Lol, I mainly did that because in English, we're doing synonyms and crap, so I having fun replacing boring words with fuuuun ones! =DBHKiller said:GOLDY!!!! WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!?!?!?!
That was great! However, I must say, it does seem you tried a tad bit too hard too use "sophisticated" words if you will
Anywho, I posted that part because it was the only part I liked. It was the beginning of the chappy. After that, I felt like everything went haywire.
I don't know. For now, consider this fic pretty much over.
Maybe I'll pick it up later. Who knows?
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