Spanish Sahara

[Pablo]

jesus diddly i dont know what im doing anymore

v3

 

[Nutari]

jesus diddly i dont know what im doing anymore

It's not bad, but I have seen better from you. It seems to be executed nicely, I just dunno. It doesn't appeal to me.

 

[King Sora X]

I somewhat agree with Aldrain. I do think you have done better than this, but you're probably rusty, so it's to be expected. I actually can get into this if the brightness was toned down just a tad. I actually prefer the one with the border. Kind of gives it a cinematic-ish look.

 

[Nutari]

I somewhat agree with Aldrain. I do think you have done better than this, but you're probably rusty, so it's to be expected. I actually can get into this if the brightness was toned down just a tad. I actually prefer the one with the border. Kind of gives it a cinematic-ish look.

Agree, the second is a lot better. Funny how one little difference can make a something better.

I think I found why I don't enjoy this as much as I should: there isn't a lot of hue variant. I think that the, cyan and green?, that you used are too close, and there doesn't appear to be a lot of depth there. Maybe if you set the burn tool really low, and went over with a shadow/midtone setting you could achieve more depth. Even if it only did a little bit, it would be a hell of a lot better to look at.

And I don't think I'm a huge fan of circle. But that's just me. As I said before though, it's technically sound.

 

[C4strife]

I kind of like it. Kind of has the "magazine scan" look. I'm just not digging the circles or the black borders. Maybe a bit more of that bluish grey color from the shield would help too.

 

[Taylor]

more contrast
more colors
stock looks too sharp

and i don't really like the borders but the piece as a whole is pretty neat dude

 

[Pablo]

Thanks guys. Yeah so I'd update this with v3 but stupid campus internet is not working at all. I'll get it up eventually.



And i changed my mind, this one is actually up there in my favorites

 

[Ðari]

faded (sharpen)
faded (sharpen)

I still love this in spite of whats already been said though

 

[Pablo]

v3 is up.

 

[inasuma]

white border is better

dem pastels!!

excellent timing with historia being released in two days. woot

 

[Pablo]

which reminds me that i need to pre order that

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

I love the colors on this one. Looks really good with the white border!

 

[Cloud]

colours, textures and compo are all rly nice but theres no really interesting element to it, it is AND ALWAYS WILL BE 'NICE'

 

[Pablo]

YOU ARE AND ALWAYS WILL BE NICE

 

[shrekdog]

last one is solid, nice work

 

[Veritas]

It needs to be softer. It just looks too grainy. You set up this nice soft colour scheme and then made it have this icky grainy texture. I don't think the borders add anything to it.