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I wanted to add more recruits than Xion. So one of the other recruits could be Saix's sister.Make her Saix's younger sister. To better explain why he can't stand her.
There's about 5 in total and my initial pitch felt like a mystery. So it's good to have a few suspects that you could tease.
Edit- https://www.deviantart.com/vogelfreyh/art/Xelleon-chara-sheet-148591582
She would work better as Saix's sister.
I'd probably change Xion's personality to be more like Lumina's from FF13-3. It would help her stand out more and make her memorable as a character. People would be less willing to cut her now.
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