon deaf ears,
For the loss of love, of fate, of me! got nothing but leers
The passion that awaited us in paradise,
Is no more, for the demons snap at you with avalice.
At one time, I rose to the skies,
Flying free, away from you, to rise.
But now I fall once again, fallen but together
For existing with you is far better
Than a life in Paradise, with Angels singing a song
Because with you, my love, is where I belong.
wow, angels fall is amazing, great work. lovely poems Lycian.
cool, PM if ya write any more!
M
Miss Murder
Guest
All right, will do Shadowknight ...
And thanks to both you and swizzle for the comments!
I wrote yet another one ( as some may be able to tell, I've been in the poetry mood lately ... I don't normally write this many poems in such short of a time span ... ) but alas, it's in my school spiral ... which in my locker. At school.
But anyway. Thanks.
And thanks to both you and swizzle for the comments!
I wrote yet another one ( as some may be able to tell, I've been in the poetry mood lately ... I don't normally write this many poems in such short of a time span ... ) but alas, it's in my school spiral ... which in my locker. At school.
But anyway. Thanks.
yeah, I don't check my posts uch anymore, thanks though.
Well, it probably helps that we're Listening.
M
Miss Murder
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Gracias to all of you who left comments. ^.^
I'll keep working on new ones. Forgot the other one I wrote again ... nevertheless.
I'll keep working on new ones. Forgot the other one I wrote again ... nevertheless.
M
Miss Murder
Guest
Guess what? ... that's right, Revival. More poems. Yay.
Wrote these a few weeks or so ago ... my personal favorite would have to be the first one. ( Phantoms )
~ “Phantoms” ~
(( Written at the request of one of my best friends, Evan, and myself ))
Phantoms of the mind
Phantoms of the heart
As you murder my thoughts, be kind
Mercy comes to just a part
of those who sit upon fading rainbows.
Phantoms of a dark coast
Phantoms of all memories
I lost the one who mattered most
But can you bring him back to me?
Maybe if I come to him.
Phantoms of the dead
Phantoms of the lost
My heart has become hard as lead
And now my love comes back, at a great cost
As, because of me, he falls from grace.
Phantoms of forever
Phantoms of nevermore
Now a raven sits beside me, but never
have I seen such a dead core
As my love who returned to me, in loving misery.
Phantoms of Heaven
Phantoms of Paradise
And now a clock chimes seven
And I return with him without avalice
We rise together, now and forever
And we leave the Phantoms behind.
__
~ “Lost” ~
(( Written when I broke up with my now-ex, Aaron. ))
Lost in a sea of shadows,
Close your eyes and see the hallows
Carried out by the fateful tide
See the Angelic Demon; you try to hide.
You gave up on love,
Gave your emotion to a single black dove.
But you see now how wrong it was,
To lose what mattered most, because,
I followed you into the neverending dark,
Saved you from the sea of shadows, to mark
Only to find I wasn’t close to your heart
You gave up on your hopes, and tore us apart.
Now as I rise up, you try to keep me, but fail
And you wish you hadn’t been lost, wished to sail.
You wish you hadn’t lost your emotion and love,
That you hadn’t given me to that single black dove.
__
~ “ Behind a Mask” ~
(( Written for one of my best friends, Lacey ))
Hiding behind a mask
A mask of shadows and pain
Freeing yourself is - the task
and the hardship is staying sane.
I can no longer stay with you
and your mask of the abyss
Keeping yourself is - too new
the hardship is to no longer miss.
The red, silver, and black
Reflected in the mask’s eye
Moving on is - the lack
there is no hardship, so sigh.
These tasks and hardships were given
to you to free you from the mask, and
I will watch so you’ll no longer live in
the shadows, so make your stand.
You make the stand, and finally fly
Never to fall again, no longer a task
The hardships are over, and I see in your eye
You’re never to hide again behind a mask.
