Fanfiction ► The Hybrid

[Super Sonic]

I lurve how you use a lot of adjectives and verbs to set the scene with more detils. It's pretty damn good, for some reason, it reminded me of Marvel Nemesis: Rise of the Imperfects when the letter fell from the sky and landed in the general's hands.

Hm, now that I think of it, an idea from the Marvel Nemesis storyline doesn't sound too shabby. Heroes vs. Mislead Rouges.

Oh shit son, I have a friend named Steve Miller. o:

Nice story. :3

Thanx for reading Dee, y'all come back now, y'hear! ^^

 

[Phenomenon X]

Fanstatic. I liked the bit at the end:
"Next Up:
Part 3 of 6
"Heroes of the Millennium" continues.
Will they agree to form a team?
Who is "X"?
Why does General Weinstein want them to form a team?
Join me, next week to find out.
Same Hybrid-time, same Hybrid-channel!"

That was good for a larf.





Oh yeah, and GO FIRECRACKER, WHOOOOOOO!!!!

 

[Ulti]

Coolie coolie coooooolie=3keep the writing buddy

 

[Super Sonic]

Coolie coolie coooooolie=3keep the writing buddy

Thanx alot Ulty, I owe you one.

Much (friendly) wub! :3

 

[GrandMaster_Chris]

nice story SS, its like all my favorite superheroes but different into one story, update soon.

 

[Darkness Princess]

*Drools..* Is it over already?? NOOOO!!! Needs next chapter, must find way to control herself from attacking irratating Nova dude. *twitches* Okay S.S hopefully next chapter soon.

 

[Machinany Gun]

Nice to see The Hybrid back in a different shape and form. Chris hasnt changed much and thats something im happy to see. If he had a different personality I would probably not enjoy the story as much. By the way WM, G'Tarr was the name of the alien since ya forgot. Good story thus far SS looking forward to the next one. One last word for ya SS. GRAMMER!

 

[King Cloud]

(Today I'm speaking n00b...just wanted to give ya a heads up on that....so you dont run away screaming at the bad grammar o_o)

d00000000000000dz, liek dis story pwns bot rite more s00n k.?

....hehe

WOOOOOOOOOOO The Hybrid IS BACK....slightly different though....I miss chris' elemental powers T_T! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HOW COUlD YOU SS? HOW COULD YOU TAKE HIS POWERS AWAY??

*goes to mourn the loss of chris' elemental powers...and to vomit over his new name *
Suicide....Commando...x_x

 

[Phenomenon X]

Please, vomit over the word "suicycle".

 

[Super Sonic]

Thanx for those who read for reading. ^^

 

[Dark Aura]

Thats awesome SS. keep writing them

 

[Super Sonic]

Thanx for reading DA. ^^

 

[Madam Doofie]

Very good, SS, keep wrrrrrriting o.o

 

[Phenomenon X]

Yeah, that storie's great. 'Specially that Rob character. That guy rules.

 

[Dark Aura]

Thanx for reading DA. ^^

no problem ^_^ it was really good XD

 

[Morpheaus]

You sig advertises eternal friendship in exchange for reading this. Well I read it, now where is my friendship?

 

[Super Sonic]

You sig advertises eternal friendship in exchange for reading this. Well I read it, now where is my friendship?

MSN!

I added j00, I give all my love through MSN!........I mean friendship.

 

[Morpheaus]

I suddenly feel very dirty...

 

[Phenomenon X]

His evil is a blessing compared to that of *shudder* ..........





Loughman.

 

[Roxas #13]

That was sweet i liked that alot cant wait for the next one.