Something creepy.

[mesmerized]

Well heyy, I'm back. It's been a long time, I've been hella busy with my move to Las Vegas, but what do you all care- you probably forgot about me haha.

Anyways, I started a DA and posted my first creation. Its something sorta creepy, but I want some feed back. Kay, thanks loves!

--Mez
-->http://mesmerized88.deviantart.com/art/Product-number-2-114882660

 

[Pablo]

Stock doesnt fit with the background. Change the color and brightness of it.

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

Creepy!

It's easy to tell the stock was superimposed. Try to make it blend in more with the room. Keep the lighting consistent and such.

Other than that, it's a great start.

 

[mesmerized]

Thank you both for you advice

 

[shrekdog]

It's easy to tell the stock was superimposed. Try to make it blend in more with the room. Keep the lighting consistent and such.

Other than that, it's a great start.

And give it some more atmosphere : D

 

[Xireau1]

i have to say, you did superimpose the cards. try to bring the lighting on the cards down a bit and it would probably be more believable. other than those two minor fallacies, your doing great! keep up the good work and i will be back. hopefully nothing i have said here is insulting and can help in your betterment.
have a groovy day!

 

[XIV-Lawliettre]

WHAT THE F?

It has nothing in it except for creepiness! I guess some people would like that but I think they beauty of creepiness is either a crowded bizarre portrait or a creepy statement or symbol that ramificates into other things...