___
~ “Hidden”~
(( Written for my BF, Brad ))
Hidden in the abyss of my mind,
I escape to feel again and find,
You, never to return, never to see
But you see that you have lost me.
You escape into the abyss,
Into the shadows, and I miss
Who you used to be.
Though now, I only have memories to see.
I can’t redeem, but I will try
To save you from yourself, help you fly,
I need to again see your face,
And so, I will break your fall from grace.
Our love will be eternal in this endless night
And no longer will you hide from light
Though those around us feel nothing,
We will hear, see, feel everything.
But when the snow turns grey
And all around us turns to ash, it may
When our world crumbles to the ground
And Death comes to our door, comes around
I will stay with you in the shade
Amidst this endless Masquerade
With our love, we will stay together,
And our love will rain forever.
____
____
Wrote these a few weeks or so ago ... my personal favorite would have to be the first one. ( Phantoms )
~ “Phantoms” ~
(( Written at the request of one of my best friends, Evan, and myself ))
Phantoms of the mind
Phantoms of the heart
As you murder my thoughts, be kind
Mercy comes to just a part
of those who sit upon fading rainbows.
Phantoms of a dark coast
Phantoms of all memories
I lost the one who mattered most
But can you bring him back to me?
Maybe if I come to him.
Phantoms of the dead
Phantoms of the lost
My heart has become hard as lead
And now my love comes back, at a great cost
As, because of me, he falls from grace.
Phantoms of forever
Phantoms of nevermore
Now a raven sits beside me, but never
have I seen such a dead core
As my love who returned to me, in loving misery.
Phantoms of Heaven
Phantoms of Paradise
And now a clock chimes seven
And I return with him without avalice
We rise together, now and forever
And we leave the Phantoms behind.
__
~ “Lost” ~
(( Written when I broke up with my now-ex, Aaron. ))
Lost in a sea of shadows,
Close your eyes and see the hallows
Carried out by the fateful tide
See the Angelic Demon; you try to hide.
You gave up on love,
Gave your emotion to a single black dove.
But you see now how wrong it was,
To lose what mattered most, because,
I followed you into the neverending dark,
Saved you from the sea of shadows, to mark
Only to find I wasn’t close to your heart
You gave up on your hopes, and tore us apart.
Now as I rise up, you try to keep me, but fail
And you wish you hadn’t been lost, wished to sail.
You wish you hadn’t lost your emotion and love,
That you hadn’t given me to that single black dove.
__
~ “ Behind a Mask” ~
(( Written for one of my best friends, Lacey ))
Hiding behind a mask
A mask of shadows and pain
Freeing yourself is - the task
and the hardship is staying sane.
I can no longer stay with you
and your mask of the abyss
Keeping yourself is - too new
the hardship is to no longer miss.
The red, silver, and black
Reflected in the mask’s eye
Moving on is - the lack
there is no hardship, so sigh.
These tasks and hardships were given
to you to free you from the mask, and
I will watch so you’ll no longer live in
the shadows, so make your stand.
You make the stand, and finally fly
Never to fall again, no longer a task
The hardships are over, and I see in your eye
You’re never to hide again behind a mask.
___
~ “Hidden”~
(( Written for my BF, Brad ))
Hidden in the abyss of my mind,
I escape to feel again and find,
You, never to return, never to see
But you see that you have lost me.
You escape into the abyss,
Into the shadows, and I miss
Who you used to be.
Though now, I only have memories to see.
I can’t redeem, but I will try
To save you from yourself, help you fly,
I need to again see your face,
And so, I will break your fall from grace.
Our love will be eternal in this endless night
And no longer will you hide from light
Though those around us feel nothing,
We will hear, see, feel everything.
But when the snow turns grey
And all around us turns to ash, it may
When our world crumbles to the ground
And Death comes to our door, comes around
I will stay with you in the shade
Amidst this endless Masquerade
With our love, we will stay together,
And our love will rain forever.
____
____
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