My latest. Its a sin

[mesmerized]

Okay, working with sin city style.

I need so c-n-c right now. I'm really trying to do better...

Little backround on me, I'm going to college for graphic design. I learned a few things and this one only took me about 10 minutes to complete. Its reweally easy.

http://mesmerized88.deviantart.com/art/Vic-115493077

my model is my little co-worker from work. credit goes to him because i stole his pictures haha

 

[Efflictim]

That was pretty good, nice job

 

[mesmerized]

^^thanks.

 

[Salty the Hero]

That was pretty good, nice job

Please give constructive criticism when posting here.

Anyway, the background is really boring on it. Try adding something to it. Other than that, it's pretty good.

 

[Kazuma]

It's very boring, try bringing on more effects on it like C4d's,and smudging. Look up some tuts on how to archive better on effects.

 

[Vicodin]

Sin City? Fuck no. Not even close. Have you even seen the movie? Looked at the posters? Because it doesn't look like it. Not at all.

http://images.allmoviephoto.com/2005_Sin_City/2005_sin_city_poster_001.jpg

Not contrasted. Not pure black and white. the face doesn't take up the entire thing, and if it does, once again, it's detailed.

Want my honest opinion?
It sucks. It doesn't look like sin city anything, unless you're going for sin shitty.

 

[Cloud]

Sin City? Fuck no. Not even close. Have you even seen the movie? Looked at the posters? Because it doesn't look like it. Not at all.

http://images.allmoviephoto.com/2005_Sin_City/2005_sin_city_poster_001.jpg

Not contrasted. Not pure black and white. the face doesn't take up the entire thing, and if it does, once again, it's detailed.

Want my honest opinion?
It sucks. It doesn't look like sin city anything, unless you're going for sin shitty.

I thought the same thing, didn't like to say anything about it though xD;

 

[King Sora X]

Agreeign with salty, bg is very boring..
random effects hurt my eyes
try doing something else to it
but other than that..really good..

 

[mesmerized]

ach.

well that actually did hurt my feelings but hey.. what can you say. you ask for cnc and you get it.

t...thanks.

 

[captain]

Well it's not Sin City... But it's definately cool..

 

[Vicodin]

It's a good thing the internet isn't here to make people feel fuckin' great about themselves.

You asked for CnC, I gave it to you.