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Nice. There is some good details in it, also your doing relatively good with the shading. The only critic I will say is that the hair looks a bit too plain. I know that the hair can be drawn like that, but sometimes it best to make it more detailed.
Beside that, good job!
(It seems like the cat in your icon, is watching an extremely fast mouse - hilariouse)
Beside that, good job!
(It seems like the cat in your icon, is watching an extremely fast mouse - hilariouse)
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hahaha well of course it can be more detailed, at this point i'm only teasing. As far as that goes it's nice to meet you, and thanks for the critique. Are you a regular in the traditional media section by chance.
It looks kinda empty hair in comparison to how it was a few years ago. It'd be nice to see a pick up of more art activity
It looks kinda empty hair in comparison to how it was a few years ago. It'd be nice to see a pick up of more art activity
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Lets Not Stand on Ceremony here...
Mr. Wayne...
I'm digging this so far, then again I always love everything you put up.
Mr. Wayne...
I'm digging this so far, then again I always love everything you put up.
Glad to see you back! And of course I dig this. I also totally disagree with the earlier critique about his hair; I think it's a nice contrast to the greater detail of his face. It might look too busy or incoherent otherwise, especially without color to break it up.
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lol, yes Collin. That was a bit of my inspiration, but the general idea was an iron mask. This particular character was part of an experimental organization, in which others made a leading success where he failed. The initial process was to create an army of substantial order to equilibriate emotions defying fear and courage and instilling a bleek mindset better layered with a hardened sense to kill. Like the marines they are taught to plan everyone they kill whether it be their child or any animate life form.
The problem with Vincent is that his emotions were scorned by a love affair created from the militant leaders superior who happened to be a princess of the land. She loved him for his appearance. In essence he was a beautiful man, but he fell in love with her younger sister who had coaxed him to sleep with her. Despite how ridiculous it sounds, she was actually more competent to emotions, and somehow that reconnected memories relating to his father and a rebellious love he shared.
Because of this he was able to dig into his human side. In anger the elder sister tried to kill her younger sister and the chilkd she was about to bore.
In able to abstain from the chaos, he pretended to love the eldest sister without ever mentioning anything to the youngest. After childbirth, the youngest sister died from the lack of energy to live through the pain.
The child was never heard from again, and Vincent continued to lie to himself about his emotions. However enabling such a thing allowed him to surpass his fellow soldiers. He questioned his abilities. He became too strong for many to even comprehend. The power he held exceeded the abilities that many could hold. The militant leader took him under his wing in a plot to take over the kingdom that his superior controlled.
Vincent followed this man and his teaching in order to utilize it for his own advantage. In doing so, his sanity slowly slipped from his fingertips. He began to lose sense of reality, but at the same time, his existence began to transcend from that of the normal human.
The depth of the soldier project became clear...the sovereign of the land was trying to develop a soldier that could level a continent, but in doing so he created a monster.
At an alarming rate, Vincent became so knowledgeable that he killed the militant leader, and leveled out the soldier program. The sovereign sought for his control, and placed an iron mask on him as an example of the shame he brought to his world.
The sovereign had been collecting such data to make himself stronger as well. It only took a single day for Vincent to escape and plot the demise of the kingdom the sovereign owned.
Vincent could not take off the mask because it ensued an immense amount of pain. The tubes inserted through the mouth piece where injects through his gums. The brace of the mask held spikes inserted through his cheeks, and skin fibers of the mask had attached itself to his face so that if it was removed, he would be unrecognizable to the world in it's entirety.
He made it a goal to kill the sovereign, but this only became stronger when he trained himself to once again abstain from human emotion.
A little girl tried to help him. She was in line for the soldier program. He spent days with her trying to give her a moment of humanity, but everyday she was slipping away from it.
She was under the roof of numerous children guarded by soldiers in which he coaxed them to jump off a roof. He tried to jump off himself and realized that his power had exceeded non existence. The girl was dead, and getting a closer look at her, he realized they shared the same eyes.
At this point he had no idea what to feel, what to believe...the chaos built in him grew. He managed to destroy a whole planet with a single snap of anger.
Vincent learned the danger of his strength. Ahead of his path where three warriors he fought to the death after witnessing a huge explosion (requires further explanation). Vincent was victorious flawlessly, however the power he held caused great pain in his heart.
