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Re: The Organization's Beginning
Well, you'd better!
I'm in crucial need of a new chapter, dammit! ><
Well, you'd better!
I'm in crucial need of a new chapter, dammit! ><
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Re: The Organization's Beginning
Ok, I'm so sorry guys, it's been too long! Here it is! Chapter 8!!!
Chapter 8: The Change
As the man faded away, a piece of paper floated towards them from where he previously stood. Dilan picked it up and read it. “Axel” ha said to the others.
“Same to you”, said Even jokingly.
“His name?” asked Xehanort.
“Yeah. Here”, said Dilan as he handed over the piece of paper.
“Oh. Wait, what’s this?” exclaimed Xehanort as he noticed something seemingly on the paper.
“It looks like a scroll… only the end of it though”, said Aeleus, as he poked it.
“Hmm… hold on!”
Xehanort had managed to pull out the scroll from the paper. As he began to unroll it, Ienzo let out a rather large gasp.
“Ienzo!” yelled out Aeleus and Even simultaneously.
But as Ienzo woke up, Dilan began to return to his former self. “Dilan! You ok?” said Xehanort as he saw Dilan hit the floor from behind the scroll.
“Yeah, but I feel… normal again”
“You look different too, yet you still look yourself…”
“Maybe it has to do with Ienzo waking up…”
“He awoke?” he exclaimed as he looked around to find Ienzo.
And there he was, looking happy as usual.
“Ienzo!”
“Huh? Oh, hey there!” said Ienzo in return, waving happily at Xehanort.
“Come on, we should get out of here” said Aeleus as he picked up Braig.
“Good idea, I’m starting to freeze in here!” exclaimed Ienzo.
“You need a hand?” asked Dilan.
“Please” said Ienzo with a large smile on his face.
So Dilan pulled him upright, and handed him one of his lances.
“Might as well put these to use, hey?” said Dilan, looking happy for the first time, as far as Ienzo knew.
“Where are they from?” asked Ienzo, tilting his head.
“Me” said Dilan bluntly.
“Oh… I must have missed a lot then!”
“Yeah, you only missed your beast chasing down Braig, then changing into a giant Heartless, then me changing and being able to control the wind, then this guy showing up and helping me take it down… So, you didn’t miss that much at all” he said with another large grin.
“Oh… Alright then! You pretty much summed it up I suppose?”
“Yeah, that’s about it”
And with that, they followed the others up the stairs, back to the laboratory. But they arrived to see Ansem standing in the lab with a very serious look on his face.
“Where have you all been?” he questioned.
“The manufactory” said all five in unison, just like at school.
“And why were you there?”
“Well, sir” started Xehanort” We heard a noise that came from there, so we went to investigate”
“You expect me to believe that nonsense? You have been gone for hours!”
“Well…umm…you see…”
They were all lost for words. Even started shuffling his feet around.
“Well? Wait… is… is that Braig?” said Ansem, looking at the body over Aeleus’ shoulder.
“He was knocked out before when…”
But this time Even was cut off by Ansem.
“How? Unless he fell down the stairs, there is no possible accidental way he could have been knocked out!”
“Well, it was my fault sir” said Braig groggily from under his coat.
“Was it now? Explain please”
“We were –“
As Braig began his sentence, the six began to shift around, but not on their own accord.
“What’s happening? said Ienzo at no one in particular.
“Who’s there? Ienzo?” said Dilan, trying very hard to see in the darkness around him.
“Dilan? Where are you?”
“I don’t know… Where’s everyone else?
“I’m here” said Braig.
“Ugh… Me too” said Even.
“Where’s Aeleus and Xehanort?” said Ienzo, worriedly.
“I…I don’t know… I’m more worried about where we are too…” said Braig.
“Yeah… Wait… I think we’ve been here before…” said Even.
“It does seem somewhat familiar…” said Dilan.
Then the darkness began to shift around in front of them, changing shape and colour.
“Where are we now? said Even, feeling queasy.
“I’m not… Is that a castle?” said Dilan, pointing at the large structure in the distance.
They hadn’t realised they were suspended in mid air until they felt their feet touch the ground in an alley.
