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Bloodgift

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I'm thinking of adding onto it, but so far, what do you think??

Your hair, it used to make me grin
Your hair, so soft, so thick, so thin

Your smile, used to take my breath away
always, used to make me stay

Your eyes, so gorgous so bright
Until that fate-ful night


I'm thinking of making some more....but, comments??

It was inspired from a friend of mine, that passed away, i'll tell you more tommorow when i make more onto the end!

Hope you like
 
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Enchanted Rose

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Um nice sentiment, but not so nice poetically.

Also, I think you mean "thick", not "think".
 
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