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Fanfiction ► **{Twilight Dreams}**

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I decided to make a fan fic. Yay, it's my first! I hopes you like it!

~*~Chapter 1~*~

It was turning to dusk in Twilight Town. Xehanem was pacing the streets. He was so anxious his fingers were trembling a little.
Then, a portal appeared in front of him. A hooded figure stood there, beckoning him forward. He walked cautiously towards the portal. The figure pushed him into it. He felt like he was whirling into nothingness. There was total darkness for a few moments, then a blinding light came cascading down from somewhere above their heads.
"Naminé will show you to your room." Came a deep voice from the figure.
A blonde haired girl emerged from a doorway. She walked along the corridor. Xehanem followed. He was breathing heavily as he made his way through winding corridors, Naminé leading. Then she stopped. "Here." She said.
They were in front of a door with a faded number on it. Xehanem opened the door, to find a blue-white room. A table stood in the middle of it, with four chairs. A bed was in the corner, by the window. A picture was on the wall, it was of a heart-shaped moon. Xehanem sat down on the bed. A book was lying shut at the end of the bed.
He was just about to open it, when a tall, hooded figure walked in.
"Oops. Hey, I'm Axel. You new? What's that you're reading?"
"Um hi. New to what?" Xehanem replied.
"Oh. You don't know. Hehe, forget I said anything. You just wait here." And as he said that, he left.
Xehanem was confused. He wanted to know exactly what he was new to. He didn't understand things here. He kind of knew he was waiting for SOMETHING, but he just didn't know what. He sighed and went back to the book. It had a boy on the cover. He looked around 14-15 years of age. He was looking up at the starry sky. He was sitting next to a little bear, who was also looking at the sky.
The boy looked familiar to him. He didn't know why. Maybe these things just happened.
"Xehanem to the Library!" Boomed a loud voice from some hidden speakers.
Xehanem got up and rushed out of the room. He ran down twisting staircases, almost falling down them. Finally, he got to a room with the faded word; 'Library' written upon the door.
He went in without knocking. A man was standing near a window, in a black and white cloak. "Ah, Xehanem. There you are! Sit."
Xehanem sat down on a chair. Looking around and marvelling at the millions of books surrounding him.
"Please, explain things to me. I need to know what's going on!" Xehanem's voice was full of anxiety.
"I will explain later. I need to show you something. Come here."
Xehanem came over to the window, and saw the same heart-shaped moon as in the picture in his room.
"That...is Kingdom Hearts. Beyond that lies the Door to Darkness. It is closed at the moment. We need to open it."
"But...why?" Asked Xehanem.
"Because...we need to control the Darkness and use it to our advantage." The man smiled slyly. "You will find out more later."

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And that's what I got so far! Hope you liked it! It's MY version of KH3 ^^
Comment on it! Critisize it! I don't mind.
 
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Here comes chappy no.2!

~*~Chapter 2~*~ -Part One

Xehanem paused. "Darkness? Um...Why Darkness? Why not Light?"
"Because...Light almost destroyed us. All of us. Well, there are only a few of us left." Replied the man.
"A few of us? Who's us?"
"Organization XIII"
Xehanem thought. He had definitely heard of these people before. He just wondered why they used Darkness instead of Light.
"Xehanem. I shall make you an offer. Join us..and you shall weild a great power. Don't join us....then.....Well, it won't be pretty. That is all I have to say. I'll let you ponder. Now go!" Said the man.
"But...what is your name?" Asked Xehanem.
"It is Xhort."
Xehanem left without hesitation. He strolled down corridors, past doors, and left the place. A portal appeared in front of him, and he walked straight into it. He was back in Twilight Town. A Struggle Battle was going on. It was between Roxas and Seifer. It looked like Roxas had won.
"And our struggle champion is......ROX- Oh, hang on, it looks like we have a new contestant!" the added quietly, "I know you've got no experience but do your best, son. Now what's your name?"
"...Xehanem." He replied.
"And our new contestant is.....XEHANEM!!"
The crowds were cheering, screaming and whistling, as Xehanem made his way onto the Struggle battle field.
"Play fair now, boys." Said the referee, as he gave them their weapons.
He blew his whistle and in an instant, Roxas attacked Xehanem. Orbs were dropping everywhere, and Xehanem picked them up and countered Roxas. More orbs fell. Excitement and tension was rising, as the boys became neck and neck. "One more orb!" Thought Xehanem. He hit Roxas and collected the last orbs, just as the referee blew his whistle.
"WE HAVE A NEW CHAMPION!! XEHANEM, EVERYBODY!" The crowd roared. The referee handed Xehanem the large trophy. Roxas gave Xehanem a weird look.
Just then, time stood still. It seemed as if Xehanem and Roxas were the only ones breathing.
"Hehe...That was good, for a rookie. I wonder what Sora's doing now..." Roxas muttered that bit quietly.
Xehanem's head started spinning. He thought he was dying, when he had a total black out.

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Part Two

"Kira! Caleb! Over here!" A boy of about 15 shouted to his friends.
"Hey Red!" They called in unison.
Kira and Caleb, were also 15.
Kira was shorter than Caleb by about 3cm. She had dark hair with one blonde streak. She had dark brown eyes, that people said you could get lost in. You couldn't tell what she was thinking. She was very smart, though. She wore a short, baby pink t-shirt with a hood and no sleeves, a short red skirt, and white shoes.
Caleb had black hair with a large blue streak. He was quite tall, but not as tall as Red. Caleb's eyes were a deep blue. He was almost always cheerful, but if you insulted him or hurt his feelings he would sulk for ages or throw a tantrum. He wore a black t-shirt which said on it; 'Eternal Pain'. He wore blue denim pants and black shoes.
Now, Red was the kind of guy that didn't like to be beaten. He was also part Goth, so he was really mysterious and kept to himself most of the time. But, since he met Kira and Caleb, he's cheered up a bit. He has blonde, spikey hair with red tips on the spikes. He wears a long-sleeved, white shirt, with a black, twisting pattern on the back of it. His eyes were so dark, they almost looked black. Black denim pants, and silver shoes.

These three had been friends since they were three years old. Kira had first met Caleb and Red when she accidentally ran into their secret den. It was the same place where Riku and Sora had their secret den. They all knew about Riku, Sora, and Kairi. They were all, supposedly related to each of them; Red and Riku, Caleb and Sora, and Kira and Kairi.
Life was always peaceful. Until one day...

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Yeah the Struggle part was totally random. I couldn't think of anything to put D:
 
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Nice, but try spacing the paragraphs, like when someone else starts talking. part 1 & 2 could of used more dialouge and part 1 needed some more detail. Other than that, awsome start.
 
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I think I'm gonna close my fic. It's not getting anywhere. I've started styping up a story anyways, so I'll post it on another thread.

x( Sowwi guys.
 
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