“It’s pretty dark around here…” said Even, chuckling a little.
“Yeah… I think we should move, I can feel something coming…” said Dilan.
The “something” that was coming wasn’t anything of the good sort… Blood was due.
Ok, I'm so sorry guys, it's been too long! Here it is! Chapter 8!!!
Chapter 8: The Change
As the man faded away, a piece of paper floated towards them from where he previously stood. Dilan picked it up and read it. “Axel” ha said to the others.
“Same to you”, said Even jokingly.
“His name?” asked Xehanort.
“Yeah. Here”, said Dilan as he handed over the piece of paper.
“Oh. Wait, what’s this?” exclaimed Xehanort as he noticed something seemingly on the paper.
“It looks like a scroll… only the end of it though”, said Aeleus, as he poked it.
“Hmm… hold on!”
Xehanort had managed to pull out the scroll from the paper. As he began to unroll it, Ienzo let out a rather large gasp.
“Ienzo!” yelled out Aeleus and Even simultaneously.
But as Ienzo woke up, Dilan began to return to his former self. “Dilan! You ok?” said Xehanort as he saw Dilan hit the floor from behind the scroll.
“Yeah, but I feel… normal again”
“You look different too, yet you still look yourself…”
“Maybe it has to do with Ienzo waking up…”
“He awoke?” he exclaimed as he looked around to find Ienzo.
And there he was, looking happy as usual.
“Ienzo!”
“Huh? Oh, hey there!” said Ienzo in return, waving happily at Xehanort.
“Come on, we should get out of here” said Aeleus as he picked up Braig.
“Good idea, I’m starting to freeze in here!” exclaimed Ienzo.
“You need a hand?” asked Dilan.
“Please” said Ienzo with a large smile on his face.
So Dilan pulled him upright, and handed him one of his lances.
“Might as well put these to use, hey?” said Dilan, looking happy for the first time, as far as Ienzo knew.
“Where are they from?” asked Ienzo, tilting his head.
“Me” said Dilan bluntly.
“Oh… I must have missed a lot then!”
“Yeah, you only missed your beast chasing down Braig, then changing into a giant Heartless, then me changing and being able to control the wind, then this guy showing up and helping me take it down… So, you didn’t miss that much at all” he said with another large grin.
“Oh… Alright then! You pretty much summed it up I suppose?”
“Yeah, that’s about it”
And with that, they followed the others up the stairs, back to the laboratory. But they arrived to see Ansem standing in the lab with a very serious look on his face.
“Where have you all been?” he questioned.
“The manufactory” said all five in unison, just like at school.
“And why were you there?”
“Well, sir” started Xehanort” We heard a noise that came from there, so we went to investigate”
“You expect me to believe that nonsense? You have been gone for hours!”
“Well…umm…you see…”
They were all lost for words. Even started shuffling his feet around.
“Well? Wait… is… is that Braig?” said Ansem, looking at the body over Aeleus’ shoulder.
“He was knocked out before when…”
But this time Even was cut off by Ansem.
“How? Unless he fell down the stairs, there is no possible accidental way he could have been knocked out!”
“Well, it was my fault sir” said Braig groggily from under his coat.
“Was it now? Explain please”
“We were –“
As Braig began his sentence, the six began to shift around, but not on their own accord.
“What’s happening? said Ienzo at no one in particular.
“Who’s there? Ienzo?” said Dilan, trying very hard to see in the darkness around him.
“Dilan? Where are you?”
“I don’t know… Where’s everyone else?
“I’m here” said Braig.
“Ugh… Me too” said Even.
“Where’s Aeleus and Xehanort?” said Ienzo, worriedly.
“I…I don’t know… I’m more worried about where we are too…” said Braig.
“Yeah… Wait… I think we’ve been here before…” said Even.
“It does seem somewhat familiar…” said Dilan.
Then the darkness began to shift around in front of them, changing shape and colour.
“Where are we now? said Even, feeling queasy.
“I’m not… Is that a castle?” said Dilan, pointing at the large structure in the distance.
They hadn’t realised they were suspended in mid air until they felt their feet touch the ground in an alley.
“It’s pretty dark around here…” said Even, chuckling a little.
