ok this is my first ever Fan Fiction, I'm going to try this b/c RPing is slowing down and b/c of my schedule I miss alot so, i'm going to see if this works.
To help some people out, The Abhorsen Trilogy is my favorite trilogy of all time and I really love it and b/c I have read all three 7 times I know the books very well and so I think I want to try to write a fanfic. The books are Sabriel, Lirael, and Abhorsen by Garth Nix. Check them out. They are very good.
Ook so i'm going to write chapter one and if anyone can help me out and give ma pionters, go right ahead.
Nothing Stays Dead Forever
Prologue
As a bell begins to fade another sound is heard, it is the sound of the first gate stopping telling that something was coming through, something no longer living. The bell ringer is a man about 47, but looks to be 52 as the river of death takes the color from him leaving his soul behind for he is to strong for the current.
As the sound of the first gate begins again he puts the bell away and pulls out another and when he sees his target come closer he rings it. But the bell has no effect the creature is too strong, even for a necromencer so skilled. The creature just keeps coming forward and as the 47 year old tries to run away the creature grabs his shirt and lifts him off the ground.
"Thanks you so much for this wonderful opportunity to come back to the living." The creature says and soon disappears as he absorbs into the mans body. The man now walks back to his body in the living world half man half creature.
The creature was no ordinary dead being; he was also a free magic one. He was a left over from the making of the Charter at the beginning of time and was dangerous to all living things. He was trapped within the 8th gate to be there forever, unless someone found the spell to release him from his cage. But only a selfish man would do such a think, but some are more power hungry than most.
Chapter 1
A girl wakes from a nightmare she had been having lately. She looks about the age of 19 with thick black hair falling over her face. The dreams have been coming more frequently than ever and she didn't know what they meant.
She slowly crawls out of bed and as she moves toward the wash basin the charter marks on the wall follow her giving her light. She dries her face and the picks up her mechanical hand, and clicks it into place. She would never forget how she got it and she was pretty certain some of the memories would stick with her forever.
She brings her arm close to herself and thinks of the Disreputable Dog, her dearest friend since she first became a Librarian till she defeated the Destroyer.
"Oh Dog." She said as a tear fell down her face that was unnaturally white.
The girls name was Lirael, and she had seen and done much in these last five years. She had become a Librarian without haveing the "sight" of a Clayr, saved the glacier many times from paralle and as she left to fulfill a vision seen by the Clayr she saves the world and finds her true family.
Lireal is now the Abhorsen-in-Waiting and has to follow Sabriel the Abhorsen, the one who uses the seven bells of the necromencer to put the dead to rest rather than bring to life, around the Old Kingdom helping to put the dead to rest that terrorize villages. But as the dreams grew more frequent she knows that this, almost like calm, can't last forever.
well that is all I can think of for tonight, so please tell me wat you think and if you like it I'll keep going and will finish the story for all who care. Thanks so much for reading and I hope you really did like it...PS rate it too and lots of comments,thanks again[/CENTER]
To help some people out, The Abhorsen Trilogy is my favorite trilogy of all time and I really love it and b/c I have read all three 7 times I know the books very well and so I think I want to try to write a fanfic. The books are Sabriel, Lirael, and Abhorsen by Garth Nix. Check them out. They are very good.
Ook so i'm going to write chapter one and if anyone can help me out and give ma pionters, go right ahead.
Nothing Stays Dead Forever
Prologue
As a bell begins to fade another sound is heard, it is the sound of the first gate stopping telling that something was coming through, something no longer living. The bell ringer is a man about 47, but looks to be 52 as the river of death takes the color from him leaving his soul behind for he is to strong for the current.
As the sound of the first gate begins again he puts the bell away and pulls out another and when he sees his target come closer he rings it. But the bell has no effect the creature is too strong, even for a necromencer so skilled. The creature just keeps coming forward and as the 47 year old tries to run away the creature grabs his shirt and lifts him off the ground.
"Thanks you so much for this wonderful opportunity to come back to the living." The creature says and soon disappears as he absorbs into the mans body. The man now walks back to his body in the living world half man half creature.
The creature was no ordinary dead being; he was also a free magic one. He was a left over from the making of the Charter at the beginning of time and was dangerous to all living things. He was trapped within the 8th gate to be there forever, unless someone found the spell to release him from his cage. But only a selfish man would do such a think, but some are more power hungry than most.
Chapter 1
A girl wakes from a nightmare she had been having lately. She looks about the age of 19 with thick black hair falling over her face. The dreams have been coming more frequently than ever and she didn't know what they meant.
She slowly crawls out of bed and as she moves toward the wash basin the charter marks on the wall follow her giving her light. She dries her face and the picks up her mechanical hand, and clicks it into place. She would never forget how she got it and she was pretty certain some of the memories would stick with her forever.
She brings her arm close to herself and thinks of the Disreputable Dog, her dearest friend since she first became a Librarian till she defeated the Destroyer.
"Oh Dog." She said as a tear fell down her face that was unnaturally white.
The girls name was Lirael, and she had seen and done much in these last five years. She had become a Librarian without haveing the "sight" of a Clayr, saved the glacier many times from paralle and as she left to fulfill a vision seen by the Clayr she saves the world and finds her true family.
Lireal is now the Abhorsen-in-Waiting and has to follow Sabriel the Abhorsen, the one who uses the seven bells of the necromencer to put the dead to rest rather than bring to life, around the Old Kingdom helping to put the dead to rest that terrorize villages. But as the dreams grew more frequent she knows that this, almost like calm, can't last forever.
well that is all I can think of for tonight, so please tell me wat you think and if you like it I'll keep going and will finish the story for all who care. Thanks so much for reading and I hope you really did like it...PS rate it too and lots of comments,thanks again[/CENTER]
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