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(Because I'm paranoid about people stealing my stuff. =P)
(Because I'm paranoid about people stealing my stuff. =P)
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Her destination lay on the lowest floor—the darkest, most isolated room this place had to offer.
This line struck me as odd. The formatting makes me think you are describing the floor, yet the word "room" seems to indicate that the description belongs to the destination. It's nothing major, but it does sound a bit awkward.
As for the symbolism that you wanted people to find, the only thing I can think of is that these two characters are, in fact, to parts of the same person; and the logical self has been wrestling with the emotional self for years until she was finally able to suppress it completely (effectively killing it off).
anti-chamber.
I believe that the term is 'antechamber' or 'ante-chamber' or something of the sort.