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C4E

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Sorry for my absence.
had some personal problems.

anyway.
new.
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Cloud

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glad to see you back. although, i'm not overly fond of this, the background effects are very 'filter-ish' to me. i'm not feeling the scribbles. on the other hand, i do like the text.
 

Teiku 5

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the line/scribble used by his head and arm make said head and arm look out of focus or abnormal blurred at first glance. removing that would make it look better i think.

the text is hot though.
and i happen to like the background. but i would try to make it flow better (reduce contrast?) so that it looked more like water and would match the text.
 

Enri

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The lighting just needs to be brighter. Like maybe contrast, but just on the lights. I'm not sure, it just looks like it's supposed to be light, but isn't very bright.

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I really dig it though.
 
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