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Wizard of Castle oblivion... I finally see where this is going.
Nice story though. It's really got some good things going for it. Just a couple critiques:
* Use seperate pargraphs for each new speaker. It's much easier to follow in this way.
* Use spell check in a word processor. Some words are misspelled here and there.
Other than these two, the story is really good. Keep up the wonderful job!
I like this fanfic, its good and funny as well. LMAO...Roxas hitting on Kairi...kind of
I could help you out a bit and correct some spellings and sentences a bit if you want...PM me back a reply please.