Were you listening? I missed that last part.

[C4E]

WiPs.
suggestions appreciated.

But.
I probably won't do anything with either of these for another week at least.

edit:
decided to go ahead and play with the second tag a little

 

[Eric]

I don't really like straight black for the first one, I'd say add a dark orange/red fill layer to bring it together a bit. And maybe a little c4d smudge or something catchy behind the text.

The second one feels really large but I can see that clipping it will only destroy composition, other than that it's looking good so far.

 

[C4E]

thanks for suggestions.

added a more final version of the second tag, but still wanna try something different with it.

 

[Davey]

Agree with Jaxx on the first one.

The second needs more foreground stuff, everythings sorta like, blending. Some cool looking C4Ds would probably look nice on it. Either that or some brighter stuff cause it's too dark.

OMG i just realized this was C4E. Haven't you been gone forever?

 

[Eric]

New version for the second is looking better but some parts seem a tad bit oversharpened

 

[C4E]

OMG i just realized this was C4E. Haven't you been gone forever?

Yea, been through some pretty stressful personal issues. I'll probably be disappearing again some time after december, but ima try and be more active while i can.

 

[Colours]

Agree with Jaxx on the first one.

I don't really like straight black for the first one, I'd say add a dark orange/red fill layer to bring it together a bit.

Same. Thus I would brighten up the first tag a bit and add some colours. Like Overlay, and a nice smudge couldn't hurt either.

 

[Eric]

Yea, been through some pretty stressful personal issues. I'll probably be disappearing again some time after december, but ima try and be more active while i can.

yessss

you should give us some more tuts too :3

 

[Sean]

Eh, i'll be the ball buster and say that the first looks pretty promising.

I actually like it more than the others so far.

 

[Enri]

I really dig the Cloud one, just the text is buggin' me.

 

[Kazuma]

The cloud tag looks better large, I'd add some clipping masks and do a foreground smudge on the dark parts to the bottom right.