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Fanfiction ► The Wizard of Castle Oblivion



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Hmm... seems somewhat interesting. To make a better review, I shall await more chapters.

It wasn't bad at all, though.
 

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(Delete for God. :thumbsup: ! I don't remember writting most of this. . .)
 
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nice chapter i like it is riku going to come out
oh and onother suggestion can riku have a girlfriend named haruhi and sora is jelus /p.s:that was not my suggestion my cousin made me do this/XD
 

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Thanks for reading. I'll have a new chapter up tomorrow! ^_^

Oh, and "shadow_heartless", This is NOT that kind of a story...

I thought that the name of this story made it oveous, but I guess not. -_-

It's not a lovey dovey kind of thing. just you wait. it's gonna be GOOD!!! ^_^

Edit: sorry guies, the next chapter will be today. (I didn't have time to post it up yesterday. agin, sorry...)
 
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Wizard of Castle oblivion... I finally see where this is going.

Nice story though. It's really got some good things going for it. Just a couple critiques:
* Use seperate pargraphs for each new speaker. It's much easier to follow in this way.
* Use spell check in a word processor. Some words are misspelled here and there.

Other than these two, the story is really good. Keep up the wonderful job!
 

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Thanks guys, I do use spell check. But for some reason, it dose not pick up on all the words I missed spelled and and many other problems...

thanks for the tips! ^_^
 

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Sorry for the all the posting but, what did you guies think of the chapter?
 

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Yay! Roxas!...but he got beat up...

I like this fanfic, its good and funny as well.
LMAO...Roxas hitting on Kairi...kind of
I could help you out a bit and correct some spellings and sentences a bit if you want...PM me back a reply please.
 

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Sorry for the delay. untill I can put a ne chapter up, Keep the "post" alive ^_^!

I need to get to wrighting...(typing)
 

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Uuuuuh, yeah...

The next chapter will be better.

How ever, There will not be a huge delay like last time.

So, hang on tight!

I have to get typing my new chapter.
 
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