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Fanfiction ► No Heart X Report 1



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Terra Firma

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(Hiya, everybody! This will be my first fic with you, so bear with me. I'm gonna be doing this in parts.)



"As the darkness raced around him,
he boldly laughed with glee,
For though it roared and writhed, he thought,
It is no match for me.

He scrambled through the maelstrom,
his glowing blade in hand,
advancing through the darkness
to meet the Devil's band.

But when he saw his foe-to-be,
he gave up all direction,
when through the fog he looked to see,
he saw his own reflection.

Be careful in your search for fame,
for power and respect;
When all our hearts are mirrors,
You know not what they will reflect."

Mirror, by
Barry Fontenot


(Just something to tide you over till the 1st chapter.)
 

Andillexe

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So I'm guessing this is supposed to be a sort of prologue? It's a cool concept, but it'd be better if we had something to read right after it so that we could link the meaning in the poem with whatever it is you're writing. =/ Just a thought.

I'm looking forward to reading the first chapter and connecting them.
 

Andillexe

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Good deal. I was wondering where you went.

Anyway, that's why I usually wait until I'm finished with (most) everything before I start posting. It's fine not to, but that's just the way I work. I hate pressure, so yeah. >.<
 
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