“Yeah… I think we should move, I can feel something coming…” said Dilan.
The “something” that was coming wasn’t anything of the good sort… Blood was due.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Woah...
Finally! I guess that wait was worth it, huh? Yet another good chapter, and another good cliffhanger.
I have a slight feeling of what this "something" may be...
Woah...
Finally! I guess that wait was worth it, huh? Yet another good chapter, and another good cliffhanger.
I have a slight feeling of what this "something" may be...
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Thgat was inter4esting to say the least.
Thgat was inter4esting to say the least.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Er... It's 8 P.M. where I'm at, so would it be up by the end of my today? Lol, if not I'll just read it tomorrow
Er... It's 8 P.M. where I'm at, so would it be up by the end of my today? Lol, if not I'll just read it tomorrow
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Re: The Organization's Beginning
Here it is! Chapter 9!
Chapter 9: Our Loss
Meanwhile, Aeleus and Xehanort were engulfed in the darkness.
“Aeleus, are you there? said Xehanort into the dark abyss.
“Yeah… How’d you know I was here?”
“I could hear the others, but they couldn’t hear me…”
“Oh… Are we inside a barrier or something?”
“I’m not sure…”
“I’m hungry… Where’s the exit around here? Or even better, the food court!”
“You and your stomach, honestly… Well wherever we are, it feels…”
“Familiar” said Dilan from the other side.
Then Xehanort’s side began to change, as Dilan’s side did.
“Oh great… Now what’s happening?” said Aeleus, grasping his stomach as Even did.
“Shh… I can hear something…”
“I can’t hear anythi… Is that a castle?” said Aeleus, as Dilan previously did.
“Hmm? Oh! I think it is…”
Then they began to descend, as the others did, except this time, they were set down in front of a large building.
“This looks…so familiar… Memory’s Skyscraper”
He was shocked by the sound of his own voice saying this, as he knew very well he had never known this place.
“Memory’s Skyscraper, huh? It’s big…”
“That’s why it’s called a skyscraper…”
“Oh yeah… Ehe heh heh… Should we go inside?”
“Hmm… alright then, come on”
And so they set out towards the looming tower. But as soon as they had set foot on the first step, Heartless began to rise from the dark.
“Not again…” said Aeleus, as he made a grab for his knife.
“They never leave us alone… You take the left side, I’ll take the right, ok?” said Xehanort, looking as though he was thinking very hard.
“Ok then, bring it on!”
So Aeleus ran around the group of Heartless and got into position.
“What’s the plan?” he yelled out.
“Approach them slowly, then both of us focus on one together!”
“Righto!”
And so they both began to walk in. as they did so, Aeleus tripped over the railing along one of the steps, and fell flat into the middle of the Heartless group.
“Aeleus!” Xehanort yelled as he began to run to him.
But as he was doing so, he was blocked by a group of Shadows, while the Soldiers and Neoshadows attacked Aeleus.
“Go Xehanort… save yourself!” Aeleus yelled out, as he tried to hit away the Soldier attacking him.
“No!”
Then Xehanort began to force his way through
“Go Xehanort! Now!”
“Never! I’m not leaving you behind”
He had gotten through the Shadows, but the Neoshadows were really fighting back. Just as he thought he was winning, one of the Neoshadows grabbed his knife. It pierced his chest right where his heart was placed. The next minute went incredibly slowly for Aeleus. He watched as Xehanort slowly fell onto his knees, then gasped “sorry” before he fell flat onto the steps of the skyscraper.
“No… no no! ARGH!!!”
Aeleus had gone berserk. He began violently swinging his knife at anything that moved within his vicinity. Then the Neoshadow that had stabbed Xehanort turned to Aeleus and stabbed him too, but only in his leg.
“Arrgh! That’s it!”
And with this battle cry, the earth below consumed him. He arose shortly after, but inside a shield of rock. The rocks shattered with the mighty blow of his tomahawk. Then he cried out “Earth! Allow me your bone shattering power!” , just as Dilan had done when he obtained his new power.
