I think the scan-lines is a little 2005 man, as a more modern aesthetic it just doesn't work like it used to lol.
Its a bit insane to say this, but there is literally only one single dark area and the effects to the right in the oversharpened foreground look like the pixels are being rezzed to death, and the colors got destroyed there, try easing up a bit with overkilling your sharpening because pixels are still pixels man. They get postarized xD.