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Yeah, there were two versions, but I found this one more descriptive. My turn!

Nobody.
Created, unfeeling, rejected.
Tries to create it's own heart.
Where the body and soul rest.
No darkness, no light, no nothing.
 

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For a waka, you must be able to make a story from the first 3 lines, but also the last 3 as well. They rely heavily on imagery. Try both, DM!

I'll try....

The keyblade wielder,
Yet untested, will not fail
In trusting his friends.
As they act as his power,
Just as he'll always be theirs.
 

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¡Me gusta, Aiko! Try this: a chained poem. It's a poem where the last word of the phrase/stanza is also the first word of the next. Like that song "Glad You Came." Do it about seasons or the weather. I'll do the one that you don't :3
 

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¡Me gusta, Aiko! Try this: a chained poem. It's a poem where the last word of the phrase/stanza is also the first word of the next. Like that song "Glad You Came." Do it about seasons or the weather. I'll do the one that you don't :3
Alright!

Fall is when the plants,
Wither and die,
And the animals start to sleep,
While the leaves fall.

Winter is when the earth,
is covered in snow.
And families by the hearth,
Thinking about what they will winter.

Spring is when the flowers,
Start to bud and grow.
And from nests on bare branches,
Little chicks spring.

Summer is when the children,
Come out to play.
And enjoy the time they have.
Before the next summer.
 

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@Aiko: That were loverly, but that kind of poem is a different kind entirely! What you did was like a sort of "wrapped" poem, which is a branch of chained poem. A chain goes like this:

When the storms blow in
In comes the darkness
Darkness and the winds
Winds which gust around us

Meet me in the rain
Rain that feels as ice
Ice on trees that gain
Gain in groups as avarice

The calm and silent night
Nights were made for sleep
Sleep and beget your fright
Fright your life will keep
 

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*dies on spot* Got my poetry lingo mixed up.....again. I'll give it another shot!

When spring comes,
Comes the south wind, blowing.
Blowing the snow away,
Away to the north.

When summer come calling,
Calling the heat and children,
Childtren play in the sunny days,
Days passing quickly.

When fall appeares before us,
Us humans gather our things,
Things to survie with,
With the cold weather approaching.

When winter settles in,
In our warm clothes we are dressed,
Dressed in coats and hats and snow,
Snow that we cover ourselves in as we play in it.
 

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Lucky.....*watches Rise of the Guardians for the 10th time* <3 this movie. Have a good time!
Rise of the Guardians is AWESOME! Planes wasn't NEARLY as good as the first Cars movie, but I liked the airplane/jet stuff cuz I'm fond of both :3 (airshow gal) The Lone Ranger was pretty good! I love the "arrow to the shoulder" randomness. The ranger's girly scream was priceless! XD
 

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Rise of the Guardians is AWESOME! Planes wasn't NEARLY as good as the first Cars movie, but I liked the airplane/jet stuff cuz I'm fond of both :3 (airshow gal) The Lone Ranger was pretty good! I love the "arrow to the shoulder" randomness. The ranger's girly scream was priceless! XD
lol, girly scream.....

I love Rise of the Guardians! Got the whole script memorized. (Axel joke unintended)

Today we to acrostic poems about.....anything, really!

Carfully watching
Us, adults
Refuse to let us have
Fun, or
Even take time to
Watch TV.
 

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Hmmm. Good choice! Let's see...

Kind and gentle
None can attest
In any way,
Guarding the kings and
Hating the wicked;
These "soldiers of justice,"
Swords ever close at hand.

Hey, you got curfews on the mind, or sumthin? Didja get yelled at?
 

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Yup. For spending too much time on the Forums. :/ So, ya like knights? Seeing your sig and all....
 

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Do you know Tales of Vesperia? I just got the movie, and I thought it was great! I can't have the english game tho cuz I only have a PS3, so I'm just watching it. I may order the extended japanese PS3 version from Amazon. My first-ever japanese game! I'll have no clue what's going on C:

I didn't know what to write about, so I just looked at my sig and avatar. I was like, "knights, yeah!"
 

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Heard of it. Kinda. By name only. Googled it, and it looks like a good movie. Might watch it online.

Lol, You should just learn japanese! Then you could get more japanese games!
 

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Heard of it. Kinda. By name only. Googled it, and it looks like a good movie. Might watch it online.

Lol, You should just learn japanese! Then you could get more japanese games!
Well, truth be told, I took 2 years of it (every Wednesday for 2 years anyway) and we could only speak mediocre bits and pieces. It was a 10 person class at another school. (a RICH one)

We only learned Hiragana (certain symbols) and basic phrases, while Katakana (symbols from the original language that create WHOLE words) was still a mystery to us. It was a very casual atmosphere, but the language was fun! Hana means "flower" AND "nose." And certain stuff sounds like English, just ended differently. Like beer? Biru. Pronounced bee-roo. It's weird XD
 

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My sig is from the movie "Dragonheart." I thought it fit this site, and all. One of my favorite movies ever!
Huh? Oh, because KH is about the heart and (in a way) basically everything in your sig. Am I right?

I'm gonna, laugh if she says no.
 
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