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Gildragon

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[Gildragon]
[Anomaly (work in progress...title may change)
[Sunday/ Feb 24/ 08
[1..but it sreally just a section of a speech]
[02/27/08]
My new Sci-Fi work in progress story:
Anamoly (work in progress)

All that is there right now is basically a character talkign to the hero of the story about the enemy he will face. with some lies mixed in (oops I gave away too much) It takes place in the middle of the story.

this is also my first fic written here.
 

bizness86

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an older KH universe fic that I regrettably retired from

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[Shines One Year After: Act 1]
[01/01/06]
[3 chapters]
[06/01/07]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fiction/101624-shines-one-year-after-act-1-a.html]

Inspired by my first RP/dungeon master experience. Introduces an ensemble cast inspired by follow roleplayers. Even as a year passes after the events of Kingdom Hearts 2, the universe shines in more brightly with promise!
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EDIT: The link works now
 
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bizness86

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[Shines One Year After]
[11 chapters]
[03/13/08]


http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...r-act-1-a.html

The Merriment of Reunions
O'aka XXIII has just some actual worth! Now, for some reason, Java has to make sure that O'aka capitalizes on his newly-discovered gift. To help in this, Java seeks the advice of some old Traverse Town friends.
 
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Mason Stark

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[Pieces of Heart]
[6 chapters]
[03/15/08]
[Traverse Town feels a little different now, doesn't it? Maybe all of this is more enigmatic now...]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fiction/99967-pieces-heart.html]

Would anyone mind posting some criticism if you read this? Mainly on stuff like grammar, how I could condense the chapters length, dialouge or even character development.
 

bizness86

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[Shines One Year After: Act 1]
[13 chapters]
[03/16/08]

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fiction/101624-shines-one-year-after-act-1-a.html

Here; I'll try to give summaries of all of the chapters so far...which will probably be added to SOTA Jiminy's Journal
I need feedback peoples!



Chapter 1, Shallow Whispers
Voices plot the fate of worlds. But which voices decide this fate?

Chapter 2, Fend Against the Dark Assailant
The crismon-haired warrior is expelled from the black mouth of the sky. Guided by his jaded sense of righteousness, will he find a direction in seeking his ultimate self-redemption in an enigmatic guide?

Chapter 3, To Traverse Dreams
The worlds celebrate the dawning of a new era! With the development of the Travel System, everything becomes all the more easier. This is truly what dreams are made of!Leaving your troubles behind and starting anew are now simple tasks, but what cons does this developing giant bring?

Chapter 4, Embarking with Wings of Silver
Leaving your troubles behind and starting anew are now simple tasks, but what cons does this developing giant bring, and who are the people handling their problems these days?

Chapter 5, "What's Your Hurry Young Lady?" Lost in Digression
Sebrea is on a mission; investigation is its name. Now, if she can work double shift at the Goods Shop and manage to keep Pinnochio out of trouble at Geppetto's Java, then maybe she could squeeze in, say, five minutes to investigate.

Chapter 6, "What's Your Hurry Young Lady?" The Geeky Rebel
Gabrianna can definitely take care of herself. Traverse Town is only a mere stepping stone on the path of the Gabs. Come see why she is the self-proclaimed "Geeky Rebel".

Chapter 7, Seek Refuge or End the Seek
J and a kindred spirit share their revelations on the world and its darkness, as well as the apathy of the people. How long should refugees be refugees?

Chapter 8, Welcome to O'aka's
Traverse Town is terrorized by a troublesome merchant. What's new? This merchant is like all of the other merchants times five! Perhaps J can work some Coffee Magic and handle the fool peddler...

Chapter 9, 'Following Your Heart' Type Deal
O'aka seems to be a lost cause, but J intends to get to the 'heart' of the matter.

Chapter 10, The Waning Twinkle in the Sky
A new character surfaces from the world of Darkness. Join him as he delves a little into the nature of the Heartless and the Will of Darkness.

Chapter 11, The Merriment of Reunions
O'aka XXIII has just shown some actual worth! Now, for some reason, Java has to make sure that O'aka capitalizes on his newly-discovered gift. To help in this, Java seeks the advice of some old Traverse Town friends.

Chapter 12, Pioneers of a Brave New World
Java and O'aka XXIII meet some prestigious acquaintances in Grand Ambassador Scrooge and company. Java also gives his all to keep O'aka from making a fool of himself.

Chapter 13, Tendency to Ruffle Feathers
O'aka does have a tendency to ruffle feathers...And Scrooge's nephew doesn't like it! J is caught in the midst...again.
 
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