Fanfiction ► Secret Mission: Summer Vacation

[King Wolfe]

Hehe, nice chapter. I didn't see that one coming.

 

[HeartOfTheHero]

lol, that was a great chapter
i can't wait to see what xemnas does when he finds riku and xion

 

[MM125]

Well, that was close to what I thought. Anyway great chapter, Roxas being a Spartan and a Hun, wow. And it looked like we'd actually get a real XionxRiku scene, but Paine had to ruin the moment with her going all worried about them.

 

[The Dream]

Haha.
Roxas going all canabile on the island when the hotels right there.
I had a feeling that would happen.
I wanna see what happen to Riku since Xemnas found out he was alone with Xion.

 

[JustCallMeShadow]

Make more please. *puppy dog eyes*

 

[Paupu911]

haha nice chapter! Roxas going cannible, sweet!

 

[Deleted member]

God, that was so funny!!! I almost fell out of my chair laughing!!! I especially loved the whole Zexion and Xigbar running from 10,000 coconuts thing; death by coconuts, absolutely hilarious. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

I especially loved the whole Zexion and Xigbar running from 10,000 coconuts thing; death by coconuts, absolutely hilarious.

I heard that could actually happen in real life O_O

 

[luna1017]

God,that was HILARIOUS!! It's like every sentence I read has comedy!!
Roxas the hun, Roxas the spartan and Roxas thw CANNIBAL!!!!!!
AWESOME SAUUUUUCCCEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lol. Sea Goddess 'shortie'.
*gasps* the great gods gave me this phone!!!

 

[MM125]

Haha.
I wanna see what happen to Riku since Xemnas found out he was alone with Xion.

Riku wasn't alone with Xion, Paine was with them the whole time.

 

[Bellaisima358]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THis is so frikin funny!!! I love this fanfic!! Cant wait for the next one ^_^

 

[Lectori Salutem]

Wow, it weren't even the Demon Sister who blew up the boat! ^^ Liked the chapters!

 

[The Dream]

Riku wasn't alone with Xion, Paine was with them the whole time.

He didn't know that though

 

[Diomedes]

He didn't know that though

Well then, Riku is pretty much fucked now isn't he?

 

[The Dream]

You bet let the fighting begin!

 

[MM125]

No I doubt Xemnas will do anything if Paine testifies, would be funny as hell though, if he did.

 

[Choc]

Well, saw that one coming.

 

[khfreak17]

lol!!! that was so funny! my parents thought i was an idiot because i was laughing so hard. cant wait for the next one

 

[Riku Fan1415]

lol, "Shipwreck Package"......

 

[JustCallMeShadow]

When's Mikoto going to be on?