His heart could not stabilize from the strength he held, thus he dissappeared in an immobile stasis where he would return to bring the world into a new order.
[I could explain this more if i wasn't drunk right now, but all you need to know right now is that, a main character i have in mind, and this guy have a connection so deep that it will twist everything about the story i want to create. ]
alright... i'm tired, lol
The problem with Vincent is that his emotions were scorned by a love affair created from the militant leaders superior who happened to be a princess of the land. She loved him for his appearance. In essence he was a beautiful man, but he fell in love with her younger sister who had coaxed him to sleep with her. Despite how ridiculous it sounds, she was actually more competent to emotions, and somehow that reconnected memories relating to his father and a rebellious love he shared.
Because of this he was able to dig into his human side. In anger the elder sister tried to kill her younger sister and the chilkd she was about to bore.
In able to abstain from the chaos, he pretended to love the eldest sister without ever mentioning anything to the youngest. After childbirth, the youngest sister died from the lack of energy to live through the pain.
The child was never heard from again, and Vincent continued to lie to himself about his emotions. However enabling such a thing allowed him to surpass his fellow soldiers. He questioned his abilities. He became too strong for many to even comprehend. The power he held exceeded the abilities that many could hold. The militant leader took him under his wing in a plot to take over the kingdom that his superior controlled.
Vincent followed this man and his teaching in order to utilize it for his own advantage. In doing so, his sanity slowly slipped from his fingertips. He began to lose sense of reality, but at the same time, his existence began to transcend from that of the normal human.
The depth of the soldier project became clear...the sovereign of the land was trying to develop a soldier that could level a continent, but in doing so he created a monster.
At an alarming rate, Vincent became so knowledgeable that he killed the militant leader, and leveled out the soldier program. The sovereign sought for his control, and placed an iron mask on him as an example of the shame he brought to his world.
The sovereign had been collecting such data to make himself stronger as well. It only took a single day for Vincent to escape and plot the demise of the kingdom the sovereign owned.
Vincent could not take off the mask because it ensued an immense amount of pain. The tubes inserted through the mouth piece where injects through his gums. The brace of the mask held spikes inserted through his cheeks, and skin fibers of the mask had attached itself to his face so that if it was removed, he would be unrecognizable to the world in it's entirety.
He made it a goal to kill the sovereign, but this only became stronger when he trained himself to once again abstain from human emotion.
A little girl tried to help him. She was in line for the soldier program. He spent days with her trying to give her a moment of humanity, but everyday she was slipping away from it.
She was under the roof of numerous children guarded by soldiers in which he coaxed them to jump off a roof. He tried to jump off himself and realized that his power had exceeded non existence. The girl was dead, and getting a closer look at her, he realized they shared the same eyes.
At this point he had no idea what to feel, what to believe...the chaos built in him grew. He managed to destroy a whole planet with a single snap of anger.
Vincent learned the danger of his strength. Ahead of his path where three warriors he fought to the death after witnessing a huge explosion (requires further explanation). Vincent was victorious flawlessly, however the power he held caused great pain in his heart.
His heart could not stabilize from the strength he held, thus he dissappeared in an immobile stasis where he would return to bring the world into a new order.
[I could explain this more if i wasn't drunk right now, but all you need to know right now is that, a main character i have in mind, and this guy have a connection so deep that it will twist everything about the story i want to create. ]
alright... i'm tired, lol
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Thank you Turn. I really missed you guys. You all inspire me to draw more
hahaha well of course it can be more detailed, at this point i'm only teasing. As far as that goes it's nice to meet you, and thanks for the critique. Are you a regular in the traditional media section by chance.
It looks kinda empty hair in comparison to how it was a few years ago. It'd be nice to see a pick up of more art activity
I am actually a traditional pencil artist, but it seems that I hadn't seen the "Traditional Media" ;P so I've made my thread in the "Creative Media" - I would be happy if you checked it out and maybe leaved a little comment with your opinion. The first drawings was made with the cheapest drawing table you can get so they're really bad, I had never drawn with something like that. I'll also post my best piece of art i've ever made hopefully soon, there is a special preview in the thread - you'll recognize him immidiately when you see him.
Here is the thread, as it says in my signature: http://forums.khinsider.com/creative...ng-thread.html
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