He then ran towards the group of Shadows, the earth rumbling beneath his steps. He then took a great leap upwards, with the earth following in his wake. His tomahawk drove it’s way into the ground below. It landed in the middle of the group, then forced out several ripples beneath it. It created a great circle of waves around him. It blew all the Heartless around him into the air. Then another figure leapt up over his head with lightning speed. As soon as it moved on from one to another, the previous one faded away. The ripple ended. So did the figure. It landed a fair distance from Aeleus, but with the blink of an eye it was right in front of him.
“Who are you?” Aeleus asked.
Here it is! Chapter 9!
Chapter 9: Our Loss
Meanwhile, Aeleus and Xehanort were engulfed in the darkness.
“Aeleus, are you there? said Xehanort into the dark abyss.
“Yeah… How’d you know I was here?”
“I could hear the others, but they couldn’t hear me…”
“Oh… Are we inside a barrier or something?”
“I’m not sure…”
“I’m hungry… Where’s the exit around here? Or even better, the food court!”
“You and your stomach, honestly… Well wherever we are, it feels…”
“Familiar” said Dilan from the other side.
Then Xehanort’s side began to change, as Dilan’s side did.
“Oh great… Now what’s happening?” said Aeleus, grasping his stomach as Even did.
“Shh… I can hear something…”
“I can’t hear anythi… Is that a castle?” said Aeleus, as Dilan previously did.
“Hmm? Oh! I think it is…”
Then they began to descend, as the others did, except this time, they were set down in front of a large building.
“This looks…so familiar… Memory’s Skyscraper”
He was shocked by the sound of his own voice saying this, as he knew very well he had never known this place.
“Memory’s Skyscraper, huh? It’s big…”
“That’s why it’s called a skyscraper…”
“Oh yeah… Ehe heh heh… Should we go inside?”
“Hmm… alright then, come on”
And so they set out towards the looming tower. But as soon as they had set foot on the first step, Heartless began to rise from the dark.
“Not again…” said Aeleus, as he made a grab for his knife.
“They never leave us alone… You take the left side, I’ll take the right, ok?” said Xehanort, looking as though he was thinking very hard.
“Ok then, bring it on!”
So Aeleus ran around the group of Heartless and got into position.
“What’s the plan?” he yelled out.
“Approach them slowly, then both of us focus on one together!”
“Righto!”
And so they both began to walk in. as they did so, Aeleus tripped over the railing along one of the steps, and fell flat into the middle of the Heartless group.
“Aeleus!” Xehanort yelled as he began to run to him.
But as he was doing so, he was blocked by a group of Shadows, while the Soldiers and Neoshadows attacked Aeleus.
“Go Xehanort… save yourself!” Aeleus yelled out, as he tried to hit away the Soldier attacking him.
“No!”
Then Xehanort began to force his way through
“Go Xehanort! Now!”
“Never! I’m not leaving you behind”
He had gotten through the Shadows, but the Neoshadows were really fighting back. Just as he thought he was winning, one of the Neoshadows grabbed his knife. It pierced his chest right where his heart was placed. The next minute went incredibly slowly for Aeleus. He watched as Xehanort slowly fell onto his knees, then gasped “sorry” before he fell flat onto the steps of the skyscraper.
“No… no no! ARGH!!!”
Aeleus had gone berserk. He began violently swinging his knife at anything that moved within his vicinity. Then the Neoshadow that had stabbed Xehanort turned to Aeleus and stabbed him too, but only in his leg.
“Arrgh! That’s it!”
And with this battle cry, the earth below consumed him. He arose shortly after, but inside a shield of rock. The rocks shattered with the mighty blow of his tomahawk. Then he cried out “Earth! Allow me your bone shattering power!” , just as Dilan had done when he obtained his new power.
He then ran towards the group of Shadows, the earth rumbling beneath his steps. He then took a great leap upwards, with the earth following in his wake. His tomahawk drove it’s way into the ground below. It landed in the middle of the group, then forced out several ripples beneath it. It created a great circle of waves around him. It blew all the Heartless around him into the air. Then another figure leapt up over his head with lightning speed. As soon as it moved on from one to another, the previous one faded away. The ripple ended. So did the figure. It landed a fair distance from Aeleus, but with the blink of an eye it was right in front of him.
“Who are you?” Aeleus asked.
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